Threads: The Island

Best of all

Best story I've read on this site. Keep this going, write a book on it, it was great!

Damn wish it wouldn't end

This is on of the best stories I've read on this site not many people put real work into there stories and it show with the major gaps in the story and the spelling and grammar along with poor build up and intro but this one had very few grammar problems that could have been easily over looked but I really do wish more people wrote stories like this

Amazing story

This had got to be my favourite story here and the seamless transition in the storyline is absolutely brilliant. Saw this to be on the top for quite sometime and to be honest I didn't think I'll enjoy this long a read, but glad to say that I'm really happy I gave it a go. Absolutely brilliant. More than the sex parts, the storyline is what clicked. Hope you write more. I am looking forward to a follow up story if this where he'll get his way with the sisters.
Good luck.

Time

Now holidays, nothing better to do and I'm glad to discover this story and its worthy of the time I spend reading it thoroughly. I hope that is aa part 2 link to this . :)

Movie

Should be made into a movie. I'm not a reader but I enjoyed reading this a lot

WOW?!

FLIPPING HELL ONE WORD TO SUM THIS UP: MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Awesome !

Now that was an adventure story !

Love, sex, murder, blackmail, all on a tropical island: more like an episode of Magnum ! I loved every one of the 42 pages. So nice to get into a story that has actually been finished and had a proper ending.

Please follow this up, Kyle and Patricia are a hot couple, his sisters are nice characters too, so a little 'messing around' between them would be good, maybe even a night with the four of them! I guess I really don't care what happens.

But another story based around their time in LA and NY would be good, followed by them all meting up again on the island. You might even get Lakshmi and Patricia both involved with Kyle ! And maybe have Katie and Kara become 'friendly' as well?

Finally, Kyle and Patricia have to become an item. Lakshmi could turn out to be a dominatrix and Patricia could get the domination and BDSM she craves from her, while she and Kyle have a more 'conventional' relationship. They could then become a permanent threesome, Lakshmi could become an assistant to both Kyle and Patricia - who could get married and have a family.

But given you wrote this 4 years ago, I guess we aren't going to get any more, are we ? That is a real shame.

But nevertheless, thanks for this story, it really was 'awesome' !

good storie

it took me about a week to read all the pages here and there but liked it verry much please let me know if you do more with these people would like to see what happens next.

More

How can you leave us hanging like that !

Great story. First comment written.

Loved the detailed characters. Why no follow-up? I want to know what happens to the three siblings, please.

Fabulous!!!!!!!!

Brilliant story, great characters, great storyline. Can't wait for more of the same.

amazing story with great characters can't wait to see more like this

"Hanging"

I hope you see fit to finish this story. You left it hanging. Hopefully you see fit keep this story going.

Please write the next installment!

I've read this twice now and hoped on the second read (a year later) that a new instalment would have been submitted. It's a great gripping yarn and urge you to please continue the story which so many have also said. Congratulations on what you have done so far!

Excellent

Normally I come here for a quick fix. At first I was even reluctant to read this due to the longevity. However I must say this is an amazing story. I would love to see it as a real book. Maybe add some more details and make it longer. Obviously you'd have to take out some of the sec details but it would be great if it were published. Again Great Jon

Please let us see another installment. Loved this story!

Amazing story can't wait for the reunion best story I have read

Awesome need part 2

There definitly needs to be a part two this was fucking awesome

didn't make it past page one,

belongs in ????????????
2 stars

Great story

Honestly, this is one of the best written stories I've seen on here. I liked it so much that I began skipping the sex scenes just to see where the main plot was headed.

Best story I've read on this site hands down

Loved this story

I really enjoyed reading this, in fact like a good novel I couldn't stop reading it, it was just a good story all around. Please keep writing about these characters. and thank you for writing it!

When's the sequals coming out?

Awesome story. Kept me captivated all the way thru. Please let us know when the sequals will be coming out so we can look for them.

Incredible. The way you established the feeling of intimacy was unbelievable. Some really detailed character development and strong character traits and personas. This belongs on the shelf not on the Internet. Please keep us updated with anything else from you.

amazing

This is an amazing piece of art. Probably one of the best in the recent times on this website.

Great

Excellent story, loved every bit of it! Please, please writes continuation to this. Could make an amazing novel someday!

Really Enjoyed

Couldn't put it down really enjoyed it. Hope the saga continues!

