All Comments on 'Peppermint Patty'

Can't wait for part 2.

Your story had a great pace and kept me (and I'm sure other readers) interested and wanting more from these two siblings. Are you thinking about a sequel? This one holiday experience shouldn't be enough for them. Or me or your other readers.

I really loved this story.

this seemed way to rushed. she moved way to fast and he gave in way to easy. he was fighting it for so long that he would not accept it so fast and she said she was hinting but she pushed way to hard it would have scared him off. keep it atleast somewhat realistic and believable please what happened in two nights should have been spread out over weeks or months.

I want more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I hope there is a second part.

Definitely would like to see a sequel!

I think this is a great Christmas story. I'd like to have a Peppermint Patty of my own. Please tell us what happens the rest of the Christmas season between Patty and her brother. It's the best Christmas story of to-days postings for sure.

tastes GRRREEEEEAAAAAAT. TK U MLJ LV NV

Great story. More please and continue on from that point.

After the part about the first night when she used the candy cane on herself I was thinking u should have had her lick it, but then u did have her do that later and it made it even more amazing and amusing.

This is the kind of story that keeps me interested from start to finish, It was great thanks for your time and effort.

Great story great build up.

the story was really nice and it would have been better if u could have continued it.

Merry Xmas and to all a long sister fucking night

loved it

Great story!

Another gem! Great story!

One of the best stories of 2011.. I am now going to have to deal with its aftermath!! lol TY

Wow not only was the story hot, but also gave me ideas. Going to try the peppermint position (lol) this weekend. Seriously great story, by far my favorite!!!!!

You could make this into a novella! I hope you do! Great story! Maybe they'll get together for New Year's, and she'll find out she's pregnant by him for 2012!

By my count this story ended after day 2 of a 4 day weekend, is there going to be a sequel? Please say yes!

And well written. Real characters and a believable storyline, not to mention great sex. Well done.

Very well done!! The best I have read so far. Hope to see a sequel in the very near future....and I LOVE Peppermint!!

That was extremely well done. My favorites are when the sister seduces the brother. And you did it perfectly. Very hot.

Well structured story beautifully told. Genuine feelings and tremendous passion. Nicely done.

I'll never look at a candy cane the same way again

Great story. I have always dreamed of sucking a candy cane after it has been it a nice wet juicy pussy, or eating a cucumber after it has been in one. Please write more about them and there adventures.

.........and hot! It's always a pleasure to read a work of art. Great job!

p.s. I think an appropriate setting for a sequel would be Valentine's Day.

Hot Hot!!!!

More peppermint for new years perhaps.

I loved it! Very hot stuff, loved the moment they first kissed. It was amazing, and so was the very erotic sex. I totally want these two to become a couple and spend their lives with each other. Please tell us what happens on Christmas morning/day, and preferably for the rest of their lives together! ;)

I can almost taste the peppermint...

Thanks.

I can't believe this story is fantasy , it is so well written that I'm convinced that it really happened to you . Why not tell us where that first night led to . Thanks for the best story I've read in at least 5 years .

This is by far one of the best stories I've read here on LIterotica. Very articulate and very detailed without being overly descriptive. The pacing was absolutely perfect. The length was just right, and overall, I gave you a 5!!

Just wanted to take a moment to say thank you to anyone I might have missed in replying to comments, and to all the anonymous readers as well. All the votes, favorites, and comments are flattering, and certainly encouraging!

I don't read a lot of the stories in incest/taboo. I tend to use these stories as a kind of literary palate cleanser to break up the usual heading I like ( loving wives). That being said, if I saw more of this I would be here more often!

This story was not only VERY erotic, but was extremely well written as well. The mental image of the sister satisfying herself with the peppermint stick was quite arousing and the sex scenes were stimulating without being overbearing or too fantastic. The idea that these siblings cared for each other deeply outside the sexual desire was also a strong undercurrent in the story.

I considered this an outstanding effort and I look forward to more of your work.

