Threads: The Island

Should be a book.

I totally agree with the previous comment. Bring it on!!!!!

Can't be satisfied with this...

Need more and more of this tale man. Couldn't put down my smartphone until I finished this entirely.

Waiting for the next part. Let it be unleashed soon.

literary masterpiece

The best writing 've encountered on this site. This could easily be extended into a full length novel. Katie and Kara need to tell their respective stories and, of course, that would give Kyle the expoure he richly deserves. Congratulations!

Beautiful

Wonderful tale, more, more, more!

Sweet!

Sweet story and very interesting. Wouldn't mind catching up with Kyle, Katie and Kara. Now that would be interesting!

supurb

I totally enjoyed your writting ,Please continue on this story line. thank u

awesommmmmmeeeee!!

dude.... hve u got some serious skills!!!!
I almost cud have swore I was reading a jeff archer bestseller.. u r that good!
keep it up, n keep posting!!

Will you be continuing with this story? I'm dying to find out what happens next!

Excellent

This was an excellent read. Interspersed with excellent sexual tension, was mystery, romance, and a finely woven novella about a family coming into their own. The creative story line with a setting that promoted all the fine elements was not just intriguing, but compelling. Well done!

great story

Thank you very much for your story. It kept me awake for quite a while; had to see what happened. Had a lot going for it and I really liked it.
I hope you continue and we find out what happened to all of them.
Thank you.

Male view of 50 Sha...

This is every bit an equal to, and a worthy companion to E L James "Fifty Shades ..." from a male perspective ... and still with all the attraction for either a male or female audience. It was inspiring to read your blog re thoughts and concerns for commercial publishing. Just as this episode, "The Island", elaborates, nothing is as simple as gaining a windfall ... and simply moving forward with your old familiar life patterns. As basic readers, most of us can't fathom the pitfalls and liabilities of making public statements. Takeing every Next Step opens a new, unforeseen opportunity to trip and get hurt, or that could impose on another's feelings. That said, I join the thousands who continue to read and learn about the powerfully talented author, JammyJimmy, and strongly encourage more scripts. We know you haven't stopped ... Completely

Perfection

I lay here at 720 am finished with this well written piece of literature. I spent since 1 am reading and couldnt stop. The way you put the characters and story line together made for a great read. I know a lot of people come to literotica for a quick jerk off but you bring the side of erotic literature that literotica needs more of. I would also like to say that I hope you have a second part to this because if you do I will be there to read it.

Excelent History

I'am 66 yo. I'am tetraplegic and mute. And I can't stop reading. I am brasilian. I learn a lot of english to. Thanks a lot for this history.

The next step

Is anyone else thinking that this would make an excellent Hollywood film. You could dial down some of the sex scenes add a little more action, have the actual stars make a guest appearance and BAM! You have your excellent "trouble in paradise" movie theme. I'd go see it.

How can I put this

This was by far the best story I've ever read on this site and I can't help but want more. To simply put it amazing, thank you

book

you should get this poublished

Sequel

Will there be a sequel?

Nice story with a critique

Good pacing and great plot! The characters were fairly realistic lending some real cred to the story.

My main critique is that American readers will know Kyle and Patricia etc... are not American right away due to word choice and odd turns of phrase. Americans are never "keen" to do something and I've only heard the word "dodgy" in British comedies or Sherlock Holmes send-ups. The British spellings were distracting too: organization, favor, color are easier to believe in a story mostly about Americans.

He may be dead

His blog has been silent for over a year and supposedly he was getting over some type of illness before he stopped all communication with anyone.

read more

read more of the stories on this site and you will find the book of David excellent story kind of similar

Follow up, Follow up, Follow up, Follow up.....

awesome

Wow very interesting and amazing read....can't wait for part two. Lol

One of the best I have read yet

JJ, I must compliment you on this story, it has captivated me from the start. You have an amazing talent with words. I look forward to reading more of your work. As others have said...

More...More...More...please

This could be a Movie Script

Reading this story has been a great pleasure. I appreciate the research you must have done and the absence of spelling and grammar errors. The only error I detected was Scuba tanks containing oxygen. At depths greater than 30 feet, oxygen is toxic. Scuba tanks contain compressed air. Please remember that when you write the much hoped for sequel. ;-)

Could'nt put it down.

Very well done. look forward to a contiuation of this story.

Fantabulous read!!

Excellent read...absolutely MUST do a sequel...PLEASE!!!

