The most professionally written piece I have read in a long time. You must be a professional writer, if not, you should seriously think of taking this as a part time career. Well done.
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Anonymous08/10/14
Re: Why left it hanging?
If you have been coming back the last couple years, why haven't you read the comments? If you had you would have read comments from any number of persons that it appears that JammyJimmy may have passed on. He hasn't posted on his blog (link on his profile page) for over 2 years, and his last post was that he had been trying to recover from an illness that had him down for the previous week.
I am quite sad that it seems there will not be more to this story. It was very well written. The descriptions of people and placed made it very easy to envision everything.
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Anonymous08/23/14
Threads The Island
One of the best stories I've read. Written really well. Should make a movie out of with pt.1 etc.
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Anonymous08/24/14
best story
Clever story believable characters if you are still writing you should think about publishing
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Anonymous08/26/14
D Bomb!!!!
Am entranced by the content, style and structure of the story. really amazing.
I first read this the day it was posted... wrote to the author more than a few times... he/she has dropped off the face of the earth.. without a trace .... even went to his site.. nothing.... still 5 stars....
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Anonymous08/31/14
Brilliant!
Couldn't put it down!......A best-seller, in anyones terms!
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Anonymous09/01/14
Sensational - could be a Best Seller!
If the author has passed away, so sorry to his family and loved ones for their loss. From the readers vantage we're all looking for MORE MORE MORE!!! Couldn't put it down - Well done sir!!!
Awesome story...wish there was more! Great writing, plot, characters, and kept my interest until I finished and now want more! For the third time...more please! (if possible)
The true test of good literature is to be satisfied after the last page but to want still more. That's how I feel right now. Volume 2 would be a natural and I wish it were written. But I am very satisfied to have read this story.
RJ
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Anonymous09/10/14
STILL ALIVE
A PERSON WHO KNOWS HIM PERSONALLY HAS STATED THAT HE IS STILL ALIVE BUT WOULD NOT SAY WHY HE HASN'T RESPONDED TO COMMENTS OR WRITTEN ANYMORE WHICH IS SUCH A SHAME AS HE IS AN EXCELLENT WRITER.
One amazing read just in general. Sorta a love nut so only a four star for the main couple (dont wanna spoil too much)
All in all... I really have no words. I can't believe how long I spent hitting next on my phone just waiting to hear the rest of the story. Thank you for your time and dedication!
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Anonymous09/19/14
too long!!! Can be a book.
This is way too long to want to read. If i had an erfection im surd id lose it.. hehe
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Anonymous09/25/14
love it
A well written story.
I'd love to read more about the carrectors and I'll be looking out for more of your work
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Anonymous09/25/14
Excellent
one of the few stories I have enjoyed from beginning to end. I look forward to the next installation, and hope it will be soon.
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Anonymous10/01/14
When I first stumbled upon this story, I figured I'd get to indulge my pleasures and have a decent scenario in which to fantasize. What I did not expect, however, was to scroll past a sex scene here or there to continue with the story itself.
Well written, great relatable and dynamic characters, captivating plot, and satisfying outcome. Great job!
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Anonymous10/03/14
captivating
wonderful story had me captivated from the first word to the last thank you for the great read and look forward to more of the charcters in this story........Brilliant Mate
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Anonymous10/04/14
Fantastic
This was an amazingly enjoyable and captivating read. I enjoyed reading it immensely. As with at least one other reader, it was a first for me to be scrolling/skimming past a sex scene or two just to continue with the actual story. Would love to read more with these same characters. A sequel would be very good. Very relatable characters. Very well written. Cheers!
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Anonymous10/04/14
Fantastic
I thoroughly enjoyed this read. I was not expecting a novel. I thought it was tastefully written along with a great story line. I have stopped reading many submissions due to the poorly written sexual encounters. Hope to see more!
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Anonymous10/04/14
just another one
Just found your novel and enjoyed it immensely. Great story, tastefully written.Rare to find on Literotica.
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Anonymous10/05/14
Please
It's rare that I get sucked into a story, please tell me there is more?
