All Comments on 'White Daughter Taken By Black Man'

by JonathanT

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HeyAllHeyAllover 12 years ago
Hot story.

It was very erotic and nicely written. Thanks!

Auden JamesAuden Jamesover 12 years ago
crap

no tension, characters without any dimensions (except penile), no nothin'.

that's all.

-AJ

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
*****

Fuckin' hot story. Loved the way both bitches were turned into black cock sluts.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
bang bang

Reminds of this time some internet hardman pulled his gun and I had to take it away from him and shove it up his ass, he squealed like a little bitch

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
usual stuff

so why do you never elaborate in your stories - they all say the same - mother and daughter would get many black cocks but we never get to read about it

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
end of the story failed

it was a good story up untill you started the real sex... and then it just died...

JonathanTJonathanTabout 12 years agoAuthor
JonathanT retort

Sad but true.....there are racists and bigots lurking here on this venue. To use the "N" word in public or in comments is protected by our freedom of speech BUT it is hateful and shows just how ignorant some of the readers are. You haters opened this website and clicked on selected stories....and then you seem repulsed by what you read.

My hate mail mostly comes from black men. 98% of them have never been on the African continent and have little or no clue as to African culture, history or geography. I lived and worked in several African countries and have been exposed to a wide range of cultures. I met and was greeted by kindness from hundreds of black Africans. Yes, there were some that hated white men but a huge majority were receptive and curious of western culture. Times have changed since my being there. Religion has again has caused turmoil and hate. Many countries are very dangerous to visit or live in. But wide varieties of sex will still occur and white and black women/ men will continue to mix. It's natural.

leathercatsuitgirlleathercatsuitgirlover 11 years ago
Beautiful

Thankyou for such a beautiful story - that could easily be me and my daughter too - I wish it was !!!! - love the story

Sarah, London England - leathercatsuitgirl@hotmail.co.uk

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Black and the N word

It is sad to see people use that N word still. Blacks will rule us whites and they will get revenge by taking our white wives.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Pedophile

Here is my ending, the girl gets a gun and kills all the niggers and then hunts down the author and fucks him with a chainsaw. You sir are a sick fuck and I hope you die a very slow painful death

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Only dramatic, overly emotional idiots

Only someone who loves to complain and constantly bitch reads stories in categories they are fully aware will undoubtedly upset them. Are these the same sort of people that intentionally touch hot stoves, then want to sue for being burned? Or maybe they jerked off, then felt disgusted with themselves, and are projecting it onto the author? Either way, do not put yourself into a situation you know you will find offensive just so you can indignantly unleash your impotent anger.

TigersmanTigersmanabout 9 years ago
Nice

This is a nice story for one so short. The plot and character development were right on. The ending was a little rushed. One commenter labelled their comment "pedophile" which did not fit the circumstances as the daughter was 18 years old. From personal experience a close friend of mine found himself set back a grade when his family relocated. The school board did not recognize all of his credits which meant he was almost 19 years old when he graduated.

I liked the idea that the mother could see her daughter getting a black cock. It would have been nice if mother and daughter had been getting fucked in the same room where they could watch each other, possibly holding hands while getting pounded. I liked the fact the daughter was black bred as all white girls/women should be at least once, preferably twice.

I think you need to ignore all the negative comments as they chose to read this story all the way through when they could have stopped and gone on to another.

cindylynn34cindylynn34about 9 years ago

what a scarey situation.. i enjoyed the story,, makes me wonder if my daughters or atleast my oldest daughter had feelings for terry while i was seeing him .. or him for her.. he never mentioned desires for them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
FUCK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

What about the son you completely forgot him after the first mention why not while your at it why don't you glorify how the big bad scary black "man" would beat and humiliate him because he's white while he probably made him watch his whore of a mother and poor innocent sister repeatedly violated . you are a disgusting low life piece of shit

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

The only road for Stephanie - following in her mother's footsteps becoming a true black cock whore.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Too Short

The 1st part of the story was very good. Just a pity that the night and the next day were squeezed into three paragraphs. it would have been a 5 star story if the next couple of days had been written better.

merrySMmerrySMabout 7 years ago
A little more detail please

Your style is enjoyable as well as your genre, please keep writing. Some of your phrases are incredibly erousing. Love your Hart family series also. Your coercion scenes are good but would love to hear more detail in some of the sexual encounters. For example...

