Threads: The Island

good story, but

did not care for the twist that you did with Patricia. Why did you need to turn her into a total slut. Is she lying when she says they should date and hook up with other people, but then she is obviously jealous of other women that might show Kyle any sexual attention. Being rich does not make it so you can't date who you want, being super rich gives you even more control over dating who you want. If they are Americans and rich anyone is fair game. We do not have royalty and don't confine ourselves to dating with in our class. Kyle could have said no to dating the A List, he is rich enough to date a sheep if he wanted to.

Brilliant

This story is by far the best i have read on this site. I only hope there will be follow up stories. the second storiy could be about the triplets getting together. The third could be about the taking control of Patricia, even if that means building a playroom in the bunker.

fucking awsome

please release second part. Please

Fantastic

Really enjoyed reading this story. Very well written, loved the fact that I was able to feel every emotion kyle went through. Please keep writing this type of story.

Absolutley Amazing

I've never commented on a story before but I felt ahe need to after reading this one. This story was hands down the best story I have ever read on this site. I was worried with the length of it that I might lose interest but I hung on every word. Cant wait for more!

Well

Needs a proof-read, some grammar/spelling is wrong and once there is a Kevin mentioned!
Didn't like the fact Patricia was this horrendous slut, though obviously there needs to be a way for Kyle to be free to go after his sisters.
Other than that, brilliant story and I couldn't 'put it down'!

:)

Thanks

one of the best

One of the best stories I've ever read

Awesome

If this was a book it would be a best seller! Write another!

Great Story

I was a little unsure about committing to reading what amounts to a short novel, but it was definitely worth the time. I liked the character development throughout, the little bit of mystery, and the attention to detail. My only complaint, and it is a minor one, was that it could use a small bit of editing. There were some grammar issues, some spelling issues, some things that got mixed up. But hey, it's a big chunk of writing and mistakes will happen. Excellent story and I would love to see more material from you.

The story stopped in an awkward place, there are many issues still hanging

This is quite old, has this story been continued somewhere else?

very nice n romantic n sexy n so much interesting

dude I never thought I ll b reading a 42 page story at firstfirst but then it got all so good n sexy n soo romantic tht I couldn't stop myself...... soo plz plz continue the story Want to kno what happens when they are away from each other n whts gonna happen after reuniting ...sry but don't drag on thr Bondage thing for Patricia it's not not tht nice . waiting for d next n hopefully d last part . . . .

Officially in my top 5 best erotic lireature list

Totally not what i was expecting, well written, good plot, sexy as hell and gets the old imagination going into overdrive, i'd love to read spin off's from this

The greatest

Please release a sequel!!!
Best story I've ever read!!!

Awesome

Please write more. I believe you are an accomplished writer simply writing out erotica under a pseudonym. The story is that good!

Exceptional

Really exceptional piece. I never read the longer stories on this site but had to make an exception for this one.

Blew my mind.

I've never bothered to read a story seriously on here before usually barely paying attention till I found the erotic parts, I'm a bit supprised to find myself completely in love with the characters, I read the story for hours and I hope dearly that one day you will post another story about what happpened next time in their lives. :)

more please i love this story a lot

Masterpiece!

Nothing more to be said. This is a masterpiece and complete classic; easily the best story I have read on this site! Bravo to the author and encore please! A sequel is a must!

Splendid work

Spent days glued to this. Great work and madly in love with Trish now

nominations wanted

I am pretty sure JammyJimmy is dead. His blog has not been updated in over a year. Someone else should take up the mantel and continue the story.....

Once I started reading I couldn't stop!

The detail and the way each character was written and developed pulled me in, I love a good story especially one with progression, it does look like the author has not dropped anything here or on his blog in a while, but I hope to find something online somewhere else from him. This is a great story and I hope he continued it somewhere else.

Please Continue

Great story!! I hope you can find time to continue the story as it is easily one of the best out there

Best Story I've Read

This was amazing! It deserves a sequel, I would really like to see what happens with the siblings' relationship when they get back together.

Praise

very well written. This should be expanded and published by AOL or someone.

