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by alan55

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tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
IT DOESNT ALWAYS WORK OUT

even after several trials. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
The first three chapters should have been one chapter.

Your writing is above average and you tell the story well, (pace, transition, plot, character development, etc), but you have unnecessarily truncated this into three chapters.

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