All Comments on 'Relations'

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OldKingClancyOldKingClancyover 12 years ago
Good Story But...

I did like this story, short and hot. But the sisters seemed to go from 'I hate you' to 'I want to fuck you' with no explanation. Maybe a second chapter to explain thing? Regardless it's still a good read.

AnomolousCowherdAnomolousCowherdover 12 years ago
Would have been better with longer build up

I too would like a transition from murderous relations to incestuous relations, particularly since it is told through the eyes of a third person. Maybe if we'd be in on one of their internal dialog or even a fly on the wall while they were getting closer?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Disappointing

Yet another long two girls and a boy fuckfest. And a lazy introduction as well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Wordage

Using sex for pussy. Really? Are you 2?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
What the....

1. Sex for pussy wtf

2. This is a lesbian colum dont want guys.

3. Went from slit your to bitch fuck me

4. To short this guy is a minute man

5. WHY THE FUCK DID YOU USE SEX FOR PUSSY!!!!!!!!!!!

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