Hypnotising Cara

Good story

I enjoyed your story but you could use an editor. There weren't many errors but all it takes is a few to distract from the story.

Errors

Sorry, I thought I had caught them all. If anyone wants to volunteer to proof read the sequel for me though then let me know. Hopefully it should be ready in the next few days.

Also thank you to everyone who has sent feedback.

More please

Good story telling. Yes there were about half a dozen typos that a spell checker would not pick up because they were real words, just not the right ones, but it didn't spoil it for me as the story line worked and flowed so well.Keep writing!

Loved your story. Will there be a follow up to this one? I would like to read how Cara has her evil ways with Dylan. I do not worry so much about spelling and grammar as I do reading a good sory. Thank you.