All Comments on 'Iron Rain Redux'

sometimes they are strangers other time they might be in-laws, TK U MLJ LV NV

Very full of emotion,and well put together.

An excellent job in editing made for an enjoyable read..

Somewhat of a tearful story in parts,but quite enlightening, full of background information about the main characters.

Thanks for the read.

A great and subtle H.P. Lovecraft reference. Cthulhu ftagn!

Not bad, but let me give a small help.

A Russian man family name can not be Petrovna (that's for women only) - Petrov is the right form - just as a Russian woman cannot be called Ivanovo - only Ivanova, of

course.

Ivanovo don't even exist, for men it's Ivanov

Sorry to point it out

It you leave us hanging!!!!!!

WE WILL SIMPLY HUNT YOU DOWN,,,,,,,,,,,,,

And get the rest of this GREAT story out of you one way or the other!.

You've got us hooked.

ED

The Dragunov does NOT have a full-auto setting, and it's only a ten round magazine. Lousy weapon for fighting inside houses with. Replace it with an AK-74 and you're fine.

this about the complete story

we want MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

A damn good read definately makes you want to keep going!!! More more and more!!!

"brought back" or "redone"

It does NOT mean "prologue" or "background" or "what has gone before"

I will continue to tell you

YOU NEED A FUCKING EDITOR

badly

a lot of non sequiturs, TK U MLJ LV NV but as I previously noted,,,all novels should not be rated as a whole when all the chapters can be different, TK U MLJ LV NV

Well now, it's most certainly is the longest story I've read and despite the spellings and grammar, which I can forgive you being a Yank and all, dispute from all of everything, this has to be the very best story I have also read...thank you

Ancient Alien Theorist's drama, mostly 5⭐

Excellent story! Only negative is the lack of Literacy. Excellent imagination and ability to put to paper but Author needs to attend college level courses in linguistics and literature. 5 BIG FAT BLAZING STARS!