This has to be one of the Hottest Sis/Bro stories I have read. Really erotic. Great work. Love your writing style. Look forward to more.

Great storyline and well written. Liked the candy cane touch....... Agree with some other comments in that you should continue with what happened after this night.

Thank you! Merry Christmas!

A brilliant story!

To the anonymous user who said this was too rushed, what story were you reading?!

It was well written, believable and a great story.

Amazing story look forward to another one

This was great! Very hot! Well written! I can't wait to read more. Hopefully there's a part two to this...

I absolutely loved this. I was bone hard from the first sentence. Keep 'em cumming please.

It is nice, almost CHASTE in a certain way. No sleaze, just friendship and fulfilment...

Awesome story, hope to be reading more about these two. It wasn't rushed and it wasn't dragged out either...it was just right. Please add another chapter or two, you at least still have New Years as well.

It was romantic, yet raunchy. I loved it. Thank you.

Finally a well writen, perfectly paced story that I couldn't set down. Very nice, thanx....I agree with the others, can't wait to read more..Merry Xmas to all, and Peace to the World

story was really nice.

Sequel please

This was one of the best storys that I have read on this site.

bravo! short but intense. Major kudos on making such a passionate and loving story in such low word limit. made me quiver with desire!

Standing ovation. that was a beautifully written story. An sequel, i think, would be in order.

A well written story and the sex was was written. Only a couple small things kept it from being fantastic but still much better than most. pls keep writing

You have such talent as a writer, the build up top the climax was magnificent (no pun intend), I hope you continue writing, you can consider me a fan!

That is true love. You can never love anyone like the one who you first shared your body with. Virginity is life-binding. It is also true love.

is not even close to being one.

I don't get this fascination with virginity. Most people's first times are awkward at best, awful at worst.

I had a girlfriend that did the peppermine stick thing with me and that made her tast so goood.The tingles were so nice too.I owlnly wished it was my sister.I have dreamed of this type of thimg to happen for years.

this was NOT GREAT not even close to great. it was way to rushed as said by the one honest commenter and should have been spread out over months not to mention the yeast infection and cuts she would probably get from using the candy cane in her pussy.

My public comment board is open to anyone, as the previous negative comment and yours demonstrate. You're welcome to your opinion, and welcome to voice it, just like anyone else.

Feel free to believe the comments don't come from honest readers, if that helps you sleep at night. I'm sleeping just fine, knowing that everyone has a chance to speak up, and the overwhelming majority seem to differ with your opinion.

Have a pleasant turkey day :)

Oh, my, God, your comment is sooooo BORING!!!!! Hey, I'll bet you're one of those FUCKWITS who trolls websites, forums and bloggs, hoping to be the first loser to comment "fake"! Hehehehehehe.

Loser.

To the author, top story dude, I'm looking at all your stories now. Cheers!

Neat idea and hot scenes throughout. Would rate a 9 ona 10-point system pacing was a lttle off for my "taste." Overall, well done.CONGRATULATIONS

pretty good, nice, hot, entertaining, drew the reader in (and turned them on)

That brings back memories.

I think the title says it all. I loved this story. Two thumbs up!

will never look at candy canes the same again.

Great story had me stiff all the way keep it up...

I absolutely adored this little story; thought the pacing was quite excellent. Patty took advantage of the error in reservations, and worked with the opportunity when it presented itself. She told her brother that she'd been trying to get his attention for awhile & he'd been fighting to control himself as well. They seemed to genuinely care for each other, not just a romp in the sack.

I was also hoping for "sequels", many to be honest, because in my "minds eye" I could see a very long future between them, plus of course the holidays weren't over yet.... DKP

what happened to "Hot Tub Sex" ??? DKP 8~)

Yes I have a stong desire to find me a large pepermint stick. Good. Would love to see more of them.

Great story, Patty knew her brother was perving on her, but she was doing the same.

Wow, when Patty offered him a lick of that candy cane, I would have sucked the cum off it and said, this tastes like pussy. Can I have more, look what a hard on it gave me. Then fucked her silly. But he did that anyway. Great story

But, she still didn't get a mouthful of her brothers cum. She really needs to swallow his cum load.

