The Universal Code

good start

It looks to be just like masterPC

too short

incentive for revenge but too short

Let's see where this goes.

The one comment says "It looks to be just like masterPC" it has similarities so MasterPC'ish yeah but it has good content. I look forward to see where the author takes it. I also agree with the other comment it is way to short, but nice cliff hanger.

Thank you to everyone

Hey guys, thanks for your comments.

I did get the idea for this from Master PC, but im trying to get away from that by adding newer things into it. Also its short because i found that everything from then onwards, theres no good spot to end the chapter. I try to have a new chapter up every week or two if possible. So with time, it will get longer.

Terrible!

This story really SUCKED big time. -0

Great

Great story, i loved it.

good idea for a story but it requires more chapters to be a great story

I liked your story.

Now, let's have some good revenge, really good revenge. Thank you for writing.

:-(

Would have been a great story.