Sisterhood Ch. 04

No demons but us.

I like it. I had a feeling they were testing her as an initiate from the very beginning and it seems they also knew about Juarinnia and what she did beforehand. I'd like to read more, especially about the training she will undergo.

Best yet!

I'm in, hook line and sinker. :)

When does the book come out?

The Rituals end

I hate to be the one who has to keep her far from the other male drow, because she will be extra vicious.

I would like to read more

about her becoming a Red Sister too.

I knew the whole time they had a purpose and that they wanted her to be strong and succeed. Now I want to know if she will get her revenge on the male drows and become as powerful as she hopes.

Well done.

Nice

I would have been shocked had she not been initiated. In fact it probably would have made you a bad writer, as there was sufficient foreshadowing to indicate that she would be. I'm very interested to read the rest of this story, once it comes into existence. I've got a soft spot for the Drow, stemming from my reading of the stories about Drizzt Do'Urden, so it was nice to return to the Underdark.

My only question is how the sister died. I don't know if I missed it, but I kept waiting for both her fear and her cause of death, which are probably the same thing, to be revealed, and to the best of my knowledge it never was. Does that come later, is it intentionally left ambiguous, or did I miss something?

*scratches chin* How Juarinia died...I intentionally left that unsaid mostly to underscore the secrecy a lot of Drow try to keep, even in their own minds, considering Sirana fully believed that would've gotten her either executed or turned into a Drider (she knew she was barren and Kaltra was fucked in the head, but she'd killed the oldest daughter---as the Priestess said, she'd crippled her House and it was done with full intent and forethought).

I'd hoped it wasn't a deal-breaker for the reader in that they could see her still giggling about it with self-satisfaction but "neglecting" (ha) to give up the details of how she'd done it.

Mostly I did that because it fit the character, so I never intended to say (though I wasn't trying to be an ass, either). I will have to see if it becomes important in a later story arch, or if there's an appropriate place to drop it into the narrative. :)

Thank you very much for the feedback!

A satisfying climax

A fitting conclusion to a genuinely hot and well-written story by an author at the top of her game. You pushed all my buttons and touched all the bases while wrapping up a story that I enjoyed on many levels. I admire your skill at storytelling, as well as your ability to describe Sirana's ordeals. I will look forward to reading more from you, and hopefully we haven't heard the last of Sirana.

A truly fitting tale of how I always imagined the drow to be if written for adults. You have certainly left me wanting the rest of Sirana's story as well as several other characters that you have introduced. When you write a book I will buy it and beg for more. Thanks for a vivid look into into the underdark.

excellent story

I had some how missed that more chapters had post it was a very good story and i am looking forward to reading more form you

Normally I'm not not fond of 1st person but this story has been quite an intense tale, looking forward to reading more of your work :)

Superb

A great series, very imaginative. I look forward to reading the rest.

IDB.

As one

Who's read all of the Driz'zt Dourden novels, this is a masterful account of one who could well be his female counterpart. Thank you for a highly imaginative tale.

Interesting....

Have just found this story, I am looking forward to reading the rest. It is a very interest take on the Underworld.

Welcome,

... and continue as far as you care to. There are currently 450K words ahead for those who like really long stories. :) I had no idea what was coming when I first posted this...

LOVE IT!

450k? cant wait! keep writing so when those are done there's another lot to go =D

Thanks for sharing, truly =D

Well done!

Quite an entertaining and sexy story upon it's completion! I appreciate the attention to elements in line with the subject material even as the sex was pushed more and more to prominence. Drow have always been some of my favorite characters and lore from fantasy works so it's really gratifying to not only read them but read them written quite well by someone who obviously understands them. Definitely looking forward to continuing from here!

Accident

I came across this story by accident and found it an enthralling read ,and am looking forward to the sequels .

Nicely Done

This final chapter caused me to decide to read on. Good Work

Other than the fairly long exposition in the beginning, which could have been distributed more evenly through this series, this is grade-A erotic fantasy, a very rare example indeed. Your sex scenes were awesome, and I am not even normally a fan of BDSM.

