Threads: The Island

Please Continue

Great story man. I must say its been a long time since i read story like that. You did great job. Andd i appreciate that.but i want you to continue story from right there and go on as long as possible.i like it very much.but i was hoping to read about kyle's and his sisters' trip.and i was hoping there would be some more relation between kyle,kara and katie.
So please please please continue this story.
Its my first request and very humble one. So please consider it.
Thanks

enthralled !!

great story you should write a sequel

FREAKING AWESOME!!!

dude this story is the best i've ever read on this site, you're really good at writing stories (maybe you should consider going pro). Only in fantasy novels and such have i been drawn in and captivated like that. I hope you write a sequel.

Anne-on-a-moose

I loved this story, and mostly because that is just what it is, a story. The storyline is great [fiction can have liberties on what can or cannot happen] and the sex scenes are believable and hot!
All-in-all, I would have to say it is one of the best, if not THE best stories I've read on this site. Please tell us the next 'novel' is ready to be published and we're just waiting for Literotica to post it.
Please keep writing, you have a great talent for story telling...thanks for sharing it with us.
Anne-on-a-moose

Great story

This has got to be one of the best stories i have read. I could not stop till i read the whole thing even though i had to get up early for work the next day lol. You are a very talented writer i would love to see this story continued.

tinged with regret

You have ruined 99% of the stories out there by outclassing them all. Your writing is compelling, engaging, and delightful - truly you've raised the bar. The sex is powerful and beautifully written, but the most stunning aspect is this is perhaps the best story I've read in quite a while. Your characters have depth and your plot is sophisticated... A privilege to read and I hope you will continue to delight and enthuse your readers. This is the type of content people would pay money to read. Thank you.

Very good story. Too bad the author has left it unfinished for so long.

It would be great if the story were finished.

Please write and encourage the author.

really enjoyed the writing. keep up the great work and I can not wait to see what is next.

You do really good work JJ . . .

thanks a lot for a well written and enjoyable yarn. Easily one of the best I've read. The length was wonderful. Kara really turns me on :) I think Pati Cake, Shmi, and Kyle are way overdue for a three way. I also think that could easily happen between the 3 Sibs.

All in all it was well done with no loose ends and quite believable. I have you earmarked to check you for new stories every so often now and if you can find the time I would be more than happy to read them :) Thanks again, Lynn

AWESOME READ~!

Thanks so much for a truly wonderful read. It's been awhile since I found something so good it kept me up all night and I spent the next day finishing it. WOW... hope there is a sequel to this gem.

great story

I really love this story. It's sad though cause I think something bad has happened to the author the last post on his blog said he had come down with something and the silence for at lest 6 months.

I loved it!!!

It was like an erotic novel and it all fitted in perfectly :D great job

Amazing

This was an amazing novel will there be a followup sequel to this? It's been a while since anything really gripped me and took me along for the ride but this novel did. It''s a really really good read.

Marvelous

I really enjoy your style and thought process. I hope you plan to continue the series. The possibilities seem delicious.

Great

Well done great story :)

More.

I am sure I have read this wonderful story somewhere else but can't remember where.

Doesn't matter as it was well worth reading again and possibly again. Thanks.

Long time reader here

Without doubt, this is the most well written story I have read for a long time. Keep going with it!!!!!! Please?

Compliment

Could not put it down type of story. Excellent

a load or rubbish

read 4 pages then went to 42 and left this comment

Fantastic

i follow some authers,whose books you cannot put down, just reading another page and another
This story is like that
best i have ever read in Lit
Congrats

Make yourself a blue ribbon

Defo best on site, I was up till 4am reading this, not really erotc fiction (although pretty hot in places) just good fiction.
More that a few other writers on here should read this for an idea of how to pen a loveable, yet fucked up, cast
I only gave 5 stars as there was no highter option.

Red

Loved it!!

Non stop reading since 7 pm yesterday !

Top Notch

The best story I've read on this site yet! Great character development technique. Very smooth transitions in plot development. Reminds me of the work of Nick Scipio.

