Threads: The Island

wish the writer would not worry about the bad comments and just go ahead and post the 2nd half of story

GREAT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yes it is GREAT wher2 is part 2

I would said this is one of the best I have read. When you going to write a novel? Your an excellent writer and I am sure there is not a story you can not weave that would not be entertaining.

WOW!

This is exactly like any of the books in my personal library (1000+ collection) that I reread on a regular basis. Thank you so much for a wonderful read!

why isn't this published!

This is great! When is the next book coming out???? I want to know more!!

It's a long read but worth it

.-. ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ

I hope this is one of Hillary Clinton's emails. its too long and boring

P.S. go on and bitch repeatedly, the good part of posting anonymously is that gay ass bastards don't flood your Gmail / notifications feed with whining.





{IF YOU DIDN'T GET THE JOKE, I MEAN I HOPE THIS GETS DELETED, ITS A COMPLETE USELESS, UNNEEDED, CRAPPY ASS STORY WASTING STORAGE.}

thought it was great

loved the way u built the story and people in it where is the rest of it

OK

OK you built the plot and the characters now you need a ending only problem I have is that there is no ending

:))))

Yessssss :) Absolutely love this, awesome story with great characters.

Love

I absolutely loved this story. It was awesome. I truly enjoyed the twists and turns. I'd love to hear what happens when they get back to the island!!!!!!

nope

The author of this story has disappeared. Nobody knows what happened to him.

god damed amasing

well this is simply the best storie/s i have ever read . looking forword to reading more .

speechless amazing , beautiful

well it amazing the way it was executed and the way the twists and turns took place on the right time making it worth ready , very lengthy (which is nice in this story ) never got tired of reading it , would love to read the second part continuing from where you left amazing looking forward

Absolutely loved this story

So I just marathoned this story in a day, and I fucking loved it. Rarely on this site do I read an amazing story that I actually feel a connection to. Props to you Jimmy!
(P.S. Really hoping for a second part, or any form of continuation of this story)

What a grate story.

This one story that you want to read again, it is that good. Thank you so much.
If you have not read it do so.

Wow wow damn!

All i can say is Bravo!

Marvelous

Just a wonderful and great story.
Will definitely read more of the author.
There should be a part 2

MOOOOOAAAAARRRRR pls.

The island is such a well written story, it is one of my favorites on the entire website. Even more so than the Surfacing Series as a whole. That is no small feat. There needs to be more of this. All of the characters were well rounded and relatable, you were very descriptive when you told us of the scenery, and you even made it into a very realistic situation. Added to the fact that there were next to no typos, choppy sentences, or grammatical errors. If you will not write a direct sequel, then at least write a strong spiritual successor please. Thank you for writing.

What a great story

Please find the time to do another one of this great quality.

Great read

This is one of the best stories I've read and would love for a sequel to be written!

Sequel

I wonder if any talented individuals would attempt to make a part 2 to this story.

Brilliant

This is the first time I have been inclined to comment on a story here, best story I have had the pleasure to read, please tell me you are going to continue.

Fantastic Story

This story is amazing, one of the best I've read on literotica and the portrayal of everything was fantastic. You're a wonderful author and I'm sure many people (me included) would love to read a part two should you be so inclined to write one.

Book material

This story is great and needs to be longer and in paperback. I would buy it in a heartbeat. Keep it up.

perfect

Great work! Certainly needs to be continued. Their future being able to take one of several obvious story lines.

Love it.

Love it. Have read a lot in my 72 years. One of the best I have ever read.

Like a X Rated David Balducci Novel

Very much enjoyed reading this. The story line and sexy characters was excellent and it became a page turner wondering what was going to happen next.

Great story

This should be made into a film/video. Great storyline and very well written

So Good!

I was worried I was scared I was happy and sad I even cried. And enjoyed every part of it. I read the whole in a few hours nonstop. This needs to be a movie. Or series. "TRIPLETS" LOL

fucken gold

This is one of those gems that ypu find on here that make you forget what site your on. Fantastic work mate

WOW!

Very well written hooked me and I read the entire story in one sitting

Outstanding

Great characters, good story line (sex was pretty good too :))

brilliant

Very well written. kept me glued to the story all the way

Can't wait for the book!

Great writing!

Loved this!

This is one of the few that I throughly enjoyed. Can't wait for more!

Amazing story line

Absolutely loved it please keep writing it's amazing

WOW!

Excellent writing, fun read. Please do it more!

Sad

You are an extraordinary writer. What an amazing storyline with well developed characters.
But you disappeared! Are you still writing? Do you post somewhere else?
Would enjoy reading the follow on story.
This story ranks with the best on Literotica.

Great story

This is one of the best stories I've ever read on this site. I hope you will add another story in this series. The plot was great with the sec seans enhancing the plot not controlling it. I really want to see what happens next.

Wow

You have captured me as one of your fans. Best story I've read in a very very long time thank you so much

Love it

Can you make a movie about this , this is the best I have ever read,, can't wait for more

sequel please

best story and glad it doesn't have much sex pure excitement about how its gonna turn

Thank you

Could use a wee bit of proofreading, but I guess you already know that. If you have not already, you should see if you can get it published. I like that you get it, what you wrote at the beginning, anybody can write a jerk-off page, but I takes skill, talent and hard work to draw the reader in and make him or her care about the characters. And yes, I did get turned on. Keep writing, you're the real deal.

Dude, really, it's taut not taught when referring to bodies.

See title.

Sophisticated sexy structure and a bloody good read

Aside from a few typos here and there that don't spoil the read, this is without doubt the best story I've read in many years of reading Literotica. I've never commented on another Literotica story until now and I'm compelled to do so because the story has the feel of reality, and is not your typical Literotica fare. Congratulations on a compelling read with great balance, hot sex, intrigue, and an interesting take on morality. Finally, sequels would be most welcome, with the story clearly setup for it.

Can't wait

Great story, can't wait for the sequel to hit the site. I hope it's soon. Thanks

well done

Wonderful writing. Do get a proof reader. All professionals have them and you are one of them

Excellent

A Very Well written story. I will enjoy reading the next story.

Riveting!

I really loved this story. The way the characters were written was possibly my favourite part. I genuinely looked forward to what would happen next between them. My only real problem with the story is that I would have liked to see both of the sisters first contact with the lawyer, and then each other. However, that is just me wanting more information. Best story that I have read on this site.