I'm Garrus Vakarian and this is now my favourite story on literotica.
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Anonymous05/12/14
Sleep Loss 4 Sure
Read all 42 chapters only getting up long enough to go pee. Good story
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Anonymous05/17/14
The best!
Great story, expertly written...thumbs up
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Anonymous05/24/14
Almost perfect
Great premise and just enough sex.
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Anonymous05/24/14
still the best
Third read,never stales,still my favourite...
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Anonymous05/28/14
Please continue the story.
This is one of the greatest stories here that I love & have read more than 3x.
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Anonymous05/29/14
Hottest story ever
Wow dude I loved the story my only complaint is that Kyle won't dominate Patricia I want him to abuse her and I loved Sarah's slutty story on the helicopter I came thinking about that wow she's hot!!!! I also love the shower mid air sex with Kyle and Patricia that was hot as hell do a dp with Kyle Patricia and Conner or Kyle Conner and Sarah but wow great story!!!!!!!!!!
Thank you so much for this story, Great work!
I hope you can find the time to continue this story that i enjoyed reading so much.
Some comments went on about it being too long, but i´m sure that most if not all people that read it thought it Wasn't long enough, and hope as much as i that you bring us a sequel soon.
Best wishes,
Tempo.
I loved this story. I loved reading about Katie and Kara's feeling for Kyle. It was absolutely beautiful. What a girl wants is feeling arms of the person who would make her feel safe, loved and happy around her all the time.
Patricia is kind of a bitch, coming in between Katie's and Kara's way. I hope she dies (LOL). I hope Kyle would stop messing around with Patricia.
I would like to know what will happen when the triplets will get back together after been apart for 2 weeks. I hope the triplets bond of Love would deepen. The way they feel about each other is like the purest form of LOVE.
I hope they consummate their LOVE (one on one though, not a fan of 3somes)
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Anonymous06/03/14
Best story EVER!!!
OMIGOD.. This is the best story I've ever read.. A little bit of everything.. I actually got jealous over Trisha.. How odd is that.. The chemistry between the triplets is jst brilliant.. One of a kind.. You are very talented.. Keep up the good work and pliz pliz pliz write another chapter.. I'm dying to read more.. Pliz pliz pliz do continue :)
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Anonymous06/04/14
Hot
OMG this was an Awesome :) story. I laughed got disappointed pissed off and happy. Glad that fucker got what he deserved with a bullet to the neck. The suspense with that scene was killing me. I wish this had a sequel.
I wonder if the author will get around to the sequels?
That said, this was truly awesome. So much thought must have gone into this. And I really do appreciate the time and I'm sure trouble that something of this magnitude would have taken.
Here's hoping for more.
But make things easy for yourself. Do say one or two chapters a month.
Much less workload.
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Anonymous06/07/14
Hopefully the author is still around to eventually continue this story. But he last updated his blog over 2 years ago with a note that he was fighting off some illness that was going around. Persons who have commented here and on his blog that they tried contacting him have reported not receiving any reply. Personally I also hope he is still around and can continue this story, I thoroughly enjoyed it both times I have read it so far.
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Anonymous06/09/14
Outstanding
Reading through this story I found it completely fantastic. Very in depth and entrancing. I'd love to lead more about those that were introduced in this story, see where things go for the triplets and for Kyle and Patricia.
Think this is the best story on the net. All the main characters had personality, and you could sympathize with most of them. ( Except Edwin.) Even the side characters that didn't get much were interesting. Kinda sad that Patricia didn't end up as Kyle's Girlfriend, but I guess I understand her not wanting to fall in love, and be tied down ); . I wish there was more Kyle, and Katie interaction. Through the story it felt she kind of got the short end of the stick. We only got two moments of her and Kyle being alone after getting to the Island. But I kind of understand that they had a really deep relationship so, I m guessing you didn't know how to continue it without them getting intimate again. Overall amazing 5/5
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Anonymous06/16/14
Thank you
Well written flowed along at an enticing pace from beginning to end. Please take up offer of an editor or proof read and it would be a perfect yarn........Thanks again hope theres more of your stories out there.....
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Anonymous06/17/14
Great Story
I loved this story. I want more. I want to know more about Patricia's fetish. I want more about Kara and Katie's lives. I want to read about Kyle's experience in L A.
