one of the best stories or book ive read in a long time
by
Anonymous06/28/12
WOW
Lucky I own the company or I would have been fired being on the computer for a whole day reading. Very good
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Anonymous06/30/12
Add more please, you got me looking for more. I have been readind this at work and and at home, I could not stop reading this story. Great job but there has to more to this story then this please don't leave us hanging like this
Your ability to keep a story's continuity going was wonderful. I enjoyed this short story immensely.
by
Anonymous07/01/12
Unbelievable
This story had me up untill 7 in the morning reading it. I just couldn't stop myself. I'm very surprised to see such a well written story lurking in the archives of literotica and I am very happy to have stumbled across it. If any kind of update or addition to this story was created I believe that many people would gobble it right up. Fantastically written with a well-grounded base in realism. Very good read.
by
Anonymous07/01/12
Also, Not Dead
I believe that Jammy Jimmy is James E Alexander from Hahira, Georgia. Couple seconds of googleing got me that and no obituaries have him in it.
[If dead was referring to his lack of updates then i'm sorry to have wasted 2 minutes of my time]
by
Anonymous07/01/12
Great story
This was simply said an outstanding story and your Audience deserving to know what happen to the characters in the plot. Either let them know you have given up or Complete the story.
by
Anonymous07/02/12
Q_Q
Sequel please, I spent like 5 hours reading this at once and now I feel bad, Sequel sequel please!
by
Anonymous07/03/12
One of the Best
this is one of the best stories i hvae read in this site.
More of same or a sequel please.
by
Anonymous07/04/12
Easily, without a doubt...
the best-written story on this site. No contest. Some of the hottest moments in any story, wonderfully compelling and interesting characters, and a great plot. Ignore the ADHD spazzes that are just looking for a quick 'bate before bed -- this is best seller material. It had me hooked from start to finish. Absolutely amazing.
You know a story's great when you actually give a shit about the supporting cast. Jammy Jimmy, you've created something amazing. Please write more.
I have been reading all sorts of stories on this site for the bast 5 or 6 years maybe even more, and this is easily the BEST I have ever read. I was actually reading this story from my phone using the literotica app for droid users, and could not put my phone down when i wasn't able to be at my computer. Just an amazing story and there desperately needs to be a sequel if not more. I believe everyone who has read this is looking for more and cannot get enough!
Best story I have found on here. Please please please can we have more.Must find out who Kyle dated to the party in L.A. Also how Katie and Kara got on in NY.
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Anonymous07/05/12
Truely amazing
It will be hard to find anything by another author to match the brilance of this thread
A VERY GOOD STORY. I WOULD DEFINATELY
WANT TO READ MORE !!! I
AM REALLY INVOLVED IN THE CHARACTERS.
by
Anonymous07/05/12
what more
all that can be said has been, thanks for such a fine story!!!
by
Anonymous07/06/12
Loved it!
What an amazing story, hope there's more!
by
Anonymous07/07/12
Brilliant
One of the best I have read!!!
by
Anonymous07/07/12
Couldn't stop!
Great! I couldn't walk away from this one!
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Anonymous07/08/12
Wow
Best story I have read yet on here. Even with 42 pages.
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Anonymous07/08/12
5 stars isn't enough!
This has got to be the best story I have read on Literotica, and I have read a lot of them! The one, and only problem, is the type-O's. But other then that, 10 stars.
It should be a mini series on HBO. Vary nice work on Conner by the way, being a Scot myself, I liked how you did him...last name was a little weird though, might just be though. :-P
I know authors love good comments - so I'll try to give them to you.
First off... 42 Pages!!! I was in heaven!!! I'd much rather have 1 story at 42 Pages that is a complete story, than 15 chapters of 2 or 3 pages.
Loved the plot... loved the character interaction. Everyone seemed believable. I'm really hoping to read new stories about these characters!!!
