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The Agency - Focus on Mom Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by lpmich6612/18/11

erotic!

very erotic...looking forward to ch.02 and how his fantasy will come together....

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by digdaddyrich12/18/11

A little unusual but a good storyline

I hope that he does get to have sex with his mother in the upcoming chapter. If determination mean anything then he should succeed.

A nice job of writing and editing.

Thanks for the read

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by Anonymous12/18/11

niceeeee.....well done

Wow!! very nice. and well done. you did an excellent job as a new comer. great. first you have write a mother son story and second you have done it so hot attractive way. we the teen boys always have been fantasized about our mother that she could be a swimmer or actress or model, because mother is the closed female of us. good job, you must continue this. at next ch: you must show some hot anal sex between mom son and also spying on mother. mothers nudity is too important epacially her bare ass.

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by MrLurker12/18/11

Please don't go ruining this great beginning with,
That couple going the predictable blackmail and forced route...

It derails any chance at a romance aspect or happy ending.

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by venus_can12/18/11

Great Start

An interesting start than most of the incest stories at the Lit. I noticed that this is your first story - so welcome to the Lit and hope we see more stories from you,

Venus

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by Anonymous12/18/11

Interesting story

u have a good perspective but should try to stay realistic. Write about teasing and "accidental" flashing. u have alot to offer

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by 2275jr12/18/11

waiting to be taken by her son

brilliant first story., do hope its not long till the next hot horny part. brilliant writing love it from start to finish . the agency focus on mom part one was such a horny very erotic to read love it.

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by Scotchman195812/19/11

CHAPTER TWO...NOW!

LOL...patiently waiting for chapter two!

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the agency

great start but $2,500 is a lot of money!!!

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by wiscman4512/19/11

Good start to an interesting story.

Hello and welcome to Literotica. You have a nice start to your story and with a perspective that is interesting since you are a Mom writing about a son. Keep going with your writing and will look forward to more.

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by Anonymous12/19/11

good start

hope part 2 comes soon

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by dnnkink12/19/11

you have my interest!

looking forward to your next chapter!

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by mschack6312/20/11

Keep writing!!!!

Please don't listen to the selfish, self-centered MCBTWS. He is just an angry individual suffering from feelings of inadequacy looking for a target, trying to bring someone else down so he can feel better about his measly little life. His response is no way to encourage more writing from a new author. Keep writing!!!!

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by Anonymous12/21/11

Chapter two?

Looking forward to read Chapter 2

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