More!!
What an Amazing read this was, just wow....I loved it. I finished reading it 2 days ago and I'm still thinking about the story...fantasing what could happen next...I just want more story!! I hope you pick up writing again because in this universe there is so much more to write, so much more connections could be made......Im looking forward to the next chapter...This is seriously the best story there is on the internet.
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Anonymous06/23/14
movie...movie...movie!!!!!!!
Not a trashy movie but an intimate love story between a guy his two sisters he didn't know he had and beautiful woman he meets along the way(Patricia). will Patricia except things or freak out about it all will Kyle except her freaky sex side or not ...i really believe that this would be a great movie plenty of storyline to run with for multiple episodes I can't wait to see what happens next
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Anonymous06/27/14
Fun
really like this story, reads like a good book.....
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Anonymous06/29/14
wow
This was a great experience. It makes you think about it. Great writing too. But wondering what happens next..
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Anonymous06/30/14
Part 2 for the Island
I hope definately there's a part 2. Great story.
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Anonymous06/30/14
The Best I've ever read
Absolutely the best written story I have ever read on here, I too hope you write part 2
I thoroughly enjoyed the story. Interesting premise, memorable characters, and a beautiful location. I hope there will be an update to the story at some point. Good job!
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Anonymous07/09/14
Great story and sex.
Hope there is much more soon.
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Anonymous07/12/14
WOW
I loved it and couldn't stop reading. I was sorry to see the story end. Thanks to you for writing it.
Thanks for taking the time to write and post such a great story. I love the irony that Edwin and Patricia would have been much more sexually compatible as he could make her the sub she so desired to be!
How about another chapter???? want to see where this goes.... been looking for almost two years for more....
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Anonymous07/27/14
is it done?
I see the author has not posted in a long time.
There was mention of writing this as a book, and I would love to buy it, but can not find it anywhere.
His blog
http://jammyjimmy.blogspot.com/
doesnt seem to mention the story that I could find.
a shame, this was top notch, and would like to see it finished
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Anonymous07/27/14
Re: Is it Done?
...and other posted desires for more to this story, the last post in his blog was that he was fighting some illness that was going around and had been for a week. That was almost 2 and a half years ago. Persons have posted here and in the comments to that blog post that they have tried contacting him and received no response. Some claim to have known who he was in real life, and also had no responses back. So unless this is his personal mind game on his readers, it is very possible JammyJimmy has passed away.
Unfortunately this is becoming all too common online. We come to know someone's virtual self, they can just disappear one day and we never find out what happened. Just like some people have made arrangements with a trusted friend in real life to "cleanse" their belongings in case of serious illness or death so potentially embarrassing items will not be found, similar arrangements might need to become more common to take care of our online existences. I do know that on other forums that I have appreciated the occasional post from family or friends letting us know of the passing of another who frequented there.
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Anonymous07/29/14
Excellent story
Excellent story, couldn't put it down. I've got nothing done today! This is a full length story rather than "quick fix". The premise is a bit far-fetched but, putting that aside, the characters are all believeable and I wanted to read on and find out what happened.
For some reason I avoided this story for a long time, partly because this topic isn't really a big turn-on for me. I finally broke down and read it after it came up on a search. Three days later, I can see why it is rated so highly. Not many writers on this site could hold my attention for hours like this one has. A decent story with believable characters that have individual personalities?
Also, if I were Kyle, I would have slammed Kara so hard.
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Anonymous08/04/14
Threads on
Simply outstanding. Need a follow up though esp in regards to Kyle and Patricia, Kyle and his sisters.
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Anonymous08/05/14
More please!
Great story looking forward to next part
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Anonymous08/05/14
loved it!
So she is the movie release date? I could see it playing in my head! Well done!
I have been waiting for the next part for over 2 years now. And still keep coming here to check like fools.
Please write a follow up buddy. This was a really great story, and i am unable to leave it in between like the others i have left.
Where the f*ck r u dude?
I was so fackin patient dude... where is the 2nd part? do you even workin' on it? should we wait? please throw us a bone!
he responded to his blog
Two years ago. The question was "are you alive?" And he said he'd been fighting this sickness roaming around.
JJ was never heard from again.
Awesome storyline!!
