Threads: The Island

A 5!

Wonderful story, character development, plot, tension, sex, crime. Best story in the site; first '5' I've given.

Fantastic Job

I have read few books/stories that had the same amount of character development and that is what I think makes a story truly great. Everything fit together flawlessly plot wise, there was a lot of suspense about edwins plans and you covered just about every loose end that I can think of. You definitely should look into talking with a publisher because that is how amazing this story is. I hope you are planning to continue with this as a series of stories, because you are one of the few people on this site that actually develops a plot and follows it to the end. I can't wait for more and I will check regularly for the next story.

Well done!

Im looking forward to what seems to be well set up for the next chapter. Excellent writing.

good job.

nice read. Good Job

brilliant

I thought this story was simply amazing. The amount of time it must have taken you to develop the characters like that was incredible. I really really enjoyed it as a story rather than an erotic story, although your sex scenes were very well written. I think the intimacy aspect of the story were beautifully described.
I wish i could find out how Kyle gets on in LA now, and I sincerely hope you're going to carry this on.
Thank you!

More Please!!!

Love the characters. Would love to see Kyle and Patricia explore humiliation/BDSM, and further development into the connection and incest element between the siblings. Fastest 42 page read ever, nice work!

simply breathtaking

this story was so long but I couldn't stop reading it! I loved it too much. had a bit of everything, great! can't imagine how long u took to write this.

Brilliant!

Great read!!!

Great story!!! I put down 3 different books to finish this... Please, please, please... more!!!

Frustrated!!!!

Frustrated? Why? Story came to an end at page 42. Can only give it a five out of five, not the twenty five it deserves. No second part yet!! Enough said, except, brilliant, just bloody brilliant.
Popeye
Sydney Australia

``More!

I'm really looking forward to reading more about Kyle and his sisters, It's a great story so far!

OMG

That story is totally awesome, I love it and so can't wait to see if you do a sequel :-)
Totally epic

Fabulous

Loved it. More!

wow

Fucking awesome!!
Please please let us read more about Kyle, Kara and Katie!!

that was awesome it took me 3 days to read it. i want more please.

WOW....

you should write novels....great characterization and excellent plot.

Wow, loved it

Epic is a great word to describe this story. Perhaps now I can get back to my life :-)

Wow

This is the best thing I've ever read on this site.

Great Book

This is really very, very nicely done. It would be great in and of itself as a book. Who knows, a nice, edgy, sensuous, sexy movie too!

The author is to be congratulated on a work very well done.

An AMAZING Effort

JammyJimmy: Can you post a comment here giving us some of your thoughts about this story? How long did it take for you to write this? And were you expecting it to be the hit that it is, or were you scared the 42 pages would turn people away.

cheers

Couldn't stop reading!

Hey JJ, you've probably heard it all by now. Loved your story and couldn't stop reading it until it's done. Great work and keep them coming!!

Talented

This was awesome. Is there a sequel? As one reader wrote, I couldn't put it down. Worst part, finishing the story.

Answers to HeyAll's questions

Hey,

Okay, it took me around three months to write, edit, re-edit and finally have it near enough ready for posting it. I had a big discussion with myself (coz I'm insane lol) about if I should break it up into chapters or not, but honestly, it didn't seem there were enough regular points to break it up, and I liked the story as a whole.
No, I had no idea it was going to be this popular. I was aiming for a Red H, 4.5 rating or higher, the same as anything I've posted in the past, but I didn't expect it to rate as high as it did. I wrote a blog post about this subject, link to my blog is on my profile page if you want to drop by, read it and say hello! :-)
What else.. lots of questions about sequels.
Yes, I'm writing. I'm also looking at publishing The Island as an ebook and putting it up for sale, but its requiring quite a bit of re-writing before I can do that. I'm also working on a short story that covers the couple of days in San Antonio before Kyle makes his next journey where you'll also meet a new character, David, and then it's the next novel-length chapter in the story of Kyle Watson, his sisters, Patricia, etc. David's backstory will soon be available as a novel-length tale too. He's a pervert :-) You'll like him.
Anything else, drop me a message, or visit my blog. Thanks for reading.
JJ

Outstanding effort.

Great story. There's lots of things you could add if you wanted to continue.

I'm looking forward to reading more of your material.

great story it aoears that there are a lot of possibilities for continu ing the story line followinf the cast through their travles.
keep up the good work
looking forward for more.

The best

I started the story thinking it was a sex story only lasting a few pages. I was hooked after reading the first page and didn't put it down until I finished it. It's refreshing to read a great story filled with excitement.
Not sure is there a part two?