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Anonymous10/06/14
best story ever
best story ever , it took time to make but you've got an unmatched story as a quality not even close great nove
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Anonymous10/07/14
thoroughly enjoyable
i have to agree with all the comments I have read. It makes a change to actually read and enjoy a story with a proper theme without the reliance only on lurid sex.
One of the very best stories I have ever read! Very well done!
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Anonymous10/09/14
anonymous Englishman!
Well written, for the most part anyway. Wildly fantasy, obviously American.I suppose this media is fairly anonymous,otherwise this subscriber would be in the libel courts I would imagine.
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Anonymous10/10/14
too good
you don't need a comment, when you are on the hall of fame, but i really liked it. the story has it's flaws, but whatever i have enjoyed it, specially the emotions and domestics with patricia. thanks for the story.
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Anonymous10/14/14
great story
absolutely one of the best adult fiction stories I have ever read. I truly enjoyed it. Thank you
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Anonymous10/20/14
Please do a part two to this!
This was awesome! You could make a movie out of this! Please keep on writing stories like this!
Couldn't stop reading. Hated to put it down for sleep or work. Great great story and cast of characters. Plot with twists and turn. Only thing for me, and it didn't detract from my enjoyment, was that you just forgot about the parents. I kept wondering how this whirlwind change sat with them. You brought in Kyle ' s parents briefly and only a slight mention of Kate ' s and disposed of Kara ' s handily but I kept wondering about them. I know this story was about the three of them but? Overall I'd give it a 12 on a scale of 1 to 10.
This is one of the best stories I've read on Literotica. I so wish there was more posted for us to enjoy. However, since it's been almost five years since the story was posted, I've lost hope of seeing a sequel.
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Anonymous10/30/14
Wowza....
This was a fantastic read! This could TOTALLY be an A-List movie! It definitely needs a sequal!
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Anonymous11/02/14
sequel.
Read thia story in a couple of days. Loved your writing style and the length of the story. Im hoping there is a sequel for this as im hooked. But as someone else commented. This story was submitted in 2011...I read through the comment's and seen a reply from the author late 2011 saying there are sequels.
Where are they man!? I need them! !
I have only read the 1st 10 pages and am enthralled. Will carry on. Well done and thanks so much for this story
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Anonymous11/09/14
Jesus crist
This story was AWESOME and great work
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Anonymous11/10/14
The best
Intelligently written. wish there were more . You should add more to it. Great job the best
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Anonymous11/12/14
fantastic work!
I have read a great deal of novels. This stands on its own against many of my favorites. It would have been great without the erotica but I enjoyed that as well. Hope to see a sequel in the future.
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Anonymous11/15/14
Amazing.
I've blasted through many stories on Literotica in the recent years, but this story is by far the most remarkable. Amazing in its form, the emotion of the tales is something that I feel better than anything Ive read on this site. Cant wait to read more of your work.
An absolute masterpiece, with characters and settings to rival any piece of popular fiction and just enough believably hot sex to keep things really interesting. Looking forward to reading more of your work. That was amazing.
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Anonymous11/19/14
Bloody Hell
You had to go and write one of the best stories i've ever read! Job well done, I hope to see more from you in the future!
P.S. Not sure if it's you posting it, but there is a person posting chapters from this on stories.xnxx.com, and claiming it's his/hers (Username: xmistiex). Just thought i'd give you a heads up if it wasn't your account posting.
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Anonymous11/20/14
Can't believe you made me read this.
This isn't what I was looking for. It was too good it made a grown man cry!
I never expected such a amazing story in literotica. It is more than porn and fantastic. Waiting for the next part to be posted.
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Anonymous12/02/14
Great story
I must say, as a regular visitor to literotica.com, this is by far one of the best stories I've come across. I like the in depth approach, that it wasn't all about sex. What happens next is the important question. I'd like to read a continuation of the tale
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Anonymous12/03/14
love it but
I wish you would've went into more detail about the other characters sexual encounters. appeared
I started reading this story and I just couldn't put it down. Please write more, I would love to see where it goes from here, and I'm honestly oping Kyle will hook up with Kara even though I love Patricia too. I also kinda hope he gets a little more aggressive with his sexuality, since he seems very submissive but all the girls in this enjoy a male with a more dominant role.