I love this story. If the author is really dead, its a tragedy, not just on its own, but because the world lost a heck of a writer
worth every word.
it is nearly 6 a.m. I can't believe I have been reading this all night. compelling and sexy. thank you.
Loved it
I'm Garrus Vakarian and this is now my favourite story on literotica.
Sleep Loss 4 Sure
Read all 42 chapters only getting up long enough to go pee. Good story
The best!
Great story, expertly written...thumbs up
Almost perfect
Great premise and just enough sex.
still the best
Third read,never stales,still my favourite...
Please continue the story.
This is one of the greatest stories here that I love & have read more than 3x.
Hottest story ever
Wow dude I loved the story my only complaint is that Kyle won't dominate Patricia I want him to abuse her and I loved Sarah's slutty story on the helicopter I came thinking about that wow she's hot!!!! I also love the shower mid air sex with Kyle and Patricia that was hot as hell do a dp with Kyle Patricia and Conner or Kyle Conner and Sarah but wow great story!!!!!!!!!!
Brilliant
Thank you so much for this story, Great work!
I hope you can find the time to continue this story that i enjoyed reading so much.
Some comments went on about it being too long, but i´m sure that most if not all people that read it thought it Wasn't long enough, and hope as much as i that you bring us a sequel soon.
Best wishes,
Tempo.
Best story on this website
I loved this story. I loved reading about Katie and Kara's feeling for Kyle. It was absolutely beautiful. What a girl wants is feeling arms of the person who would make her feel safe, loved and happy around her all the time.
Patricia is kind of a bitch, coming in between Katie's and Kara's way. I hope she dies (LOL). I hope Kyle would stop messing around with Patricia.
I would like to know what will happen when the triplets will get back together after been apart for 2 weeks. I hope the triplets bond of Love would deepen. The way they feel about each other is like the purest form of LOVE.
I hope they consummate their LOVE (one on one though, not a fan of 3somes)
Best story EVER!!!
OMIGOD.. This is the best story I've ever read.. A little bit of everything.. I actually got jealous over Trisha.. How odd is that.. The chemistry between the triplets is jst brilliant.. One of a kind.. You are very talented.. Keep up the good work and pliz pliz pliz write another chapter.. I'm dying to read more.. Pliz pliz pliz do continue :)
Hot
OMG this was an Awesome :) story. I laughed got disappointed pissed off and happy. Glad that fucker got what he deserved with a bullet to the neck. The suspense with that scene was killing me. I wish this had a sequel.
I finally found time to read this epic.
I wonder if the author will get around to the sequels?
That said, this was truly awesome. So much thought must have gone into this. And I really do appreciate the time and I'm sure trouble that something of this magnitude would have taken.
Here's hoping for more.
But make things easy for yourself. Do say one or two chapters a month.
Much less workload.
Hopefully the author is still around to eventually continue this story. But he last updated his blog over 2 years ago with a note that he was fighting off some illness that was going around. Persons who have commented here and on his blog that they tried contacting him have reported not receiving any reply. Personally I also hope he is still around and can continue this story, I thoroughly enjoyed it both times I have read it so far.
Outstanding
Reading through this story I found it completely fantastic. Very in depth and entrancing. I'd love to lead more about those that were introduced in this story, see where things go for the triplets and for Kyle and Patricia.
Greatest Story I have read...
This is without a doubt the best story I have ever read!
nice
needs another chapter to complete it though
Great story. Very well written.
Great story. Would like to know what happens between Kyle and his sisters though.
Wow
Absolutely enthralling. You sir, are a gifted author that's in need of an editor. Do you have one currently? I'm a willing volunteer :D
Fantastic read. you should wright books. I hope you come out with part #2
Loved it.
Amazing
Think this is the best story on the net. All the main characters had personality, and you could sympathize with most of them. ( Except Edwin.) Even the side characters that didn't get much were interesting. Kinda sad that Patricia didn't end up as Kyle's Girlfriend, but I guess I understand her not wanting to fall in love, and be tied down ); . I wish there was more Kyle, and Katie interaction. Through the story it felt she kind of got the short end of the stick. We only got two moments of her and Kyle being alone after getting to the Island. But I kind of understand that they had a really deep relationship so, I m guessing you didn't know how to continue it without them getting intimate again. Overall amazing 5/5
Thank you
Well written flowed along at an enticing pace from beginning to end. Please take up offer of an editor or proof read and it would be a perfect yarn........Thanks again hope theres more of your stories out there.....
