Threads: The Island

Love it

A good balance of sex and people in a new situation. Would love a sequel a couple of years in the future to see how all the power and money affects the characters

I need more

Hey, I read this in one sitting. I laughed so hard at Ed. Love all the characters and really need a part 2 to this. What happens next? Does Kyle go full kink? are there any more Kara/Katie and Kyle moments?

Outstanding read!

great story

loved the way ya built the people and the interactions

Omg

Man I loved this story so much I couldn't stop reading it. I would libs more. I would love to have a copy of this in book form and I hop you write more

Brilliant

I loved it, read it in one sitting. hope you've written more, going to check now. x

Absolutely Love This Story

Seeing as you haven't posted in a very long time, you probably won't see this, but Thank You for sharing this story. I enjoyed it enormously. As I read, I could feel the warmth and intimacy, and at times, it made me love, laugh out loud, and well up with tears in my eyes. My only gripe is that there isn't more. I only hope that you are somewhere continuing to write, because it would be tragic if you aren't. I would honestly pay to read more of your work. Thank You again.

Like reading a top selling novel

Fully enjoyed this as much as any book ive ever read, i is sad its ended, please write a continuation, thanks

A good read

It was a good read, a little fantasy mixed in with some good fun.
Afollow up is in there,give it time to mature.
Pure love!

Smoking

Personally I'd lose the smoking but I'm not gonna criticize

Nothing special.

Just another romance novel with some routine sex thrown in.It should be sub-titled " For chicks only".

tits commits

Any thing more than a mouthful is a waste.

The early bird gets the worm.
The video discretion of DVD description from Kyle room. A camera recorded in the bedroom couldn't also contain video in bathroom. Two camera two DVD. The though that went through my mind when girl in Kyle too was his sister shooting in safe room wasn't Kyle but was some one else doing the shooting on tape.
I also agree tke smoking detract from story.

Congratulations!

I really enjoyed reading it, although the sex scenes where less than expected. The smoking habit was an extra plus, and unlike other commenters, I found it fit in perfectly. Non smokers might not understand it. I would like to see a continuation of the story, and would love to see this transformed into a holyhood movie! Maybe you should send it in one of the studios :-)

VERY HOT & INTERESTING

This was the longest well planned story that I have ever read. A little incest, a little romance alond wit a lot of twists and turns in paradise. The way the story started out, it just kept getting better. I didnt wont to stop reading. I try to put myself into the storyand see the different avenues that Kyle would take. He made good decisions and it played out well for him. I had a strange feeling that Edwin would be leaving soon. Some thing didn't fit right with him. I knew he was going to be trouble. I was very happy with the ending but I would like to see more of a continuation. Very enjoyable. Thank you
Sunchaser796

Very nice story

This is a very interesting and thrilling story, the stripclub experience was very sexy but the other sex scenes were shortening as the story proceeded. I would have liked some more detailed sex also I can't understand why you didn't write another part because obviously everyone wants to see Kyle and Kara bang again!!! :)

My Favorite !

Enjoyed all of it ! Wish it would continue with their exploits while traveling !

I would love some more of threads

it has been amazing that i could actually be engrossed into the story line of a literotica. it is practically never possible. It was an amazing read and i would keep an eye out for upcoming thread stories.

Interesting

This is really well written. It reads more like a novel with erotic parts than a piece for Literotica, but I had to read to the end! Well done.

OMG

mate this should be pubished as a novel! its that good. i mean ave read books that are shit and would not scrap surface in comparism. i really loved how u developed the story like and saying i love this book is something cause am a novel addict and still very picky about what i read and what intrests me and to find a piece that has me engaged till the end is always the goal. seriously man if u are not already a published authour please do u have talents!

please continue

Very well written!! I would love to read more...Keep up the good work.

Words are not enough

I started this on a whim, and didn't stop til I finished it. Everything about it was perfect! The writing was amazing, the plot was intriguing and interesting throughout... the dialogue was completely believable... the events unfolding also believable...

Basically I felt like I just voyeured a real thing. Fucking amazing. And I cared a shit ton for the characters in it too. I could read about their lives for days if it were written this way and as interesting as this (no need for a villain, the interactions and exploration is enough).

10/10 or 5 stars. Novel material.

Excellent Story

This is an excellent story and you just have to keep on reading to find out what happens next. This should be published.

Fucking fantastic

Really really enjoyed your story . Can't wait to read more of your stuff.

You've got good instincts for the timing. The sex doesn't mean that much when a writer just describes it. You built up Patricia beautifully so that it became tantalising - but you gave us the flirting and the flashback tide us over.

Oh so enjoyable

Really had a hard time putting this down. I would love to read what happens next. Love to see Kyle and Patricia married eventually. Maybe after they have dated others and realise they want to be together. Kyle could have handled the confrontation with Trish in the bath better than he did though.
Please keep going with this story.

Excellent

This was by far the most intelligent story I have read on Literotica. I especially liked how the sex explanations were shorter as the story went on. In some stories I have read like after some guy cums for the 5th time in the same day there are still stream after stream shooting out!!! That is so unrealistic and redundant. Your story was realistic and relatable. So good job and thank you... I was looking for Kyle and Kara getting it on at the end though. I guess that's coming up.

