Threads: The Island

I have never commented on a story... Wow I red it notjust because it was hot but great story. An idea from a beautiful dirty mind. Thank you. Thank you

Wow.

greatest of all stories

this is the best i have seen with my 5yrs reading literotica... personally im gonna recommend it as a book... Keep the ink flowing

please divide up

this is really long, and took forever to read. for ease of readers could you break this up into smaller chapters? if only so we can find where we left off later

good read

Finish this story

Come on man, you gotta continue this story.

Best Read Ever

I read this story at a single sitting, unable to put it down until later. It is an extraordinary piece of writing, not just for this site, but anywhere. The characters were all well developed and the ending is a little bittersweet, just as every good piece of fiction is. I've got plenty of unanswered questions and I miss them all already. Thank you.

Very intense reading, plenty of action and well written. Ignore they guy who said it was to long, NO WAY ! ! ! ! ! !! Hope you continue the story, who gets the guy, Patricia, The Sisters or All Three. Hope to read more soon.

DAMN

man i never thought i could read something like that one hell of a story amazing and great built of a story i wish to find more of your writing.

language

I loved the story. It was great. However, i get the impression that the author is English. The main characters were all from America but didn't speak like Americans... just saying...

Please continue

I have been longing for a real story to get into and FINALLY you gave me just that. It's been a long time since iIve actually missed a meal or sleep to finish something worthwhile *grins* and i didn't mind it one bit!
This is absolutely fantastic! Kudos!

kara, kyle, and katie... KKK?

its an incredible story but if ur gonna write with american characters dont use british terminolagy for the the american characters.

Great story

I would really like to see this continue. It will take longer to read all the other comments than it did to read the story. The comments about British terminology out of the mouths of Americans was noticeable but not fatal. Kyle after all, is supposed to have grown up in San Antonio and not likely to have sounded like a Scot.

At any rate, a great story and well written. Looking forward to further chapters.

Loved it !

Really enjoyed the story , I'd really like to see it continue .

best story on this site

Ive read hundreds of stories in many different categories on this website and this was by far the best one ever! I have been waiting for the next one in this series and I sincerely hope its coming out soon!!

You are an incredible writer.

Publish

Wow. It's not long but if you put this out for sale, people will buy it.

BORING

God, forty two pages and only about six of them interesting. Too much use of 'celebrity' names, too much detail about an 'imaginary?' island and the writing is far too simplistic to be believable. All the references to smoking should be deleted as Kyle seems to be the only one addicted. An occasional brief mention would have sufficed.
Literotica have mis-categorised this story, as they so often do. The supposed 'incest' at the beginning does not count and the scene between Kara and Kyle at the end is only hearsay so is also not valid.

great story

Really enjoyed this story. Hope it continues

mmmmoooorrrreeee

loved this story please continue it!!!!!

Don't hate, appreciate!

Honestly, I have to say this is the best story I have read here. It wasnt a plotless series of poorly joined sexual encounters. Another thing I liked is that you kept taboo taboo. A lot of authors go overboard with it until its more commonplace then the social convention its replacing. Many thanks for the story, really looking forward to more.

More?

I see you have said there will be sequels, however if it is not to much to ask, any idea of a timeframe?

thumbs up

you can make a movie from this! It was great

Amazing. More?

Amazing story, definitely one of the best on here. I like that it was a story first and sex second. It really made it a worth while read. Any timeline on a sequel? I would love to read more about Kyle, Patricia and his sisters.

Amazing

Loved it. Worth making a tv series/ movie from it. Some grammar mistakes though

Like a good book you can't put down.

Like a good book you can't put down. Dreaming is good for the soul! Thanks for the sweet dreams!

I love the story and hope for a sequel. While I did not agree with Patricia, I did see the need for their separation though I do hope they get together on a more permanent level in the future. Please let us all know if your planning on a sequel and possibly a time frame though I'm sure it will take some time.

brilliant, you are a great story teller.I loved it.

welsh

really good story you have a real tallent funny and horny

Impressive

The best I have ever read, without a doubt.

Great story ! Hope to hear more in th near future.
Hope Patrica falls in amazing in love with Kyle. Keep up the good work.

alive

dude please tell me you're still alive, i checked your blog and i saw that the latest post was last year and i don't want this story to end yet :(!

Fantastic!

I hope you are not a one shot wonder!
Please continue with this storyline. If not, then start a new one! I'm not easily impressed with writers, but you did.

Encore!

Holy fuckberries! When is the next one gunna be ready?

BEST EVER

THREADS IS ABSOLUTELY THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ ON THIS SITE OR ANY OTHER!!!
KUDOS TO THE AUTHOR

Enjoyed immensly. Bob R. (bobandzeny@yahoo.com)

A very interesting story enjoyed very much. I'd like the story to continue,with
details of Kyle's "physical" relation with Karen and Kara revealed. Bob R.

Wow!!!

Dude, you completely rocked my mind. It's so long i had to read it in two runs but it's really good man. When i stopped reading the first half and took a brake, i couldn't stop thinking what would happen next... It's really good dude. You got so much talent. Can't wait for whatever you come up with next.
Congrats.

LOVE!

I seriously spent days reading this when I had extra time in my schedule. You need to start writing books so I can buy all of them! I completely enjoyed the story line and the incredible amount of detail you put into the story, its characters and their backgrounds. This is easily the best story I've encountered on Literotica and I was sad to see it end. 5 stars and a round of applause!

Ed's my boy

thanks for a great read so far, you are obviously practiced in your writing style and I have greatly enjoyed what you have shared to date. Shalom.

5 stars is NOT enough

This honestly is the BEST story on Literotica. I got so drawn into it that I read the first 35 pages from the tiny screen of my cell phone. HONESTLY! Please, keep writing, and don't ever stop! :D :D

Awesome

great story, much better than most books and was sexy! i wish you made it longer!

Great

One of the best stories I have ever read on this site. This wasn't a great sex story, it was a great story. Please write more.

Nice work

Great story, big fan.

Awesome!

Awesome story. Loved every word of it. Wondering if there will be more? Keep up the great work!

Amazing

Great book sometimes it was unclear who the speaker was and could more sec especially Incest that's why I'm in this section, and how about a sequel

Any idea.as to when the short storys or sequal will be posted u havent posted in 6 months

Good story, but please fucking learn to spell!

And better grammar would be a plus, too. Otherwise, very entertaining.

continuation

When are you going to add more threads that continue the story, good start, but leaves a lot open and some readers may like to see more of what happens.

This is the longest story I have ever Read!

Seriously Pal, how long did it take you to write this story? you might as well make yourself a small novel and sell it. 45 WEB PAGES!

Length

This wasn't a short porn story but it was very interesting and well written. Never mind the clown who complains about grammar and spelling.

Awesome, simply put! Well written story, and it's not to long. I can't wait for more chapters too come. Please keep writing and I will keep reading.

Liked!

I took a star off for the length. I found myself skimming sections that didn't add to the story for me, like business details and lists of female celebrities etc. Otherwise I liked the story and the characters and the erotic scenes, especially the first couple, very tender and hot. Thanks.