Coming of Age

Interesting start

I liked the beginning of this. It's a little short, but I look forward to seeing where it goes.

short

I would first like to congratulate you for having the confidence to submit to literotica. But why is the story so short?! If you would please be so kind to submit more page next time it would greatly be appreciated.

This was my first submission. I wasn't sure how long it would actually be once uploaded in their format. It was 5 pages on MS Word, so I was hoping it would be around 2 on here. I was wrong. Now that I know, I will plan accordingly.

Thanks!

~Khrystyne

interesting story

Got my attention but a bit short for my tastes but well written, keep up the excellent work...

Donna

Please finish this charming tale!

I have really enjoyed your writing. I hope to check back soon and see that you have concluded it :o)