My only real issue ( and it wasn't a show stopper - but just an opinion that it could have been done better ) was the 'final' scene with Edwin. Sort of one of those 'saw it coming' and if I were Conner, in the field I was in, knowing what Conner knew... I would have gotten more Edwin more secure, and I would have gone first. Knowing there would be so many possible variables once Edwin was down there, I wouldn't want a kid fresh off training to be the point man at the bottom - better to have him at the top, forcing him down, then on the bottom in a really unknown situation.
But your resolution is well done as well. So I'm not bemoaning 'how could you do that...'.
Also - I didn't really notice any grammatical or spelling issues. Great Job with that. Also a great job of keeping everyone in place. Can't tell you the number of times I've given up on what was otherwise a great story because the author messed up and used the wrong Character name ( as an example if Patricia and Kyle were having a conversation, but half way through it you forgot and started using Katie instead of Patricia ). None of that, and on such a lengthy story... good show!!!
Otherwise - all in all... GET CRACKING ON THE NEXT INSTALLMENT!!!!
Great story and I still wish it had more pages, I used to read books a lot, so this is the closest I have come to reading one in 4-ever
Thanx Great Writing
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Anonymous07/12/12
More
please
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Anonymous07/13/12
top class
bloody perfect - please hurry up with sequals mate
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Anonymous07/16/12
Thank you
You deserve a 10 for this story, sory i could only give you a 5
This would have to be the best story i have read on here...again thank you
Looking forward to reading more of your stories
Ken
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Anonymous07/16/12
Continuation
You put in an amazing amount of work for this story, but it feels incomplete. I would happily read further chapters, and I think that you owe it to yourself and your previous effort to give this story a full ending. It would be absolutely fantastic then.
by
Anonymous07/16/12
Simply amazing
The amount of detail you put into this was amazing... I really felt like I could see everything you wrote, feel what they felt and so on... Please keep writing!!
by
Anonymous07/17/12
Bravo
this was a hell of a story. Thanks for writing it and please produce more stories
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Anonymous07/20/12
When is the next installation of this story coming out?
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Anonymous07/21/12
Superb
Like reading erotica by any one of my favorite novelists! Wonderful story! Thank you for writing it!
by
Anonymous07/22/12
Thank you...
This should be published on Kindle....really enjoyed the story.. :.)
by
Anonymous07/23/12
amazing
that was amazing I could not stop reading thank you
by
Anonymous07/24/12
Absolute Best
you need to have this made into a movie . I am dead serious you wouldnt be able to make enough copies to sell.
by
Anonymous07/27/12
Make more
Brosky that was the best thing I have read in a long time. Make the next installment soon.
by
Anonymous07/28/12
Ok i really dont like you...
LOVE the story, but it made me only get like an hour or so long sleep last night...
really could not stop reading it.
an awsome story, and the story that is, not the sexual part of it, but the story it self.
not many stories i read here where i really was waiting for the sexual parts to end to continue with the rest :)
thank you, and i will be reading more stuff you write, if it is anything like this.
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Anonymous07/28/12
I'm not that big into reading but once I started reading I couldn't quit. It was like I was watching the movie it was so well written and illustrated. There was just enough sex in it to make it intresting but the story line was just outstanding.
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Anonymous07/29/12
outright awesome!
A friend of mine told me to read this and I am totally going to have to thank him. Just the right mix between sex and story and soo well written. loved it!
A GREAT STORY..
EAGERLY WAITING FOR THE SEQUEL/S..
by
Anonymous07/30/12
Threads review...
Extremely sexual, sexy, and sensuousm but with a great plot! This could make a great movie series! Bring on some more of it! Well done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
by
Anonymous07/31/12
Shock and awe.
Best online story I have read with great attention to detail. I got literally two hours of sleep because it was so awesome. Up there with Dickens. Bring on the sequel.
