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Ch. 01: Who Do You Belong To?

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/23/11

MORE,MORE ,MORE

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by Anonymous12/23/11

Great start

A very nice read, how about another chapter, seems mr Torres has some very specific plans for Suzie, like to know just WHAT plans.

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by sftoyou12/24/11

Great start! Please continue :)

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by SouthernPassion5312/26/11

Very good

A good beginning to what can be an excellent storyline.

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by XxXJODYXxX01/01/12

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Although these chapters are small the second chapter has taken a little longer. ThanX for waiting. Hope you all enjoy reading it as much as I did writing it! Susie learns some valuable life lessons (wink) in Ch. 02: Who Do You Belong To?

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