Threads: The Island

best ever

Dude this story was the best I almost wanted to quit work to finish ready this .... Please finish it I beg you man I'm not the reading type but this story had me hooked

Thunderbirds Are Go!

Excellent story. Kept me reading because I wanted to see what would happen next to *all* the characters. Turned into a real page turner.

But...I half expected Kyle to setup Connor with the funding and island headquarters for a new venture called International Rescue. F.A.B. :-)

Great Story

This is the best story that I have read. The characters portrayed all add something to the story. Patricia's talk with Kyle about her sexual desires, first left me with the impression that she was going to end their relationship. Glad this did not happen.
Would like a sequel, as suggested in another comment, as to what happens between Kyle, Kara, Katie, Patricia, and Lakshmi. Also some possible hookups with other people, nothing lasting, as I think the five should stay together. Great writing, need more stories like this

Awesome

Not much of a reader, but this was inspiring. What are your other stories?

Fabulous, but...

Absolutely fabulous story that is book worthy.
But, ... The approach towards gender is very oldfashioned. Sexually as well as business wise and socially. In the long run that is very annoying.
Story line and character development are really good though. Th sex was not very much, but quite good.

The Island

You need to find an Agent to represent you and present this as a novel, it's very good and could be made into a series. It could also be made into a movie.

You need to have a good proofreader go over it before you show it to the Agent because there are some grammatical errors that need to be fixed.

Granted it has some sex in it but so does most every novel you read. literotica is a good and fun place but this is not a story that belongs here. I read hundreds of novels every year and this is better than a lot of acclaimed novels.

THE READERS HAVE WAITED TO LONG…….CONTINUE THIS STORY PLEASE!!!!

THIS IS A GREAT STORY, ALOT OF PEOPLE HAVE SHOWN THERE APPRECIATION TO YOUR WORK. AND STILL YOU DONT WRITE ANOTHER STORY. READERS WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS TO KATIE, KYLE, AND KARA, STICK TO SIMPLY BROTHER AND SISTER RELATIONSHIP, OR DO THEY HAVE SEX. AND WHAT ABOUT KYLE AND PATRICIA……PLEASE IF YOU READ THIS JAMMYJIMMY. FOR THE SAKE OF YOUR READERS AND YOU, CONTINUE THIS STORY ASAP. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE.

the best ive read, please write more!

the best story ive read on this site. the depth of details and the characters are amazing. you have to continue the story!

Looks like it's an unfinished dead story

Very well done, but there are many unfinished details and the story line is weakly ended. Since nothing has been developed in 2 years, maybe someone with strong story telling skills can continue the story and multiple tracks of story line in their own account. Come here and link their story line to the comments here.

Great Read!!

Please add to this tale!!

And then....?

A really fine read. It very much needs one or more sequels; however, perhaps the author has exhausted the storyline and just has nothing left to tell. If that's the case, thanks for the tale...I owe you one.

The Dutchman

Amazing story

This was a really unique spin on the seperated families stories and I really enjoyed it. I hope you pick it back up so we can see Kyle's adventures in Hollywood.

Great story, with some issues

I found the story's immersion to be far superior to almost every other story I've read on Literotica. It took me two weeks to get through it since I have so little time these days, but it was well worth the time.

Now for the issues. I found that the use of the non-US English vernacular for characters that were supposed to be American was constantly distracting. Kyle was supposed to be from San Antonio, correct? So why wouldn't he speak using language that was appropriate for that region?

Next, there are many little grammar and spelling errors throughout the text. Constant misuse of the word "discrete" when it should have been "discreet" in every instance, for example. Also, there are many extremely basic misuses of "its" versus "it's". The story itself is great enough to mostly overcome these problems, but if those were eliminated it would elevate this story to the level where you could seriously sell it.

I really wish that a movie could be made from this story. It's too bad that some of the things that happen are too controversial to be included in a mainstream production.

It has been a couple years since this was posted and you haven't posted anything new since then, so here's hoping that you will choose to at some point. Thank you for writing. I know it is hard work.

Continuation?!?!?!

Please continue this story!! It has been one of the best, and my personal favorite reads on literotica. Please, please, please continue!!!!!!

If you wanna contact me email me at bradychesrown@gmail.com

Should be published

I am an avid reader and have probably read between 300 to 500 books over the past five years and I would have paid money for your story. Please continue with the story.Thanks for a very enjoyable read. Vince

very very nice story
i especially liked the bonding between the siblings on the island
very good characterisations
excellent plot
desperately waiting for the next part u mentioned

Simply Awsome

Couldn't stop until I read the whole thing,brilliant storyline and simply captivating.

