All Comments on 'Gone Swimming'

by SamanthaOrange

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Please write more

Very good start to this story. Would be intrigued to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Greatly enjoyed, can't wait to hear what happens to "the man" when she's done with him! Good job!

MizTMizTover 12 years ago
Congrats

on your first story. And one that will have at least two parts if not more. Hey I still don't know what the hell the object was or where it came from, but that doesn't really matter. The fact is we are left w/a mermaid/human who just needs to find the right man to have a baby/babies. But what type of species will she give birth to? I look forward to following this story.

Again Congrats on the first of hopefully many more storys to come.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

loved that story cant wait for part 2

greenfoolboygreenfoolboyalmost 12 years ago

A great first submiision, I'd love to be the lucky guy that gets to fertilize those eggs! hawt

Siren31623Siren31623over 10 years ago

Okay, I had no idea where this story was going when I started, but I have to say I liked it. Just one question: what was her lover?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
HOT

Please post more!. Please let her find someone to help with those eggs!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

So...what happens?!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Would love to help her with those eggs with my seed.

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