"..black lover began pressing his cock into her anal bottom. She gasped from the pain at first but once that black cock got in, she began enjoying the invasion."...

Felt extremely cheated by this one liner.

You are good about getting in the heads of your characters, would had love to listened to her nervousness, maybe a little fear, some reluctance, him coercing her, the actual act itself. Applying lube, spreading her cheeks, fingers perhaps, the bulbous head all that.

However, please come back and write. Your stories are wonderful.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
black fucked together

my wife and daughter were black fucked together ,five guys took turns on them.They showed me the film.

DADDYLOVER2DADDYLOVER2over 5 years ago

THIS BLACK DADDY WOULD HAVE DONE THAT WITHIUT CHARGING YOU FOR IT!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Needs a lot of work!!

A good idea, but if you can't call them a fucking black cock slut, or a vagina a cunt..then I think you need to write children's books instead. Try again with a more open, and dirtier mind.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Moja żona

jest bardzo często ruchana przez nigeryjskiego byka lecz tylko po misjonarsku i zawsze ma jego juks w pipce który ja ze smakiem wylizuję z jej zniszczonej pipki - nigdy bym nie pozwolił mojej żonie na orgie ani na anal - do ruchania jest pipka a tyłek do s....a i basta.Z jego czarnego ,grubego [ 6,5cala - grzyb ponad 7 ] chuja mamy 4 dzieci równie czarnych jak on.Żona moja ma dopiero 27 lat - on 51 i nie jednego murzynka jeszcze urodzi z gęstego,gorącego afrykańskiego juksu.Tutaj,gdzie mieszkamy,każda biała rodzina wychowuje po kilkoro czarnych dzieci a mężowie zaprowadzają swoje żony do czarnych byków i dbają o nie,gdy już są zerżnięte.Wszyscy rogacze przyjaźnią się i rozmawiają na temat krycia swoich żon,przez czarnych ogierów - ja też bo moją żona chodzi z 5 czarnym brzuszkiem,tak jak wiele żon moich przyjaciół Kosmiczny widok jest,gdy idą ulicą w cztery lub pięć młodych ,białych kobiet z pokaźnymi brzuszkami i żartując,śmieją się głośno.Niekiedy też spotykają dwóch lub trzech murzynów,którzy je wyhodowali i witają się ,namiętnie całując po francusku i rozmawiając.Nasz byk na pożegnanie głaska brzuszek mojej żony i uśmiechając się,szepce jej coś na ucho.Po powrocie do domu pytam,co jej powiedział a żona mówi , że on uwielbia ją z jego brzuszkiem i zapewnia,że to nie ostatnia jego hodowla mojej pięknej żoneczki,którą ja również uwielbiam w ciąży.Po każdym stosunku ja wylizuję pipkę mojej żony z jego mocnego,juksu i my,wszyscy rogacze,dziękujemy naszym murzynom za piękne wzorowe ,mistrzowskie krycie i hodowanie naszych młodych,pięknych żon

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

The average penis length in Nigeria is 13.5cm

Sweetnothings77Sweetnothings77over 1 year ago

I been with my Mommas so called boyfriend. Even some others she had gotten with when they was over and she left for work if she was working even then. But yeah it do happen like this. I know the Man who was with my Momma wanted and took me. He was my First but not my last.

bizarrpaarbizarrpaarabout 1 year ago

My husband kneed beside our bed as my black bull told him that he will impregnate not only me - his wife...he will impregnate also our two daughters....my sissy cuckold hubby came imediatly in his cock cage without touching!

My daughters and i are now 6 month pregnant and we love to be black cock sluts

furlovingchloefurlovingchloe11 months ago

Very hot, enjoyed it

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

What a bizarre trope, and this version.... Meh. If you want something more erotic and less sicko, try "Suzanne in Africa". At least that one is plausible.

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