Anyways, I loved this story, please give us more :)
English
Most Professional
The most professionally written piece I have read in a long time. You must be a professional writer, if not, you should seriously think of taking this as a part time career. Well done.
Re: Why left it hanging?
If you have been coming back the last couple years, why haven't you read the comments? If you had you would have read comments from any number of persons that it appears that JammyJimmy may have passed on. He hasn't posted on his blog (link on his profile page) for over 2 years, and his last post was that he had been trying to recover from an illness that had him down for the previous week.
Waiting for next
Waiting for next parts. Please give next parts.
:(
I am quite sad that it seems there will not be more to this story. It was very well written. The descriptions of people and placed made it very easy to envision everything.
Threads The Island
One of the best stories I've read. Written really well. Should make a movie out of with pt.1 etc.
best story
Clever story believable characters if you are still writing you should think about publishing
D Bomb!!!!
Am entranced by the content, style and structure of the story. really amazing.
sad this story cant continue
I first read this the day it was posted... wrote to the author more than a few times... he/she has dropped off the face of the earth.. without a trace .... even went to his site.. nothing.... still 5 stars....
Brilliant!
Couldn't put it down!......A best-seller, in anyones terms!
Sensational - could be a Best Seller!
If the author has passed away, so sorry to his family and loved ones for their loss. From the readers vantage we're all looking for MORE MORE MORE!!! Couldn't put it down - Well done sir!!!
A FAVORITE!
Awesome story...wish there was more! Great writing, plot, characters, and kept my interest until I finished and now want more! For the third time...more please! (if possible)
The true test of good literature ...
The true test of good literature is to be satisfied after the last page but to want still more. That's how I feel right now. Volume 2 would be a natural and I wish it were written. But I am very satisfied to have read this story.
RJ
STILL ALIVE
A PERSON WHO KNOWS HIM PERSONALLY HAS STATED THAT HE IS STILL ALIVE BUT WOULD NOT SAY WHY HE HASN'T RESPONDED TO COMMENTS OR WRITTEN ANYMORE WHICH IS SUCH A SHAME AS HE IS AN EXCELLENT WRITER.
super super read. one of the best i have ever read...and i have read a lot.
One amazing read just in general. Sorta a love nut so only a four star for the main couple (dont wanna spoil too much)
All in all... I really have no words. I can't believe how long I spent hitting next on my phone just waiting to hear the rest of the story. Thank you for your time and dedication!
too long!!! Can be a book.
This is way too long to want to read. If i had an erfection im surd id lose it.. hehe
love it
A well written story.
I'd love to read more about the carrectors and I'll be looking out for more of your work
Excellent
one of the few stories I have enjoyed from beginning to end. I look forward to the next installation, and hope it will be soon.
When I first stumbled upon this story, I figured I'd get to indulge my pleasures and have a decent scenario in which to fantasize. What I did not expect, however, was to scroll past a sex scene here or there to continue with the story itself.
Well written, great relatable and dynamic characters, captivating plot, and satisfying outcome. Great job!
captivating
wonderful story had me captivated from the first word to the last thank you for the great read and look forward to more of the charcters in this story........Brilliant Mate
Fantastic
This was an amazingly enjoyable and captivating read. I enjoyed reading it immensely. As with at least one other reader, it was a first for me to be scrolling/skimming past a sex scene or two just to continue with the actual story. Would love to read more with these same characters. A sequel would be very good. Very relatable characters. Very well written. Cheers!
Fantastic
I thoroughly enjoyed this read. I was not expecting a novel. I thought it was tastefully written along with a great story line. I have stopped reading many submissions due to the poorly written sexual encounters. Hope to see more!
just another one
Just found your novel and enjoyed it immensely. Great story, tastefully written.Rare to find on Literotica.
