by m_storyman_x
Jerry in Washington state, USA - I was recently re-reading some of your stories, so it was nice to come across a new one. I enjoyed this first chapter, mainly because I had figured out the sexual teasing was at least partly a test to see if he could keep his mind (and body) on the job. I look forward to future chapters where he is able to relax and enjoy the sexual results of the teasing. I'm not a computer techie, but I enjoyed the technical parts of the story - made everything else in the story feel more real. Much look forward to chapter 2!!
I'm a techie and this is a great fantasy! Looking forward to what's coming up.
Nice lead in. Been waiting for another series from you. Looking forward to it.
i like the story, lots of places for thos to go... more, please!
Hey! Here's hoping that there are more chapters coming cause I really like the way your wicked mind works. I'm hoping that you'll have something coming soon! Keep on writing, mate!
Where is the rest of the story ? You cannot leave it hanging after a brilliant start .
great story, very inventive. i deffinitely want a job like this (smile). i can't wait to read the second installment. ------ i do hope there will be many more installments.
and thank for the enjoyment so far.
kindest regards
brian
GOOOOD start! That would be a fantasy dream for sure! Whew! Cheers!
I didn't notice any misspelled words. My mind was going crazy with these women and why I've never met any like them before now.?
I have found a new author to me . I have only read one of your stories looked up your details and found a virtual library. How good is that.
You are going to keep me very busy thank you.
This story is great by the way
I wonder if he needs an assistant ? I'd even come out of retirement and work for nothing in that office - oh yes.
But unlike Chris (so far) I doubt I could be quite as 'restrained' if I were teased as he's been..............
So looking forward to chapter 2 !
As a former techie, I love this story. Please continue it. I don’t know if you have an editor, but there are a few grammatical mistakes and missing words. Also, please, please, please, change the story title to “A Techie’s Wonderland”.
What imagination! A women's custom clothing business as an erotic stage, with the workers being desirable, horny women! Someone's got a novel brain to produce a novel idea.
Well-written. Good dialog.
Paul in Oklahoma
Wonderful storyline. A man can only dream and I do love your stories and the way you make them feel possible.
Great concept, very well written. The best part is that every women doesn’t have breasts larger than a D cup, which I consider more a turn off than a turn on.
Marvelous start to what I am sure will be a VERY INTERESTING series. Just like your Vvanoe guide" story, this is well planned & thought-out, plus, the Chris is a gentleman.
He does not take advantage immediately, other than looking; this is quite the draw for a number of us readers. This is not a "stroke story"; per se, but an excellent build up to the whole story!!
On, to part 2!