Peppermint Patty

Great story

Can't wait for part 2.

Great job!

Your story had a great pace and kept me (and I'm sure other readers) interested and wanting more from these two siblings. Are you thinking about a sequel? This one holiday experience shouldn't be enough for them. Or me or your other readers.

Fantastic!

I really loved this story.

rushed

this seemed way to rushed. she moved way to fast and he gave in way to easy. he was fighting it for so long that he would not accept it so fast and she said she was hinting but she pushed way to hard it would have scared him off. keep it atleast somewhat realistic and believable please what happened in two nights should have been spread out over weeks or months.

Awesome!

I want more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Very good

I hope there is a second part.

Loved it!

Definitely would like to see a sequel!

Perfect

I think this is a great Christmas story. I'd like to have a Peppermint Patty of my own. Please tell us what happens the rest of the Christmas season between Patty and her brother. It's the best Christmas story of to-days postings for sure.

PEPPERMINT FELLATIO

tastes GRRREEEEEAAAAAAT. TK U MLJ LV NV

Great

Great story. More please and continue on from that point.

good use of suspense

After the part about the first night when she used the candy cane on herself I was thinking u should have had her lick it, but then u did have her do that later and it made it even more amazing and amusing.

Great Story

This is the kind of story that keeps me interested from start to finish, It was great thanks for your time and effort.

great story

Great story great build up.

Nice

the story was really nice and it would have been better if u could have continued it.

Awesome

Merry Xmas and to all a long sister fucking night

Incredibly hot.

loved it

Merry Christmas indeed!

Great story!

Sweet!

Another gem! Great story!

GREAT!!

One of the best stories of 2011.. I am now going to have to deal with its aftermath!! lol TY

Yummy!!!

Wow not only was the story hot, but also gave me ideas. Going to try the peppermint position (lol) this weekend. Seriously great story, by far my favorite!!!!!

Another chapter or ten?! LOL!

You could make this into a novella! I hope you do! Great story! Maybe they'll get together for New Year's, and she'll find out she's pregnant by him for 2012!

Sequel?

By my count this story ended after day 2 of a 4 day weekend, is there going to be a sequel? Please say yes!

Great story

And well written. Real characters and a believable storyline, not to mention great sex. Well done.

Excellent!!

Very well done!! The best I have read so far. Hope to see a sequel in the very near future....and I LOVE Peppermint!!

superb

That was extremely well done. My favorites are when the sister seduces the brother. And you did it perfectly. Very hot.

Loved it

Well structured story beautifully told. Genuine feelings and tremendous passion. Nicely done.

I'll never look at a candy cane the same way again

Loved IT

Great story. I have always dreamed of sucking a candy cane after it has been it a nice wet juicy pussy, or eating a cucumber after it has been in one. Please write more about them and there adventures.

Just plain great!

.........and hot! It's always a pleasure to read a work of art. Great job!
p.s. I think an appropriate setting for a sequel would be Valentine's Day.

Hot Hot!!!!
More peppermint for new years perhaps.

Excellent Story!

I loved it! Very hot stuff, loved the moment they first kissed. It was amazing, and so was the very erotic sex. I totally want these two to become a couple and spend their lives with each other. Please tell us what happens on Christmas morning/day, and preferably for the rest of their lives together! ;)

Hmmm

I can almost taste the peppermint...

Thanks.

WOW !!!!!!!!

I can't believe this story is fantasy , it is so well written that I'm convinced that it really happened to you . Why not tell us where that first night led to . Thanks for the best story I've read in at least 5 years .

Simply Wonderful!!

This is by far one of the best stories I've read here on LIterotica. Very articulate and very detailed without being overly descriptive. The pacing was absolutely perfect. The length was just right, and overall, I gave you a 5!!

Thanks!

Just wanted to take a moment to say thank you to anyone I might have missed in replying to comments, and to all the anonymous readers as well. All the votes, favorites, and comments are flattering, and certainly encouraging!

Dang!

I don't read a lot of the stories in incest/taboo. I tend to use these stories as a kind of literary palate cleanser to break up the usual heading I like ( loving wives). That being said, if I saw more of this I would be here more often!

This story was not only VERY erotic, but was extremely well written as well. The mental image of the sister satisfying herself with the peppermint stick was quite arousing and the sex scenes were stimulating without being overbearing or too fantastic. The idea that these siblings cared for each other deeply outside the sexual desire was also a strong undercurrent in the story.

I considered this an outstanding effort and I look forward to more of your work.

The Best

This has to be one of the Hottest Sis/Bro stories I have read. Really erotic. Great work. Love your writing style. Look forward to more.

SIMPLY AWESOME!

Great storyline and well written. Liked the candy cane touch....... Agree with some other comments in that you should continue with what happened after this night.

Soooo much fun to read!

Thank you! Merry Christmas!

Simply awesome.

A brilliant story!

To the anonymous user who said this was too rushed, what story were you reading?!
It was well written, believable and a great story.

Amazing story look forward to another one

Minty

This was great! Very hot! Well written! I can't wait to read more. Hopefully there's a part two to this...

That was delicious

I absolutely loved this. I was bone hard from the first sentence. Keep 'em cumming please.

Why is this so good...?

It is nice, almost CHASTE in a certain way. No sleaze, just friendship and fulfilment...

More!!!

Awesome story, hope to be reading more about these two. It wasn't rushed and it wasn't dragged out either...it was just right. Please add another chapter or two, you at least still have New Years as well.

It was romantic, yet raunchy. I loved it. Thank you.

FINALLY hehehe

Finally a well writen, perfectly paced story that I couldn't set down. Very nice, thanx....I agree with the others, can't wait to read more..Merry Xmas to all, and Peace to the World

+

story was really nice.

great

Sequel please

Good Story

This was one of the best storys that I have read on this site.