Bad Girl

Nice idea, needs better editing

i was distracted by grammar, punctuation errors, etc.

J...P....C...

JUST PLAIN CRAP.

Waste of space

Waste of space

Hate bad comments

Just move on if ya don't like it. And grammar guy, ciss meye ass

Yepp.

Sure, there were some grammar errors but I just looke past em, good story.

Can't imagine a girl who would be stupid enough to do that. I myself wouldn't be happy to share my woman.Also the position described would be intensely uncomfortable and damn-near impossible. How is she able to DP James and Jordan and perform fellatio on tony at the same time in that position? Not a very nice story. It's only saving grace is that it is short and it didn't involve incest.

let people talk badly, that's fine by me. my goal isn't to please everyone, but to please a few people with this story and i believe i succeeded in that! and the best part about a story is it doesn't have to be totally realistic. (:

re: Anonymous-hate bad comments

Hate pricks who can't spell worth a shit and think their opinion is the only one that counts. Kiss my ass too you prick.

i assume the person who keeps checking back to talk shit is lonely and bored of their life. honestly, go ahead and talk badly. my opinion is the only what that matters. know why? because it's MY story. i don't need you to like it. i know some did and that really is all that matters. i'm sorry you're so bored and lonely, but please get a life and quit checking on this story just to put in your two cents in which no one cares about :D

Alright

I enjoyed your story... But as well, I can't imagine a girl doing that unless she was incredibly desperate. I know for a fact I would never do something like that; then again I have friends who I have to wonder about because they probably would.

Triple penetration

Who cares if its realistic? I was hoping Amber would keep bitchin so that the 3 guys would shove their dicks into her ass at once. She's obviously stupid so why not have her come back for more and they can triple fuck her butt. Maybe they can get some more guys along. Amber's one helluva fuck so go for it.