Read it without a break.....Amazing portrayal of characters....

Where are the other Thread Stories????

This was an awesome story. Author's note at the end stated that there were more stories in a "Series". If there are, I would enjoy reading them, if I knew where to find them!. Please let me know how to get to them.

Outstanding

If this were a novel, I'd buy it in a heartbeat. Simply amazing. Don't limit yourself to literotica.com, stretch your capabilities and publish.

Incredible

This may be the longest and best story I've ever read on this website. No wonder it's in the Hall of Fame.

It ended too soon!!

Amazing story, brilliantly written. It needs to be longer! Fantastic writing and story. Loved it.

Next

When is the next installment due. Island had awesome casting and a perfect segway to the next part. Suggestion though try having kyle start getting inro what patricia likes and maybe a three way with schmi

excellent

This is by far the best I have seen on here. Is this in a paperback? If not it should be. Would make a great series. Very well done!

Excellent!

Make it a full length book. Sell the rights for a movie.

excellent

I was caught up in the story. Excellent read. I would think you are a professional author.

Blew me away

This was such an amazing story I couldn't put it down. Had to read it all today. You truly have great talent as a writer. Nice pacing, great character development, realistic sex scenes. I can't think of a single negative comment.

Best story

This is the best story i have ever read on this or any adult site. This needs to be a book!!

dissapointed

this bloke is a failure as a full time writer. he writes this excellent story and rates highly and now he is too scared to continue it in case of failure, and yes he is still alive and well and kicking. such a shame he couldnt let the readers decide instead of being a coward or maybe the story wasnt his to start with.

Excellent story please continue with moreF

MORE

Please make a continuation of this story, this is by far the greatest story i have ever read, the charecters all have such in depth storys and personalities and to be frank, i really enjoyed the story and happenings more than the sex scenes

awesome

awesome piece.. Should really have a continuation please

Never gets old

Just finished reading this for the third time. Even when you know how it ends it's still a great read. It would be fun to continue the escapades of the trio and I hope you find the inspiration to do it someday.

great read

Its always good to see a long story like this rather than split up into tons of chapters. The writing overall was very good, the plot was good and the development of Kyle's character over the course of the story was superb. However I think it was a mistake to post this in the incest section. I feel like you would do better writing non-erotic fiction or fiction with only an occasional erotic moment and posing it in literoticas non erotic section. Otherwise very well done, certainly a 5 star story.

Excelent

Fully agree with the comments below :)
Looking forward to reading more....

Awesome!!

That was the best story I have ever read!!! I felt like I was part of the story. Please please continue the story!!!!!!

Awesome Story!!

This story is a well written as any novel I have ever read. The fact that it had some really hot sex i it was just the icing on the cake.I do have one complaint though. I cannot believe that no one ate any pussy at al! !!!!! I personally love eating pussy and I love reading about it and I don't believe that a woman is properly loved or fucked unless she has been well and truly eaten. So if you do a sequel or continuation you really need to include that. Frequently!!!!

make a movie

This story has potential to become an actual film

Bravo, Bravo, Bravo

I would have paid good money to read that story. Well done sir, well done

fantastic

I have to say this, has had me from the first page, and it feels like a novel i would pick up and read it was fantastic. please keep it up and I look forward to watching for future things from you and seeing if you have anything else you wrote. I never make these comments but your story was too good not to tell you how much i enjoyed it.

A+++ Story

I couldn't stop reading!! Great story! Make this a novel.. I want to read more.. I would buy this!! Many people would buy this!!

Encore Please!

This story is excellent, I hope you can bring yourself to continue this a little farther. What you have is an awesome beginning, and I was saddened to finish it.

This Should Be a Movie!

What a great story, well developed characters, wonderful sex! Please give us a sequel!

Amazing Story ... Totally Loved it 👏👏👏

This is a superb story that have ever read. Every bit of line and moment is narrated in such a beautiful way that i totally got lost while i was reading, every part , every line, every moment a rough picture got created n i started imagining whole scenario from beginning till the end. Thanks for sharing such a great story and it's a ernest request to share a sequel of it after they got separated from the island. pls create and share it's sequel.

WOW...

I couldn't stop reading, thats a good thing by the way. It takes a lot to suck me into something like this.

i like it am looking for your next stories thank you

Awesome story,love to read more like it

interesting

well written thoroughly enjoyable.

what's next

awesome writing, so vivid, it was like being there under the palm trees, would love to hear more!!

Very good story and writing. Enjoyed it.

Enjoyed this story very much. Well thought out and written, look forward to more

Fantastic!

Absolutely fantastic! Looking at the published date it seems highly unlikely there will be others to this series. Shame that.