One of the best I've ever read!

Utterly fantastic, one of the best stories I've ever read. Really had issues with having to stop & not continue reading it from start to finish in 1 hit (had to sleep).
Would love this to continue in the same lines.
Would love the 3 of them to get together, Trish to live out some of her fantasies, with Kyle becoming more involved & starting to love it. The 3 of them & Trish would be even better lol.
So many options. Just a seriously well put together story, with sex as well.
I applaud you, please continue.

Pretty awesome!!

Really enjoyed reading. Cudnt keep it down.one of the best iv read. Please continue. Cheers!!

Loved it.

A terrific story, sensual and captivating. Where's story #2?

1286 comments? (So far.)

Anything I could say about this would be superfluous, given the number of commenters. That said, I have to say that this went to the head of my list of favorites. It took me a week to read it all, and please believe me when I say that I regretted every minute that I had to use in living my own life and not reading Threads.

Thank you for building such a well connected world for us all to envy.

Magnificent!!

A magnificent, epic tale. Enjoyed it very much!

Excellent read

One of the best stories I have read in a long time. If at all possible, it would be very nice to have some follow up and continuations of the story.

taut not taught

it's 'taut' not 'taught'
Two very different words you intended the former, but wrote the latter throughout your story.

movie???

I'm really thinking about a movie out of it. As JJ's wrote the story it can be taken to the set and make a movie out of it. I would really like to know JJ if ur gonna get more posted. I really like to know what happened in La and what happened after they met again after two weeks. And I don't think this title will work out for the movie but please let me know about it. You can write it on your wall I will be keeping an eye for you. Peace ✌ -Ajr... 😉

the best story ive read so far

Wish there was more, but there wont be.

I have read this story many time. Always wanted the author to continue the story. This story was posted years ago, I checked the authors blog site and nothing has been updated for four years. I have seen pieces of this story reposted on other sites as part one and two, but it is the same 42 page story has shown here. I believe the author is gone or has stopped writing. I hope I am wrong, would love to see the story continue. JammyJimmy if your out there let your Fans know!















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wow

You are an excellent writer. I suspect you write other stuff under a different name, and if not, you should be!

The Best Yet

I have read this several times and get more out of it every time

AWESOME

Honestly, I loved this story!!

Must Read. Not just another jerk off

Best thing I have read on this site in years. Need more.

The Best Story on Literotica

Could not stop reading this one! This is a must read and it really does deserve a follow-up to see how the relationships continue. I will definitely read it again!

Loved the whole thread from beginning to end! Ü

This is pretty much the first time I have read this type of story and truly Very impressed with how the story evolved and the descriptive dialogue development and physical verbiage are amazingly well written. I was so disappointed when they all left the island ending this Great story. Again I commend the amazing writing skills that developed this AWESOME HOT story. I eagerly look forward to reading more from the writer!!

Mr. Monty

this author has a great finger-on-the-pulse for story telling

so brilliant! pity the hidden base for series was incest (although it was totally hot), because it has the plot for a great movie! Truly it does....nice work Sir! ;)
ps, i finished totally satisfied with the completion of this stage of series...cannot wait for the next...i hope this guy gets paid to write!
-DL

keep writing

Not just the usual fuck and suck story. This kept me guessing to the end. I do hope that kyle and Patrica end up married to each other. That would be the the best ending possible!

Encore

This is unlike any other story on Literotica, and in my opinion a worthy 5 stars. It is the standard by which all others should be judged. A beautifully written story that keeps the reader interested in each of the characters; there flaws, weaknesses, strengths. It kept me engrossed throughout. I didn't want the story to end. More please

Many ways to go

The author has written a wonderful story and left so many different directions for the story to go. Can't wait to see how the author proceeds with the story.

Amazing story

Please please please make a sequel to kyle's ,Katie's and kara's lives as millionaires. This was a really intriguing story and I didn't want it to end. I'd like to know what happens on the business trips and stuff like that. Also how it goes with Patricia because that was some hot shit going on there

EXCEPTIONAL STORY

Truly a delightful reading. You assuredly earned the five stars, and even more, but alas there are no other rating classifications. Continue with the story of sibling incest, even children from brother-father with his sisters-mother.

Amazing

This may be the best story I've read. Such depth of characters and so well paced out. I hope to read more of your work, and hopefully a sequel at some point!