It's been a year since the last installment of the series, please continue as soon as you can!
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Anonymous12/29/11
AHH
OH GOD, by far one of the best stories I've ever read on Literotica, eagerly awaiting the rest
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Anonymous03/09/12
Oh my god
So frickin good! Best story on here by far!! Please don't make us wait to see what happens!!
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Anonymous03/31/12
dumb
if he marries anyone but his cousin both you and he are stupid adding the newyork skank ruined the whole incest thing. if he really loved his cousin he never would have even looked at the new yorker get it back on track or delete it
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Anonymous04/26/12
Don't listen to the last one!
That last comment is dead wrong! Jenna is awesome and I love her character! She's just like him which is why they work so well. For Denise it's always been a physical attraction, his perversions just fed into his lust for her. I LOVE JENNA!!! KEEP HER IN THE STORY!!!
I can't wait to read the next submission if you're still writing this!
It's a always a sad moment to see that a story that you liked ended prematurely
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Anonymous11/07/12
Good but could have been better
The story was awesome, right up until you added the stripper and the girls orgy part. I mean damn man, you spent so long leading upto the big moment with more and more intense encounters with Denise, then change the direction altogether, you just lost the theme youve been keeping all the way through. My opinion is to delete the last 2 stories and make it match the rest of the story more. By creating more believable circumstances than Denise suddenly deciding to get it on with a group of girls present after being so shy through the rest of the story
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Anonymous01/17/13
Wheres the rest of the story he needs to fuck his cousin!
you seem to have forgotten the original premise, and are determined to stretch out a convoluted tale one disconnected page at a time. I feel sorry for Jenna who must surely know she is just a place holder while you figure out how drag it on for 20 years.
I quit!
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Anonymous05/26/13
When
When will the rest of the story be out. Don't leave us hang
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Anonymous09/07/13
Nooo!!!!
From now on, I'm going to check whether a story has been finished by its author before I read the whole damn thing and get wrapped up in it's characters. Simultaneously: thank you for the good read, and damn you for not finishing your story. AAARGH!9
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Anonymous01/17/14
once again the writer ruins it
by adding jenna you ruined the taboo incest theme of the story. delete all parts with anyone other than the cousins you wasted your time and ours on this trashy chapter delete and do it right.
It is just so disappointing when you write so much, pull in the reader to the story, only to find the author never finished it. I've been giving this 4 and 5 stars, had I realised it would not have an ending, I wouldn't have bothered.
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Anonymous11/12/15
I love this story
This is the absolute best story I have read in a long time. Thank you for creating this and please continue.
English
Can't wait for more
It's been a year since the last installment of the series, please continue as soon as you can!
AHH
OH GOD, by far one of the best stories I've ever read on Literotica, eagerly awaiting the rest
Oh my god
So frickin good! Best story on here by far!! Please don't make us wait to see what happens!!
dumb
if he marries anyone but his cousin both you and he are stupid adding the newyork skank ruined the whole incest thing. if he really loved his cousin he never would have even looked at the new yorker get it back on track or delete it
Don't listen to the last one!
That last comment is dead wrong! Jenna is awesome and I love her character! She's just like him which is why they work so well. For Denise it's always been a physical attraction, his perversions just fed into his lust for her. I LOVE JENNA!!! KEEP HER IN THE STORY!!!
I can't wait to read the next submission if you're still writing this!
More?
It's a always a sad moment to see that a story that you liked ended prematurely
Good but could have been better
The story was awesome, right up until you added the stripper and the girls orgy part. I mean damn man, you spent so long leading upto the big moment with more and more intense encounters with Denise, then change the direction altogether, you just lost the theme youve been keeping all the way through. My opinion is to delete the last 2 stories and make it match the rest of the story more. By creating more believable circumstances than Denise suddenly deciding to get it on with a group of girls present after being so shy through the rest of the story
Wheres the rest of the story he needs to fuck his cousin!
disappointing
you seem to have forgotten the original premise, and are determined to stretch out a convoluted tale one disconnected page at a time. I feel sorry for Jenna who must surely know she is just a place holder while you figure out how drag it on for 20 years.
I quit!
When
When will the rest of the story be out. Don't leave us hang
Nooo!!!!
From now on, I'm going to check whether a story has been finished by its author before I read the whole damn thing and get wrapped up in it's characters. Simultaneously: thank you for the good read, and damn you for not finishing your story. AAARGH!9
once again the writer ruins it
by adding jenna you ruined the taboo incest theme of the story. delete all parts with anyone other than the cousins you wasted your time and ours on this trashy chapter delete and do it right.
Why haven't you finished the story ?
It is just so disappointing when you write so much, pull in the reader to the story, only to find the author never finished it. I've been giving this 4 and 5 stars, had I realised it would not have an ending, I wouldn't have bothered.
I love this story
This is the absolute best story I have read in a long time. Thank you for creating this and please continue.
Please finish it!
U little tease
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