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Anonymous08/06/12
Sequel would be greatly appreciated, the style of writing you chose for this story was truly captivating....hopefully the sequel is direct of this storyline, kyles a very relatable character
English
Really disappointed that the story died
Too bad, soo sad
Spectacular!
This was easily my #1 favorite story in the entire database! Very in-depth with excruciating amounts of detail and the plot, how amazing! Well done!
Dead
pretty sure the guys is dead or quit the business check out his blog, has not posted in a long time
http://jammyjimmy.blogspot.ca/
damn
one of the best stories or book ive read in a long time
WOW
Lucky I own the company or I would have been fired being on the computer for a whole day reading. Very good
Add more please, you got me looking for more. I have been readind this at work and and at home, I could not stop reading this story. Great job but there has to more to this story then this please don't leave us hanging like this
great
Your ability to keep a story's continuity going was wonderful. I enjoyed this short story immensely.
Unbelievable
This story had me up untill 7 in the morning reading it. I just couldn't stop myself. I'm very surprised to see such a well written story lurking in the archives of literotica and I am very happy to have stumbled across it. If any kind of update or addition to this story was created I believe that many people would gobble it right up. Fantastically written with a well-grounded base in realism. Very good read.
Also, Not Dead
I believe that Jammy Jimmy is James E Alexander from Hahira, Georgia. Couple seconds of googleing got me that and no obituaries have him in it.
[If dead was referring to his lack of updates then i'm sorry to have wasted 2 minutes of my time]
Great story
This was simply said an outstanding story and your Audience deserving to know what happen to the characters in the plot. Either let them know you have given up or Complete the story.
Q_Q
Sequel please, I spent like 5 hours reading this at once and now I feel bad, Sequel sequel please!
One of the Best
this is one of the best stories i hvae read in this site.
More of same or a sequel please.
Easily, without a doubt...
the best-written story on this site. No contest. Some of the hottest moments in any story, wonderfully compelling and interesting characters, and a great plot. Ignore the ADHD spazzes that are just looking for a quick 'bate before bed -- this is best seller material. It had me hooked from start to finish. Absolutely amazing.
You know a story's great when you actually give a shit about the supporting cast. Jammy Jimmy, you've created something amazing. Please write more.
The Best
I have been reading all sorts of stories on this site for the bast 5 or 6 years maybe even more, and this is easily the BEST I have ever read. I was actually reading this story from my phone using the literotica app for droid users, and could not put my phone down when i wasn't able to be at my computer. Just an amazing story and there desperately needs to be a sequel if not more. I believe everyone who has read this is looking for more and cannot get enough!
fantastic read
Best story I have found on here. Please please please can we have more.Must find out who Kyle dated to the party in L.A. Also how Katie and Kara got on in NY.
Truely amazing
It will be hard to find anything by another author to match the brilance of this thread
WHAT NEXT????!
A VERY GOOD STORY. I WOULD DEFINATELY
WANT TO READ MORE !!! I
AM REALLY INVOLVED IN THE CHARACTERS.
what more
all that can be said has been, thanks for such a fine story!!!
Loved it!
What an amazing story, hope there's more!
Brilliant
One of the best I have read!!!
Couldn't stop!
Great! I couldn't walk away from this one!
Wow
Best story I have read yet on here. Even with 42 pages.
5 stars isn't enough!
This has got to be the best story I have read on Literotica, and I have read a lot of them! The one, and only problem, is the type-O's. But other then that, 10 stars.
It should be a mini series on HBO. Vary nice work on Conner by the way, being a Scot myself, I liked how you did him...last name was a little weird though, might just be though. :-P
Outstanding!!!
I know authors love good comments - so I'll try to give them to you.
First off... 42 Pages!!! I was in heaven!!! I'd much rather have 1 story at 42 Pages that is a complete story, than 15 chapters of 2 or 3 pages.
Loved the plot... loved the character interaction. Everyone seemed believable. I'm really hoping to read new stories about these characters!!!