Great Read

I really enjoyed your writing. Great plot with great dialogue. I'm looking forward to your next story posting. Please add me to your "to notify" list.

amazing read i could not put it down!

i could not stop reading this story read it in one sitting great job would give more than 5 stars if i could.

Best thing I've ever read

I seriously read this through in about 2 or 3days and it was amazing. I hope to all that is good in this world that there are many more followups and chapters.

Nice read

Come on man admit it. You have got bigger plans.

it takes real talent...

to kick out a story, flesh it out (no pun intended) with good characters, a plausible plotline and fill in the lines with some good detail... this story is awesome! it's definitely real novel length, and it's gotta be the beginning of something much, much more... my new all-time-fav... eagerly awaiting the sequel... ;)

A very good read

Adventure, Awesome Characters, Great Sex
Belongs on the best seller list.
What more could you want!!!

end?

I honestly hope there is more to this one. Just finished and haven not looked yet though. I have been writing for twenty years now and reading avidly for 25 (I'm only 31 lol), and in its genre this story was one of the best. This is an author I will be following up on as should any one else.

Simply wonderful

I can't believe there isn't more, all I can say is "WONDERFUL." Thank you for a great story.
p.s. More please

You've gotta do a sequel!

This is one of the best stories i've ever read online. Sure, some things could have been improved, but for a story on this site or online in general, it's about perfect! Better than published fiction i've read before!

And I'm really anxious to know what happens to their relationship. How will Patricia deal with him getting it on with his sisters? How will his sisters convince him to get along with them? How do they deal with their relationship and society at the same time? So many questions, aaarrrgghhh! I never do this, but pretty please, write a sequel. It's just that good.

Yes More,

Please. Find your muse and get cracking. One of the best stories I have read on-line, no matter the genre. Well developed so far and you find yourself rooting for the characters. Thank you for taking me away for awhile.

Sequel ?

Hope you can continue the series in Part 2. Very well done, enjoyed the story very much. Hope to read another adventure from the Island.

Thanks
DG from Canada

excellent writing

wonderful reading, draws you in to the story, gets you involved in the characters and thier situation. Very well thought out, and even better written. Hate to say it, but it would be a real shame if it ended here. Really hope to see a pt.2.

Incredible!!!

This is THE single best story on Literotica.com!!! The detail involved is clearly second to none, and is my single favorite. Looking forward to another work by JJ!

Reallly Awwwwsommmmme!!!!

You did really great and I am still waiting for more after the end that you've shown there. If you can continue it and you do, please email me @ jumlooc@gmail.com. I really think there's more to the story and I want to know what happens during the trip and the decision of the sisters after the trip and how it goes on from there. I repeat, please do continue the story from where you've ended.

than was great reading. thank you.

Wonderful

Spellbinding

I started a folder in my stories section just for your work. This is worth reading more than once. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to Part 2. Hope it is coming soon.

As Ed would say

OUT-FUCKING-STANDING! !!!!!!! What a ride.... Cant wait for the next installments... Have added you to my favorite author list EMAIL ME QUICK!!!!!! When your next chapter is done

Great!

very nice writing kept me turning the next page....

Did you publish the continuation of this story somewhere else?

I look forward to the next chapters.

Hoping

Amazing story, spent all night reading it. Is there gonna be a second part, maybe going in to the relationship between Kyle, Kara, and Katie?

I truly feel you should consider having this published. It's great, no better than that. It flows and it's so much better than that stupid shit called 50 shades of grey. Seriously this is a great read; thanks u so much and I look forward to reading s

Best I've read in some time.

Damn

I loved it,wish it would go on and on.

great

would love to see the story completed,a great read..very nicely done

awesome

great story hope you continue it

just spent the last couple days reading this in my spare time. definitely a well done story, with great imagery and plot that really pulled me into it. looking forward to reading any other similar work you put out.

Great

Wow I totally got into this story, very well written and riveting to read and follow. I intend to read everything Jammy Jimmy has written now and I'm sure I will enjoy them all.

Fantastic

The characters were well developed and the plot lines were intriguing. I'd love to see this story go on!