Great Story
I loved this story. I want more. I want to know more about Patricia's fetish. I want more about Kara and Katie's lives. I want to read about Kyle's experience in L A.
More!!
Amazing
What an Amazing read this was, just wow....I loved it. I finished reading it 2 days ago and I'm still thinking about the story...fantasing what could happen next...I just want more story!! I hope you pick up writing again because in this universe there is so much more to write, so much more connections could be made......Im looking forward to the next chapter...This is seriously the best story there is on the internet.
movie...movie...movie!!!!!!!
Not a trashy movie but an intimate love story between a guy his two sisters he didn't know he had and beautiful woman he meets along the way(Patricia). will Patricia except things or freak out about it all will Kyle except her freaky sex side or not ...i really believe that this would be a great movie plenty of storyline to run with for multiple episodes I can't wait to see what happens next
Fun
really like this story, reads like a good book.....
wow
This was a great experience. It makes you think about it. Great writing too. But wondering what happens next..
Part 2 for the Island
I hope definately there's a part 2. Great story.
The Best I've ever read
Absolutely the best written story I have ever read on here, I too hope you write part 2
Twice
I have read this twice now and will read it again, but you really need to write a second one. If you write a book I'll read that too.
Ed
I love Ed. Laughed really hard.
Great storie
Loved the storie hope you are ok have not seen any undated on you in over 2 years! Hope there's more to come
Great Story
I thoroughly enjoyed the story. Interesting premise, memorable characters, and a beautiful location. I hope there will be an update to the story at some point. Good job!
Great story and sex.
Hope there is much more soon.
WOW
I loved it and couldn't stop reading. I was sorry to see the story end. Thanks to you for writing it.
thanks
Thanks for taking the time to write and post such a great story. I love the irony that Edwin and Patricia would have been much more sexually compatible as he could make her the sub she so desired to be!
More Please???
JJ,
How about another chapter???? want to see where this goes.... been looking for almost two years for more....
is it done?
I see the author has not posted in a long time.
There was mention of writing this as a book, and I would love to buy it, but can not find it anywhere.
His blog
http://jammyjimmy.blogspot.com/
doesnt seem to mention the story that I could find.
a shame, this was top notch, and would like to see it finished
Re: Is it Done?
...and other posted desires for more to this story, the last post in his blog was that he was fighting some illness that was going around and had been for a week. That was almost 2 and a half years ago. Persons have posted here and in the comments to that blog post that they have tried contacting him and received no response. Some claim to have known who he was in real life, and also had no responses back. So unless this is his personal mind game on his readers, it is very possible JammyJimmy has passed away.
Unfortunately this is becoming all too common online. We come to know someone's virtual self, they can just disappear one day and we never find out what happened. Just like some people have made arrangements with a trusted friend in real life to "cleanse" their belongings in case of serious illness or death so potentially embarrassing items will not be found, similar arrangements might need to become more common to take care of our online existences. I do know that on other forums that I have appreciated the occasional post from family or friends letting us know of the passing of another who frequented there.
Excellent story
Excellent story, couldn't put it down. I've got nothing done today! This is a full length story rather than "quick fix". The premise is a bit far-fetched but, putting that aside, the characters are all believeable and I wanted to read on and find out what happened.
Amazing
Absolutely amazing story.
Book length story that was well worth the time
For some reason I avoided this story for a long time, partly because this topic isn't really a big turn-on for me. I finally broke down and read it after it came up on a search. Three days later, I can see why it is rated so highly. Not many writers on this site could hold my attention for hours like this one has. A decent story with believable characters that have individual personalities?
Also, if I were Kyle, I would have slammed Kara so hard.
Threads on
Simply outstanding. Need a follow up though esp in regards to Kyle and Patricia, Kyle and his sisters.
More please!
Great story looking forward to next part
loved it!
So she is the movie release date? I could see it playing in my head! Well done!
Awesome
I loved the story definitely need a follow up
Why left it hanging? :(
I have been waiting for the next part for over 2 years now. And still keep coming here to check like fools.
Please write a follow up buddy. This was a really great story, and i am unable to leave it in between like the others i have left.
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