Amazing

I've been reading stories here for years and this is the best ever. So far above anything else I've read it's like going from watching a t-ball game in the afternoon to watching a 9th inning 2 down home run for the Cubs to win the world series.

So Far

Wow... what I was expecting... it was great... I mean I'm only on the 16th or so page but it's brilliant, it is a great read and I thoroughly enjoy it. I wouldn't mind there being a sequel, but without knowing what the ending is I wont be able to say for sure, loving it so far!

Stars

If it were possible, I'd rate this as 9* (out of 5*)

It would have been 10* but how long is it until we get the next installment?

Earl John [:-)>

Very Interesting

I really looked forward to reading the next set of pages in this very long story. Not ever being rich or famous, I never gave any thought to all of the headaches that such a position brings with it when it also involves running lots of large companies. For any person who cares about people it can be a very big responsibility.

It was also great that the sex was nicely threaded throughout of the story and it was not out of place. In too many of the stories on Literotica it is so crudely forced onto every page that the plot and characters become secondary at best.

Very well done.

Thank you !

Blown away

Honestly, just publish this into a book. I would buy 10 copies just so i would know i would always have it if something happened. This story compleatly captivated me. I devoured this story. In a way im at loss for words.... Hell, i copied and pasted it into my notes app so i could always have it right at my fingertips. And I hope there is a sequel soon. Real soon. You have some serious talent. :) thanks for writing it

Wow.

I dont even like smut stories.. but this one.. this one blew me away... I couldn't quit reading it. You, sir, have one hell of a gift.

Amazing

This was amazing to read. The story was set up perfectly and it was easy to read.

bestest!!!!!

A real page turner! has its own body, well written, and transcends well, Lovely characters, well told story!

GREAT WORK

I hope a publisher will pick this up and put it out there in print for you. This is a fine piece of work! You should be compensated for the effort.

absolutely amazing

As an editor, I was blown away by your writing. it was well thought out, with terrific character development. I would love to see a screenplay of this.

Hell, truth be told, I'd love to play Kyle in the TV series. :-)

Better than the best

Excellent work! Never in my life had I read a story well plotted and it kept me glued to the story for the last few days until I finished reading the the entire story. I would like to get updates from you and eagerly waiting for your next post.

manmadhaleelalu@yahoo.com

Still Great

I just finished reading this for the second time. Even knowing what was going to happen I was still totally engrossed and never left my seat. Great writing. I hope you have plans to continue the adventures of Kyle, Katie and Kara.

Dam good!

I have read this story multiple times and love it each & every time. Now you are probly sick of hearing this, but dam please give another installment of this.

Too much Smoking

I was interested in your story, and I am sure sometime or another I will read it however right now I feel no urge to do so and the reason why is smoking.

It might seem strange to think that a story in the incest section would turn a person off when talking about smoking but that is what has happened.

First off the biggest thing to me is the idea that a person who has struggled to quit smoking would so effortlessly go back to it. There was no struggle no indecision no cravings at all to speak off.

Secondly to think that with all the knowledge of smoking and its side effects not to mention that his personal assistant who is tasked with making him presentable to the world would not mention at all the downside of smoking to him even if she smokes herself.

Finally I can understand if someone smokes and it is a character trait honestly I do. But you seem to go out of your way to point it out at ever chance you get. Why you do this I do not understand. This seems gratuitous to me there is no reason for it. It does nothing to advance the story. Do you mention ever time he has to urinate or cough or sneeze no you don't so why mention smoking at all ?

Wonderfully long...

Thank you for an entertaining, detailed story.

publish

its that good

Part 2?

Whats the conclusion

This story was fantastic

I could not put it down You left it open enough for many more chapters which from your talent I hope you continue.I would enjoy reading how their lives proceeded over the next few months years and decades
Dave

wow

loved it and could hardly stop reading it to sleep at night well done.

Truly Great Story

I just read again your story. It's a great story and I enjoyed it so much I had to read it again. I know you haven't posted anything in two years and wondering if you plan to? I also would like to know if you had any plans to continue this story? You left it open with so many questions. Like what proceeded over the next few months years and decades. Hope you continue it.

Wow!!!

Unbelievable well written! Didnt want it to end!!

Amazing Story

Thank you for that.
I really didn't want it to end. I'm hoping that you'll post up more of this series as soon as possible.

Great story and well written. I couldn't put it down. The characters were real and three dimensional. When I hit the end I felt as though a friend of mine had just departed and I was left wondering what to do. Please write a sequel.

Well Written >

You are a great writer. Enjoyed the story very much. Please continue. Thanks