There was a "gap" in the story; what happened? Otherwise, well written and just the right length for a coffee break
Yeah, there was a gap in the story, all right. Nice job.
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There was a "gap" in the story; what happened?
Otherwise, well written and just the right length for a coffee break
Whew...took my breath away!
Yeah, there was a gap in the story, all right. Nice job.
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