Please
It's rare that I get sucked into a story, please tell me there is more?
best story ever
best story ever , it took time to make but you've got an unmatched story as a quality not even close great nove
thoroughly enjoyable
i have to agree with all the comments I have read. It makes a change to actually read and enjoy a story with a proper theme without the reliance only on lurid sex.
Better then best!!!!
Marvelous!
One of the very best stories I have ever read! Very well done!
anonymous Englishman!
Well written, for the most part anyway. Wildly fantasy, obviously American.I suppose this media is fairly anonymous,otherwise this subscriber would be in the libel courts I would imagine.
too good
you don't need a comment, when you are on the hall of fame, but i really liked it. the story has it's flaws, but whatever i have enjoyed it, specially the emotions and domestics with patricia. thanks for the story.
great story
absolutely one of the best adult fiction stories I have ever read. I truly enjoyed it. Thank you
Please do a part two to this!
This was awesome! You could make a movie out of this! Please keep on writing stories like this!
fucking fantastic
Couldn't stop reading. Hated to put it down for sleep or work. Great great story and cast of characters. Plot with twists and turn. Only thing for me, and it didn't detract from my enjoyment, was that you just forgot about the parents. I kept wondering how this whirlwind change sat with them. You brought in Kyle ' s parents briefly and only a slight mention of Kate ' s and disposed of Kara ' s handily but I kept wondering about them. I know this story was about the three of them but? Overall I'd give it a 12 on a scale of 1 to 10.
Wishing for more
This is one of the best stories I've read on Literotica. I so wish there was more posted for us to enjoy. However, since it's been almost five years since the story was posted, I've lost hope of seeing a sequel.
Wowza....
This was a fantastic read! This could TOTALLY be an A-List movie! It definitely needs a sequal!
sequel.
Read thia story in a couple of days. Loved your writing style and the length of the story. Im hoping there is a sequel for this as im hooked. But as someone else commented. This story was submitted in 2011...I read through the comment's and seen a reply from the author late 2011 saying there are sequels.
Where are they man!? I need them! !
Awesome
I have only read the 1st 10 pages and am enthralled. Will carry on. Well done and thanks so much for this story
Jesus crist
This story was AWESOME and great work
The best
Intelligently written. wish there were more . You should add more to it. Great job the best
fantastic work!
I have read a great deal of novels. This stands on its own against many of my favorites. It would have been great without the erotica but I enjoyed that as well. Hope to see a sequel in the future.
Amazing.
I've blasted through many stories on Literotica in the recent years, but this story is by far the most remarkable. Amazing in its form, the emotion of the tales is something that I feel better than anything Ive read on this site. Cant wait to read more of your work.
Amazing Story
Great story with believable sex scenes.
Superb work
An absolute masterpiece, with characters and settings to rival any piece of popular fiction and just enough believably hot sex to keep things really interesting. Looking forward to reading more of your work. That was amazing.
Bloody Hell
You had to go and write one of the best stories i've ever read! Job well done, I hope to see more from you in the future!
P.S. Not sure if it's you posting it, but there is a person posting chapters from this on stories.xnxx.com, and claiming it's his/hers (Username: xmistiex). Just thought i'd give you a heads up if it wasn't your account posting.
Can't believe you made me read this.
This isn't what I was looking for. It was too good it made a grown man cry!
5!
loved it
It was a great story.I loved it but I would wish to know what happened to siblings after the trip
Awesome story
I never expected such a amazing story in literotica. It is more than porn and fantastic. Waiting for the next part to be posted.
Great story
I must say, as a regular visitor to literotica.com, this is by far one of the best stories I've come across. I like the in depth approach, that it wasn't all about sex. What happens next is the important question. I'd like to read a continuation of the tale
love it but
I wish you would've went into more detail about the other characters sexual encounters. appeared
Please update
I started reading this story and I just couldn't put it down. Please write more, I would love to see where it goes from here, and I'm honestly oping Kyle will hook up with Kara even though I love Patricia too. I also kinda hope he gets a little more aggressive with his sexuality, since he seems very submissive but all the girls in this enjoy a male with a more dominant role.
Anyways, I loved this story, please give us more :)
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