My only real issue ( and it wasn't a show stopper - but just an opinion that it could have been done better ) was the 'final' scene with Edwin. Sort of one of those 'saw it coming' and if I were Conner, in the field I was in, knowing what Conner knew... I would have gotten more Edwin more secure, and I would have gone first. Knowing there would be so many possible variables once Edwin was down there, I wouldn't want a kid fresh off training to be the point man at the bottom - better to have him at the top, forcing him down, then on the bottom in a really unknown situation.
But your resolution is well done as well. So I'm not bemoaning 'how could you do that...'.
Also - I didn't really notice any grammatical or spelling issues. Great Job with that. Also a great job of keeping everyone in place. Can't tell you the number of times I've given up on what was otherwise a great story because the author messed up and used the wrong Character name ( as an example if Patricia and Kyle were having a conversation, but half way through it you forgot and started using Katie instead of Patricia ). None of that, and on such a lengthy story... good show!!!
Otherwise - all in all... GET CRACKING ON THE NEXT INSTALLMENT!!!!
42 pages
Great story and I still wish it had more pages, I used to read books a lot, so this is the closest I have come to reading one in 4-ever
Thanx Great Writing
More
please
top class
bloody perfect - please hurry up with sequals mate
Thank you
You deserve a 10 for this story, sory i could only give you a 5
This would have to be the best story i have read on here...again thank you
Looking forward to reading more of your stories
Ken
Continuation
You put in an amazing amount of work for this story, but it feels incomplete. I would happily read further chapters, and I think that you owe it to yourself and your previous effort to give this story a full ending. It would be absolutely fantastic then.
Simply amazing
The amount of detail you put into this was amazing... I really felt like I could see everything you wrote, feel what they felt and so on... Please keep writing!!
Bravo
this was a hell of a story. Thanks for writing it and please produce more stories
When is the next installation of this story coming out?
Superb
Like reading erotica by any one of my favorite novelists! Wonderful story! Thank you for writing it!
Thank you...
This should be published on Kindle....really enjoyed the story.. :.)
amazing
that was amazing I could not stop reading thank you
Absolute Best
you need to have this made into a movie . I am dead serious you wouldnt be able to make enough copies to sell.
Make more
Brosky that was the best thing I have read in a long time. Make the next installment soon.
Ok i really dont like you...
LOVE the story, but it made me only get like an hour or so long sleep last night...
really could not stop reading it.
an awsome story, and the story that is, not the sexual part of it, but the story it self.
not many stories i read here where i really was waiting for the sexual parts to end to continue with the rest :)
thank you, and i will be reading more stuff you write, if it is anything like this.
I'm not that big into reading but once I started reading I couldn't quit. It was like I was watching the movie it was so well written and illustrated. There was just enough sex in it to make it intresting but the story line was just outstanding.
outright awesome!
A friend of mine told me to read this and I am totally going to have to thank him. Just the right mix between sex and story and soo well written. loved it!
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A GREAT STORY..
EAGERLY WAITING FOR THE SEQUEL/S..
Threads review...
Extremely sexual, sexy, and sensuousm but with a great plot! This could make a great movie series! Bring on some more of it! Well done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Shock and awe.
Best online story I have read with great attention to detail. I got literally two hours of sleep because it was so awesome. Up there with Dickens. Bring on the sequel.
Sequel would be greatly appreciated, the style of writing you chose for this story was truly captivating....hopefully the sequel is direct of this storyline, kyles a very relatable character
AWESOME
Simply put: THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ ON THIS SITE. Please continue the story with many sequels.
Spicy story line and a dash of thrill coupled with erotica .. Perfect recipe
Get a publisher for yourself
More more more!
Great story, very sexy, and very promising!
Keep writing! Please!
Champion story writer
Fucking awesome! I really hope you keep it going.
Great Story!
I really enjoyed this, it was much more than I expected and well written.
Great stuff.
Very nice story. Kinda like a Louie La'mour. Love the riding.
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