All Comments on 'Bedroom Conversations Ch. 02'

by LynnGKS

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great story

Thanks for another great submission!! Keep up the great work!!

Bingo Boy

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Awsome story Lynn

Was looking forward to chapter 2 and its more than I expected.Awsome keep writing

Greig

m48gunnerm48gunnerover 12 years ago
Great Job....

I was wondering about when she would "get her ass in gear", seemed as if all they did was talk about Pam and Rusty. Good Story, fun and funny!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Part 2

A great second chapter to go with the first. Looking forward to the next chapter and all the bitches. :-)

fridayamfridayamover 12 years ago
Fabulous

and funny. A total delight

adgeonadgeonover 12 years ago
What a fun read

I utterly enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.

estragonestragonover 12 years ago
Great Sequel

Great series. Really believable dialogue. Love it. More!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
excellent

twisted, strange, and very very FUNNY. Being a guy, I can sure identify.

SLOgentSLOgentover 12 years ago
LOL

A total delight to read. Many, many LOLs. Any man experienced in "pillow talk" can identify with the poor husband.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
X'mas joy

Timely x'mas present, a good writer with an equally good sense of humour, will keep me smiling till x'mas.

hardcoreliteraryhardcoreliteraryover 11 years ago
Too short...

...but otherwise a great addition to the story. As sharply observed, as funny and as entertaining as the first part.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
classic

*****

MajorRewriteMajorRewriteabout 8 years ago
5 stars

This series is pure entertainment. Lots of amusing stuff and a few laugh-out-loud lines too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Some People are Alive Only Because it's a Crime to Kill Them

If she were real, Peggy would be at the top of my hit list.

1Star, since I can't give you negative 1000.

StubbyoneStubbyonealmost 6 years ago
Funny as hell !!

I loved it. Very clever, the scenes in bed and the intimate conversations between husband & wife. Every successful marriage is all about communication and not keeping secrets. These conversations were a blast and probably not far from the truth. An easy 5. 😊😊😊😊😊

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Still a great story. A comedic soap opera.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Hit the nail on the head

Great job

Anonymous
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