The drow seem like they were almost designed for erotica. I think you've perfectly captured the psychology of the dark elves. Believe me, I am taking notes for my own work and I've learned a lot from this. I'm going to continue reading this.

One if the best

Easily one of the best reads I've had on this site. Very well done. My only complaint was that I was confused about which series to read first.

Wow...Hell on, well where ever

Limp-dicked the entire read. It must take some kind of sick fuck to get off on this shit.

@SplitAces: to each their own.

Everyone has their own cup of tea. One person may like the color blue, and another may like the color red. Both of these people have the right to their own preference. However, neither has the right to hate on the other because they don't share a preference.

No worries, Dark Pulse

It is all good. :-)

Hey, Split Aces. Yes, I do get off on power exchange stories like this one, that's why I wrote it. You enjoy power, too, from how I've seen you comment on other stories in Sci-Fi. Your reputation precedes you, but it is not a good one. I'm surprised you chose to read this one.

Imagine this, dear Sir. I make biannual clothing donations to the Vietnam Veterans of America and give regular food donations to the Boy Scouts and many of my local charities every winter, and my hubby and I participate in motorcycle riding events for charities and "make a wish" events. We support our community. Kind of a surprise, eh?

I assure you I am a productive member of society, and my fans are good people, too, I have conversed with many of them from all over the globe and they are normal people. Please do not make generalized statements insulting them simply because you do not understand the fantasy and likely have no background in the context from which the setting and much of its material is drawn. It makes you look both ignorant and toxic. A "sick fuck," if you will.

*SSWIISSHH*

That's the sound of Etaski catching your insult on the rebound and throwing it over her shoulder from far-court straight into your net.

Seriously though, SA; you've got INCEST stories in your list of favorites, GOD, what kind of SICK FUCK are you!?!?!?!?!111111!!!%@#^$%&$$&%(!!!


See? Sounds stupid, doesn't it? Who am I to judge YOU?
Goes both ways, genius.

Just because you don't like it doesn't mean you have to announce to the world how utterly depraved it is. (

Lack of Words

I, I don't really know what to say. I recently got into erotic writings such as this, and this one in particular, was nothing short of astounding. Today, I got on Literotica and decided that I'd check out the top rated stories. Your name occurred on the list quite frequently. I just had to try one of your stories. After reading "Sisterhood Ch. 01," I was hooked. I fear I'll not be able to read any other story on this website by any other author for it won't give me a pleasure anywhere near that of which this series gave me. 11/10. A++. Give yourself whatever grade from me you desire, you earned it with this one. Thank you for posting.

This is not your typical STAR TREK sci fi story....

I just began this series today and I see I have a long way to go. I'm really gonna have to up my data plan on my phone.

This is .... different, but in a good way. I'm curious enough to keep this up, however I will have to pace myself (I do have a job to keep) ;)

Ohhhh dear, did you start with my Star Trek story, Anon?

Funny thing about that story, it was written to fulfill the wish of a lovely young woman in Germany who couldn't find anything but Kirk/Spock slash fiction when she looked for Vulcan sex stories. :-) I hold the story very dear, but it is about as "classic" straight romance as I get and everything else...well... ;-)

You have my well wishes on your journey starting off on the "big one," I hope you enjoy it. It is different, yes. I absolutely support pacing yourself. Have fun. ^_^

Did I miss something?

Is there anything between Sisterhood Ch. 4 and Subterrane? It doesn't seem to be a perfectly smooth transition and a reference to 'mind-wrenching personal exposure I faced atop Lloth's altar' seems to imply there was more to read prior to Subterrane.

You're good

There is no other story between Sisterhood and Subterrane; the character falls unconscious at the end of Sisterhood and wakes up at the beginning of Subterrane. The character realizes she is in a completely different place with no instructions what to do next. Your quote is only referencing the final scene in Sisterhood.

Great Beginning

I am durprised by how much the view count dropped within just 4 chapters.
Sure, it is understandable that the first one has more clicks, but why do so many people stop once they've started?

Well, this question will remain unanswered I guess.

Anyway, I enjoyed the series so far. Your disclaimer at the beginning definitely came true :D

Please keep up your work!