Gone Swimming

Please write more

Very good start to this story. Would be intrigued to read more.

Greatly enjoyed, can't wait to hear what happens to "the man" when she's done with him! Good job!

Congrats

on your first story. And one that will have at least two parts if not more. Hey I still don't know what the hell the object was or where it came from, but that doesn't really matter. The fact is we are left w/a mermaid/human who just needs to find the right man to have a baby/babies. But what type of species will she give birth to? I look forward to following this story.

Again Congrats on the first of hopefully many more storys to come.

loved that story cant wait for part 2

A great first submiision, I'd love to be the lucky guy that gets to fertilize those eggs! hawt

Okay, I had no idea where this story was going when I started, but I have to say I liked it. Just one question: what was her lover?

HOT

Please post more!. Please let her find someone to help with those eggs!