Threads: The Island

I loved this story and I want to know what the next story is called!

???

Why did it end?

Another chapter?

I wish there was another chapter to this story it was really good and I had hoped that the next chapter would have them returning to the island and Kyle, Kara, Katie, and Patrica would continue there love story. With the girls make good on there promise to hook up with the brother

Wow

Best story on this site, you built in up perfectly and a lot of good moments, appreciate it.

How?

How has this not been published?
Great story, great writing, great characters.

A real plot!!!!

How refreshing to read a good story with a good plot! Hated to see it end as I had become very engaged with the characters. A terrific example of where the sex is hot but fits the story and not simply a list of actions. Aspiring writers would be well served to read this and learn there is much more to a good erotic story than just sex. Well done and thanks for the enjoyable read.

yes a real plot

Nice well written story. I wish I could write like that. A followup book would be really great! Thank you for your effort.

Wish there was a follow up

Best story ever, too bad there hasn't been a follow up. I checked the blog and it hasn't been updated in years. I hope all is well with you.

Riveting

This story is not only on a great subject matter, but keeps ones attention through out the story. The best story on the site, IMO.

awesome

this is so far the masterpiece of stories i've ever read here!
I'd wish the story would continue

Fantastic!

What a great piece of writing. Really enjoyed it. Well done!

AWESOME!!

fantastic bit of writing. mystery, mayhem, intrigue, sex and love all done in perfect proportions.
the incest wasn`t overdone with a great possibility of its continuation a later date.
10/10 although a higher mark if it was possible.

big t

perfect for a sequel, Kyle returns to the island and finds comfort with his sisters. Eventually Patricia joins in. An attempt is made to kidnap him and he has to spend time in the bunker while waiting for Conner to rescue them. After rescue they find one of his security team was a traitor and that two female staff members are misssing. They pursue and rescue them then return to the island to try to find a way to live together.

too long.break it into chapters

some good points

great story

I read Threads: the island quite a while ago and just finished reading the revision. I greatly enjoyed the story line and the characters. The story is a little lengthy, but quite easily managed when read over several sittings. Since the story is about Americans, you should modify the dialog to sound like we speak and use our spelling of words. I do not recall any American I know ever saying cheers when meaning Thanks or Okay. We usually say cheers when greeting someone with a drink in hand. All in all, it's a great story. I'm patiently waiting for the next chapter in the saga. Keep up the good work with your writing.

The island

Freaking awesome!!! Very well written and loved the chacters. It was so well written that I felt a part of the story it is nice to read a story the is not about all fucking, but includes personal relationships, drama, suspense, action, and comedy all in one. Great job!!

Great Story!

I didn't realize that English spelling feared the letter z so much. Do English have Halloween parties with sombies instead of zombies? Kidding aside, I really did like this story and also the fact that it left open the possible future events. Whether or not you choose to write them, I can write them for myself in my imagination. So Cheers! (again, the US version as in toasting an alcoholic drink)

Wow

I was entrenched in this story early. and didn't want to stop reading it. I can't believe I read 42 pages. I haven't read anything this long and detailed in 20 years. Oh my I would love to see a follow up on Kyle, Kara and Katie. I was waiting for them to give in to their 3 year old desires and do each other. And what Kara did with Kyle doesn't count. Cause he was unaware that he was doing his own sister. Thank you for a wonderful story and making reading fun again.

I have to say, I was so into that story.. loved it the whole way thro.. love to read more.. good job..

Wow

Now part of my list. Very loving and carring.

best story

frankly, this is the best story i have ever read in my life as it was narrative, descriptive and erotic. i'm looking forward to read more amazing story like this, author. i hope you will come up with another awesome story like this one very soon.

talent

If your not a professional writer you should be, so much talent!

Still one of the best

This is the fourth time I have read this and I still find myself enjoying every page. The end comes so quickly, I wish that there was more every time. So wish you would continue the story lines you have weaved so far. Great job, I hope you keep it up.

Best I have read on here

This was a fantastic story can't wait for more

Threads.The Island

Excellent story.Looking forward to your other ones.

wounderful. Ur babbbbbbly talented.

Best story ever.

One of the best!

One of the best reads I've had on here or even outside to be honest.

Fucking amazing!

Fantastic story

Can't wait to read more!!

Amasing

I could not put the book down.

Awesome

I started this and ended up reading it straight through. Great story cant wait for more.

An outstanding story. Too bad the author has since passed away, may he rest in peace.

Fantastic!

What a great story. I LOVED the it was so long. Thank you. Thank you.

Awesome!

Very well written. Loved how it was realistic and detailed. Read the entire story in 2 nights. Hope the story continues.

Wow!

This story had me hooked within two pages, sex, money and power! It took me a few days to read the whole story but I am glad I invested the time to read it completely.

Part 2

A fantastic story. I would really love a part 2 of this

A Gem

This is one story where if you stripped out all the sex, it is still a great story. Very few stories like this on this site.I think I've read maybe three stories that were as well written as this one and really hope to see it continue. Thanks again for such a great tale.

Part 2?

I just checked JammyJimmy's blog and it has not been updated in years. Would have liked to see the story continue but it doesn't look like that will happen.

Does anyone know what happened with the author? I've read this three times now and I and friends that have read this would love to see another chapter to continue this story.

Excellent Story

I also would like to see more.

Excellent

Excellent story would love to read more of it

Great

There should be a dozen more chapters and movie to follow.....great story

Open

Story lines abound keep going.

Enjoyed it very much

My favorite story

I can't tell you how much I enjoyed this story!
Just a very well thought out plot and story line that held my interest till the end and I was sad it was over.
Bravo and more please!

Just DAMN!

Wonderful work. Got hooked on page one.

awesome

Totally captivating. I'm ready for the follow ups; LA, NYC, and return to the island

Not What Was Expected: Better

Great work here. More of a sexy novel but certainly contained enough eroticism to warrant being here.

I eagerly look forward to the next chapterS, plural, in this noteworthy saga filled with a diverse set of fully developed characters, exciting new discoveries and hidden talents and capabilities, and of course, Hot, KINKY sex!

More! More!!

Xavierw

Excellent

I thoroughly enjoyed the novella. It should be turned into a screenplay and used for a legitimate movie, even if the explicit sex scenes had to be toned down. Great job!

Wow, amazingly written.

The characters were well written, the story captivated me from the beginning until the end. Fantastic job. I can't wait to read more of your work.