This is the first I ever heard of you but I'm glad i have your name now. I was reading a story by one of my favorite authors, Xarth, and found your name/story on his list of favorites. I reasoned that his favorites had to be good and I was right. Your story has now made MY list of favorites. I so love Incest/Taboo brother and sister love stories and I now have to find a way to clean my cum from my keyboard. I gave it a 5 and it deserves much more.

..I was rock hard through the whole shower. The temptation to jerk off was incredible, but I was worried about her hearing me.

@@@ You're in the SHOWER!!! What the fuck is she going to hear?! Just dont jack off under the water. ...and SO WHAT if she hears! What is she going to say? If anything it gives you a great opening! Personally I would have started jacking off last night, once she threw the covers off all bets were off, lol! She was hoping you would see, otherwise she would have left the covers on or went to the bathroom. ...so you'll jack off in the bathroom in the dead of the night with no cove noise but wont in the shower?! PLOT HOLE!!! Lol.

AND YOU DIDNT LICK THE PEPPERMINT WHEN SHE TOOK A SHOWER!! Idiot! ...or sniff her dirty panties from last night, no doubt soaked! @@@

I had at least been smart enough to put on a pair of sweats this time, so my dick wasn't straining against a zipper.

@@@ WAITAMINUTE!!! Are you telling me that Lame Assed Pussy Wanker Loser ACTUALLY went to sleep last night with his fucking JEANS ON?!? Fucking WHY?!! And now warmups?! WHY?? Gawd this is pathetic! Written like hes a twelve year old wanker! I just dont understand, I mean, who would really DO that?? Even a total loser would at least wear pajamas, even if he waited till the lights were out to put them on!

I lay down, wondering if I shouldn't just go to the bathroom and let off the pressure. It might help put me to sleep, but I was worried about Patty realizing what I was doing.

yeah, mastrubation girl would never think you were going to the bathroom to use the bathroom, right? Lol.

"Nick. Nick, I know you're awake."

@@@ Gawd hes such a fucking pussy! Why oh why do people have to write them in like this?!

I'd always had to work a little to see a girl's clit, but my sister was different.

@@@ Oh please, this retard wouldnt know a clit if it had a LED attached to it! Mr. Bluejeans has never even touched a pussy much less licked one!

"Oh! Oh god, I'm gonna come!"

"Yeah, do it," I said in a rush as I watched her face flush red.

@@@ Well hell, rub her legs, play with her nipples, do something besides just laying there like a tard! Lol.

I gave a few pumps of my hips, every one making her yelp, squeal, or gasp. She looked like she was possessed, the way she wriggled and quaked. I reached up to grab her breasts, squeezing them while I kept humping up into her clenching pussy.

@@@ lol, finally!

I'd dozed off into a post-come coma by the time she returned.

@@@ Its weird, I NEVER do that! I can fuck for almost an hour, physically wreck my arms and still not be so sleepy that I nod off like they write in stories. Im always good for a cuddle and idle chatter ;)

Ive read this before, still love it and give it a five, even if I did feel the burning need to bitch about him being a total wanker! Lol ;)

Never cared for Candy but am re-thinking about how Good Pepermint just might be ; )

Need more chapters it could be longer

a very good description of their lovemaking and the emotions tied to that. Please keep going.

This is a playful fantasy, but a dangerous thing to try in real life. Actual candy in the vulva or vagina can lead to yeast infections, which and painful and inconvenient. Peppermint on either female or male genitals can be so intense as to feel like cold burns. DON'T try it.

is there a continuing saga here? or is that it? wham bam thank ya ma'am merry christmas? please continue there is more to this great story

My incest love was one of my Aunts. She would use a cucumber from our garden in her pussy and I would happily lick it clean and then she would chop it up and put it into the dinner salad that the whole family would eat during our big family dinners.!!!

I miss her so much. Thanks for a great read.