by tompayne1809
your story has gotten me up and going and I cant wait to see part 2. Very well written and I can visualize the women and pictures in my mind.
pace is perfect. looking forward to a long run on this story, great potential. thanks much for your efforts. 5 stars.
max052
Good start. Looking forward to more. Would really like to read about a pussy grooming session of Mrs.Maddison by Jim - Jim could shave her pussy, or take her to his barber to shave it.
I like where this is going, even if you are teasing us! Now hurry up and write the next one! (please!)
A very good start that interests me to find where the story is going.
Is it that the twins are fucking their mother, or is Jim going to have a go at his mother the reason that this story in the incest genre?
Either scenario will be well worth the read.
Thanks for the start.
Good story! Nicely build up, not going to fast and leaving us in suspence for part 2!
this gives the impression of a family fuckfest and the party is his being brought into a swingers group
Keep going....longer next time.....and we haven't even met Alison yet ! ! !
holy crap this is the best story every i cant wait for the rest of this party!!!!!!!!!!!
Well was I disappointed to see this little tale of a horny little fucker wanting to fuck ,Mrs Madison end with only one chapter...I'm a detail man and I liked this prick starter..
Would love to see Mrs Madison smoke cigarettes {my fetish} let's get the boy sucked and laid.. Maybe spew his nut on the dining-room table.
excellent with big tits and facials. It seems no continuation is ever due....
Good story but one doubtful fact. Female olympic athlete hurdlers do not have big breasts. In fact most of them don't have any
Good opening gambit. To the unitiated, e.g., Jim, a nonstandard life style can be quite confussing and depending on the lack of self-awareness, self-confidence, maturity and/or ego can be frightening.