Couldn't put it down

Well written, engaging, one of the best stories I've read on here.

more

I wish you would cont. on with this story and see what happens next. very good reading

good stuff

I would just send this in 'feedback', but I want it to be public. I looked at your blog and noticed that you have had requests to publish this and that you would necessarily have to take this off of Literotica if you were to do that. I've really enjoyed this, more than once. Being selfish here, but I'm here to ask you NOT to take this down. I'll enjoy it again at some point in the future, and to be honest, if after having read this for free and then have to pay for it to read it again I think I wouldn't be too happy. These characters have come alive to me. While I don't think it would be a good idea to continue this story further, I'm going to miss Patricia, Kyle, Katie, and Kara. Connor too. The Scots have a definite appeal to me and such a way of stating things that is very funny and appropriate. CHUNDER! Excellent! And life is definitely grand when your face smells like pussy. But I think this has ended in a good place, as they begin to experience very different lives and you can't cover them all. So, best not try. Please, again, don't pull this story.

A REAL STORY

What a pleasure to read a story with sex where it's due and not NOT sex with a story built around the sex! I have been reading on Literotica for years looking for quality stories with the right amount of sex in them. Well, I can now say I have a favorite story and Author! Unlike others, I think the Kyle story can go on with the sisters with lesser roles. You will do what you wish, but Amazon would be a great venue for your stories if you are not already there.......... Thanks

Talented

Thank you for a well Written complete story. You have writing talent. I very much agree with some of the other commenters about the sex falling in natural places in the story line. Will anticipate more.

Excellent

What a brilliant story. Really well written - professional, well edited and an absolute blast to read. Couldn't put it down. Well done!!!! 10/10

WTF! More

Please either write a complete book/novel or publish more chapters of Threads

i agree

I have to agree, this story needs expanded on. what happens after the trip home with his parents, who does he end up taking as arm candy. I know Charlie one night and he gets lucky. How about the sisters in the Big Apple, Ed and Caroline how does that go, Casey and being and associate and hooking up and marrying Margarita. How does it all work out with the corporations. Whatever happened to his old boss and who replaced him. After they get together after the 2 weeks break what happens with the sisters and Kyle. Does the sisters and Patricia take advantage of him all at one time. This would be a fantastic story to embellish..... thanks for a great read.

Loved It

Absolutely captivating story. Good build up and it flows nicely. Would love to read more about the characters. If anyone knows of any other stories like this to point me and other readers who loved this I would appreciate it!

Almost skipped it...

...after the first couple of paragraphs, just because of Edwin. I have to say that from the first sentences he is presented as totally disgusting individual - to the point I was close to leaving this story altogether. Fortunately I decided to give it a chance and by the end of first page I was already very glad I did. Whew, what a story... Even though long time passed since you posted it I still have a glimmer of hope that one day I'll see the follow-up :)
Oh, and about the comment you mentioned on your blog, how the story should be split - I have exactly opposite opinion. I try not to rant at the authors that publish stories half as long as this one in 12 chapters, but I find it to be inconvenient - well, it's a really small price to pay if the story is good :)
As for the Anon that asked about similar stories - if you're interested more in the story, less in quick "getting to the point" I suggest anything by DreamCloud, write4food or LoneGirl.

Good but wanting more

Really good character development. I'd say it could use a little more sexual interactions. Definitly needs a sequel to explore Kara/Katie, Patricia's kinks, Kyle/Charlize, Kyle/Kara/Katie, etc.

Wow ...!!!

Complete story ... Through out reading, in addition to enjoyment, suspense & drama, necessity to complete before withdrawl prevailed ... It is so nice ...

Good end ... Reader permitted to imagine next course of story.

Incest story without guilt of reading incest!

Always a good read

I just finished a 6 hour binge read of this story, nay - novel.
And it's not the first time. I believe this is the 4th time over the years that I've read this. I just absolutely love the story and the developments between the characters and in the plot itself. I bookmarked it on my first trip to the island and I still come back to it. A few of my friends have even read it on my recommendation.
My favourite of all time. 10/10

Great story

Really enjoyed it. More please

Very captivating.

Great story! I second a sequel to read more of the group of characters. In general a nice balance of real life and fantasies. I could hardly wait to come back to continue reading the story, and was feeling sad getting closer to the end, hoping there was much more to follow. sometimes a little too long going into details, but still very nice developed characters. I would also like to see more sexual interactions and developments. Keep up the good stuff!

Great stroy

Can't wait to see the next part of the story

Read like a future movie script, smooth and flowing.

At the beginning each characters was given his/her introduction. Later this disappeared as the story became a continuum. Some spelling errors but not gross. Well integrated scenes of sexual activity without making them the center of the story. The plot was guessable at times and not surprising. Overall a very well written story that flowed smoothly.

WOW!

I love it, fantastic storyline! I checked date of when it last released... 2011! 5 years since so possible second chapter would never coming out but thank you!

Amazing

This story was simply awesome and well written. Plus having it all in one spot instead in chapters was very convenient.

Great story

This is a great story. Would love to read a continuation to this story.

Amazing

Conner reminded me of Psycho from Crysis 3. 11/10

Excellent

Great work, one of the best stories if not the best on this website, well written and lots of juicy content!

Best Seller Material. That's Commercial on the stands

Probably the best novella I've read this year. A sexy plot, actually a very good plot. I think it's much better quality them most comparable novels on the stands.

awesome

Really a very good story.... Beautifully described scenes..loved it

Good read

5th time reading, still great. Come on JimmyJammy give us more, please

Awesome

This is like... Scary good almost movie like please make more centered around these characters would be awesome to see the LA endeavors w/ Kyle and Trish