Best story ever ever ever one can make

I dont think there is any better story then this and I personally request its writer to continue and complete this fucking awesome story.Once I started I couldnt hold myself and completed the whole story.And I think I am in love with patricia.😍💓💕💖💗💘💙💚💛💛💜💝💞💟

Movie

Seriously??? AMAZING! I couldn't put it down. This would make a pretty good Hollywood film! Rated R of course!

M.I.A.

The writer has been missing since last year right around March. I'm sure that the author may have wanted to write a sequel to this story so I urge someone to try and create the next part to this story so that all the readers may fond yet another expansion to this peice of art.

More

I'd like to see more of this story.

Wow

Wow, what a story. I was hooked throughout and couldn't put it down! I'd love to read more! Excellent writing!

More!

Damn this stories great. couldn't put it down, would definitely love to see a sequel...

Has this author disappeared ? I believe so or he just doesn't feel it necessary to reply to emails .He has promised more on this story and that was almost 2 years ago . FTDS where are you ?

E-book.

http://jammyjimmy.blogspot.ca/2012/02/publishing.h tml

Absolutely mind riveting.

Great story.

Had to log in way before the end.

I've been reading this for days, the quality of your story is better than most novels and the characters very engaging. I've laughed out loud, gotten turned on, and yet am gradually feeling close to Kyle and I'm totally wrapped up in the world of Danny Tripps.
Thanks for an excellent story (thus far: Ch 17) and I look forward to reviewing again soon!
JT

I've rarely laughed so much

Chapter 22 was just fan-fucking-tastic.
This is quickly becoming one of my all time fav stories, I see it's available online.
I'll have to see if I can buy a copy, it's worth paying for.
JT

I'm glad it's over!

Now I can go back to life. Great story.

loved it

It isn't everyday when I can read something that gives the English Lit major in me the tingles. Amazing work, and I really do hope to read more of your work or a continuation of this.

Thank you!

Loved It

I thoroughly enjoyed it. Once I started, I couldn't stop reading until I finished. I was however looking for more integration of Kyle's adoptive parents, and possibly Katie's also. I think there could have been some interesting character development there. Also, call me a little sappy in my old age, but I was looking for a "happily ever after" between Kyle and Patricia. Might there be a sequel?

TROPICAL BLISS

I COULD NOT STOP READING IT ,IT WOULD BE COOL IF THAT HAPPENED TO ME ,HAVING A LIFE CHANGING THING LIKE THAT HAPPEN ,I CAN ONLY DREAM .. THE STORY WAS WELL SET OUT ,ITS ALMOST LIKE IT HAPPEND TO THE AUTHOR .. WELL DONE I WILL KEEP LOOKING FOR MORE ROCKING STORYS ..

I give up, this guy isn't coming back. I read this almost 2 years ago and have been waiting for a sequel ever since, but... nothing. Shame. Real shame. It's still a great piece of literature though and wherever you are JJ, I'd like to thank you for giving us the opportunity to enjoy it.

Literary excellence

The plot, the characters, the scenarios are well thought out giving an excellent read. Thank you.

Sequel please.

I understand that you are almost done with the island 2. I hope there would be more action between the multiple assistants and the three siblings. This is seriously a great story. Its not every day where you can read an erotic story that is intriguing and has not many grammar errors.

Definitely needs a sequel

Absolutely amazing story, would be a shame if there wasn't a sequel to follow it up.

Awesome

I really like your writing style, so please write more.

Great

Great story couldn't put it down thanks.

Holy shit

Best erotic story I've ever read. I'll be waiting for a sequel.

Wow

I must say its rare to get a story thats this good, eagerly awaiting a sequel (hopefully we learn and 'see' more of the sisters)

Wow. When is the sequel coming out?

As in really. This is one of the best stories I've read here. Ever.
Is there going to be a sequel?

Dang

Dude i completely almost skipped studying for a final because of this story.

Amazing

This is the best on this or any other site. Please I am begging you to write more!!
Screw the haters! I loved the length i find it a piss off to go back for more chapters.
Please please please write more of these characters 😘😘