Threads: The Island

Man!

Now that was good. Beter than most. Thank you very much for sharing.

Best story ever

Best story ever on this or any other website. Wish Patricia were not so kinky. Great read.

Thank you

Didn't even need the sex, found myself skipping it back to the story

Love this story

Nicely written, well balanced and Hot in places! Loved it! Bit of a marathon reading 42 pages though, and it did seem to end rather suddenly.

More!! More!!

Great story. You really need to write a novel. I do like how Patricia was a little wild for him, but was able to be together. It leaves him open for other relations later on. I hope there will be more.

Needs to be a movie. awesome story!

Best of the Best

Sir,
This was hands down the best story I ever read in my years on this site. Thank you. I sincerely hope that you will post a sequel. Again thank you, you are a very talented writer.
Cheers!

thank you

thank you for writing this story, thank you

Wow!

That was amazing! Mystery, intrigue, sex, romance, edge of your seat thriller action and then a gentle wind down to the end. Very well written. Thank you! Best story I've read on this site.

Threads the Best!!!

Kept me reading till I was done. Great story.

Incredible, amazing story!

This novella has it all! Romance, mystery, intrigue, sex! Threads is wonderfully balanced, with just enough conflict to move the story forward. I love character-driven fiction, and you crafted each personality superbly. Well done!

I want to offer a quick word about editing. For a writer of your caliber, there were some mistakes that were quite annoying. Spell checkers don't catch everything. Enough said about spelling.

One instance of bad grammar that was repeated several times was a phrase like, "me and Ed did this," or "me and Casey did that". A business man would never utter such a phrase. Of course, the correct phrases would be "Ed and I," or "Casey and I".

There were other problems, but none ruined your wonderful story. I only mentioned it because you should know. I'm also quite anal!

I gave you five stars!

Do another

Plz do a follow up thread on where they go from here

Awesome

This is just great. I feel like there should be a movie made out of it

WOW

I couldn't stop reading, what a great story, even with some typos, but WOW great story. I agree it should be made into a movie.

Long but good. Some excellent twists and turns

Long but good. Some excellent twists and turns

It's a shame the next story never happened.

AMAZING

I only got 2 and a half hours of sleep one night because I couldn't stop reading this. Despite my sleep deprivation I urge you to please POST ANOTHER SOON!!

JD

Nice, awesome, fantastic....

Wow..... I would say kudos to you for the great work here, I just can't stop till i saw the last letter of the write-up.... Keep it up...
Moscode!

Wow

Loved it! I have read it several times and still love it! Sequel please!

We want more

Please... Puh-LEASE!!! The story sounds so interesting you could've actually written a novel, without the sex. I loved every bit of it. Please continue the story. I would love to know what would happen when they go about on their jobs. especially kyles, who he has to hook-up with, etc.

Lost a lot of sleep reading this

I have a lot of stuff going on this week and then I stayed up late 2 nights in a row just to finish this and it was worth every minute of nodding off the next day. Great work and I hope to see more in the future!

recommendation

I honestly have to say that this was one of the best stories I have read in a long time. Your character development and over all plot was outstanding. You managed to show all the characters in the story grow in their own way, while also allowing the reader to place some of their own thought in at a sub level. Excellency is all that I can say about the story.

WOW

Best story I have ever read on here. You have the gift, I would be happy to pay for this book.

Loved this story

I agree with just about everyone here, this is the best story on here and I agree also if this was a book I would definitely buy it. I would also love to see where this story goes into the future. How they all do with they're new lives. It's great

You better come up with more!

This story was so good, i didn't even fap reading it, despite the fact that i had a boner most of the time..

WOW

I can always tell if I enjoy an author by the visualization I mentally "see" as I read the words on paper or the screen.. Thank you for the time I spent with you it was a real pleasure.

ABSOLUTELY THE BEST OF THE BEST!

This story is the first "book" that I have read in over forty years and I was totally taken in by the style of writing. It was an incredible experience, to say the least. I must find time to read more by the author. It is so well written that I actually felt like I was "in" the story experiencing it rather than just reading it. WELL done.

MORE TO CUM?

I will say, amongst the best novels I've read of late, but alas, I would wish for a sequel. I think the writing was stunning. I had a hard time going to sleep as I read this non-stop for 2 ½ days. I would really Like to say how good this is and how I would love to see more relating to this or even a sequel! Thanks for writing and posting!

Wow!

Just spent the day reading this. So well written! You have a real gift...love to see a sequel!

WOW!!

JammyJimmy,
Write some books, you have some talent here, threading in & out never dropping off. Whatever your day job is must not keep your brain cell vibrating enough and you excel here extremely well. Excellent writing skills with some great exotic & erotic with the story lines. Rock on!!

wow

just finished reading it and all i can saw is wow

didnt even speed read or skip any of it that was unreal ultimate kudos mate well
done and definitely keep at it and actually if you can id definitely like to hear more about the story....

awsome!

the story is incredible! Are there any update regarding threads the island??

Amazing, actually beyond amazing!!!

Amazing, Fucking amazing!!! Please take this to print! Bestsellers list for sure. One think that would have made a great addition was what the girls' were doing on the island when they weren't with Kyle, I would love to know who they were fool in around with on the island.

Awesome. Loved the detail.

great

Fantastic you should really become a legitimate writer the sec scenes were great but if you left out the graffic sex it would still be a great story

Please tell me there is another story

I read the entire 42 files in one sitting
Please allert me to any new files.
Of course you are now added to my favorites, both story & athur.

Sequel Please!!!

Absolutely loved this story. It's like 5% sexy 95% just a GOOD story. I was so sad when it ended. There's so many more places to go with this. I'm dying for more. Best I've ever read here.

Awesome!!

Now now now... This has to be the finest story I have ever read in my whole life! Superbly written and gripping.. I read this story for 4 hrs straight without even getting up... Excellent, superb, fantabulous.. I have a suggestion, plzz continue this story from where u have left off here... I have become a big fan of urs and would simply love it if u continue this story.. To inform u, I am a Literotica editor so feel free to seek my services as I am always available to such fabulous writers like u.. :D
IN THE END, EXCELLENT!!! :D

MORE!!!!!!!

AWSOME! This is the best story I have ever read, not just sex but great storyline too.

Please continue!

You gotta continue the story man!! I know its been long since it was posted. But wth!! Best story I have ever read!! First time posting a comment for a story just cuz I loved it!!!

Easy to see why this is the number story!

This is a great story. Would be fantastic to be continued but sets a high standard to top.

AWESOME!!!!

Please write more, encore! Encore!

Very well done.

such a good story, got so stuck into it i stayed up till very late tring to get that last part of reading in. would be a life i could get used to thats for sure.

Amaze balls!!!

I love it to the moon and back!

Absolutely a great story. Do you intend to follow on with other chapters? Would love to read them. Took me three days to read but couldn't stop.

WOW!!!

I couldn't stop reading this. I need more. I hope a sequel is coming soon. You could publish this and probably get some more publicity (if you are looking for it). Keep up the great writing and don't listen to the haters.

Good book

Excellent story, very well written, and loved the plot twists. Looking forward to reading more of your stuff.

Squibber

Very entertaining

Well written and engrossing. Kept going back to read another chapter instead of doing stuff I was supposed to be doing. Almost missed one client deadline. Thanks for the entertainment.

You're very young (or you were a very young when you wrote this story) - JammyJimmy? - Yes??

Very enjoyable

There needs to be a series of sequels to this! I love your characters and the way they were all developed and intertwined. Keep this story going! It is very entertaining and fun to follow.