I hope that he does get to have sex with his mother in the upcoming chapter. If determination mean anything then he should succeed.
A nice job of writing and editing.
Thanks for the read
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Anonymous12/18/11
niceeeee.....well done
Wow!! very nice. and well done. you did an excellent job as a new comer. great. first you have write a mother son story and second you have done it so hot attractive way. we the teen boys always have been fantasized about our mother that she could be a swimmer or actress or model, because mother is the closed female of us. good job, you must continue this. at next ch: you must show some hot anal sex between mom son and also spying on mother. mothers nudity is too important epacially her bare ass.
An interesting start than most of the incest stories at the Lit. I noticed that this is your first story - so welcome to the Lit and hope we see more stories from you,
Venus
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Anonymous12/18/11
Interesting story
u have a good perspective but should try to stay realistic. Write about teasing and "accidental" flashing. u have alot to offer
brilliant first story., do hope its not long till the next hot horny part. brilliant writing love it from start to finish . the agency focus on mom part one was such a horny very erotic to read love it.
Hello and welcome to Literotica. You have a nice start to your story and with a perspective that is interesting since you are a Mom writing about a son. Keep going with your writing and will look forward to more.
Please don't listen to the selfish, self-centered MCBTWS. He is just an angry individual suffering from feelings of inadequacy looking for a target, trying to bring someone else down so he can feel better about his measly little life. His response is no way to encourage more writing from a new author. Keep writing!!!!
erotic!
very erotic...looking forward to ch.02 and how his fantasy will come together....
A little unusual but a good storyline
I hope that he does get to have sex with his mother in the upcoming chapter. If determination mean anything then he should succeed.
A nice job of writing and editing.
Thanks for the read
niceeeee.....well done
Wow!! very nice. and well done. you did an excellent job as a new comer. great. first you have write a mother son story and second you have done it so hot attractive way. we the teen boys always have been fantasized about our mother that she could be a swimmer or actress or model, because mother is the closed female of us. good job, you must continue this. at next ch: you must show some hot anal sex between mom son and also spying on mother. mothers nudity is too important epacially her bare ass.
Please don't go ruining this great beginning with,
That couple going the predictable blackmail and forced route...
It derails any chance at a romance aspect or happy ending.
Great Start
An interesting start than most of the incest stories at the Lit. I noticed that this is your first story - so welcome to the Lit and hope we see more stories from you,
Venus
Interesting story
u have a good perspective but should try to stay realistic. Write about teasing and "accidental" flashing. u have alot to offer
waiting to be taken by her son
brilliant first story., do hope its not long till the next hot horny part. brilliant writing love it from start to finish . the agency focus on mom part one was such a horny very erotic to read love it.
CHAPTER TWO...NOW!
LOL...patiently waiting for chapter two!
the agency
great start but $2,500 is a lot of money!!!
Good start to an interesting story.
Hello and welcome to Literotica. You have a nice start to your story and with a perspective that is interesting since you are a Mom writing about a son. Keep going with your writing and will look forward to more.
good start
hope part 2 comes soon
you have my interest!
looking forward to your next chapter!
Keep writing!!!!
Please don't listen to the selfish, self-centered MCBTWS. He is just an angry individual suffering from feelings of inadequacy looking for a target, trying to bring someone else down so he can feel better about his measly little life. His response is no way to encourage more writing from a new author. Keep writing!!!!
Chapter two?
Looking forward to read Chapter 2
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