PR

Terrific Story

For me to read a story this long is an indication of how good this story actually is. The writing is great, the plot is excellent, and the sex - especially the intimacy - was wonderful. I look forward to a follow-on.

The best on this site

A complete story not just a sex event.Well written and edited.One of the few of a proffesional standard.8cc8

Awesome Fiction

This was some of the best fiction I have ever read (erotic or not). I felt attached to your characters in a way that only my very favorite authors can make me feel. I can't wait to see how more of their lives unfold.

This would make a great fucking movie

wow....

this is a great great story. I want to read the next installment. Do they or dont they get together? Kyle, Kara and Katie.....superb. Bravo.

Best-written story on this site!

Obviously not the usual fare or length for this category, but this story immediately pulled me in and held my interest, so I stuck with it. In fact, I continued reading well into the early morning, reluctantly putting it down when I absolutely had to get some sleep; I finished reading it the next evening. The initial safe room scene with Edwin had me a little worried that the narrative would veer more toward dominance/humiliation, so I was relieved when I realized this portion was fleeting and required for character development. JammyJimmy exhibits pure mastery of his craft and a keen understanding of psychology and social interaction. The interplay between the characters felt incredibly accurate and believable. Indeed, this story would make an excellent screenplay; but alas, I doubt any studio would ever turn it into a movie due to the theme of incest and the explicit sexual content crucial to the story line. A watered-down version would not be as compelling. At least it is available for us to enjoy on Literotica. Well done!

Very deserving of #1!

I have never been so helplessly sucked into a story on this site as much as I was this one. I was reading well into the morning on the first night and finally crashed after four hours, and I went right back to reading the following night. The character development is excellent, the interaction is flawless - I was actually laughing at some of the dialogue! - and the story is believable.

Thanks for taking the time to share this story with us. You are a very talented writer! I hope I accidentally (or purposefully) come across more of your work! Well done!

amazing

the story was amazing, although the sex in the story was spread out enough, the plot of the story made this a great read

Bravo

Outstanding character development and flow of plot and story. I wanted to keep reading until the end. I was pulled into the idea of the plot, but more than that I was able to experience what the characters were feeling, BRAVO. Looking forward to more of your work!
You might want to do a little more proofing. It distracted from the story just a little. Still fantastic though. Thanks!

great

I cannot add anything more to what has already been said. Great story keep up the good work.

an actual proper story!!! very unusual for here but very very welcome.

Wow, simply amazing. Brilliant writing with great plot line, rich characters, and attention to detail. Congrats because this must've taken you awhile to write, edit, proof read, etc. Can't wait for the next chapter.

To the author

I hope you're considering publishing this.

amazing

this is was absolutely remarkable..i hope you do a second story to this!

Love those sisters!

SPOILER ALERT: This was probably the best I've read on this site, and that's saying a lot. The villain was a little trite, but he's gone so who cares. That's about the worst I can come up with - everything else was TOP NOTCH!!! Please don't leave us hanging too long for the next installment...

OMG

Best story I've ever read here. Hope to see more. Keep Freakin writing.

The Best?

Simply incredible. A great piece of writing from start to finish. This may very well be the best thing I've ever read on the site. Don't know if a sequel is planned but if you're taking suggestions... DO IT!

loved this story

well written easy reading and very hard to stop for cuppa's thank you for sharing your tale more please joe
new zealand

Great Story

Continue this series please. The best story I've ever read on this site.

This story was absolutely amazing. Great plot and action. I thoroughly enjoyed this. Please keep writing, you definitely have immense talent as a writer!

Thank you!

This was a truly marvellous story. A bit rough around the edges, as a literotica story should be, but well written and well thought out. At the start you wrote you had more stories already finished and I couldn't help getting my hopes up for a new story in a few days.
Still, I wonder when the next story is going to be online; if not in a few days, please tell me it's not going to be more than a couple of weeks.

Cheers from The Netherlands and thanks again for the amzing story.

Thanks

I dont read many stories that captivate me or keep me reading for long but this story did it for me. A great mix of suspense, sex and violance.

I dont usually read anything longer thab 10 pages but this story kept me coming back for more. I ecen sat reding it for an hour on my aofa ob ab evening.

Keep up the great work and also is there any news of a chapter 2? Id love to see this develope ven more.

Thanks agaib

Cant wait for the next part, need it longer though

I read the first page and then thought what the hell lets see if I am going to be disappointed and have just a 3 page story. I was so surprised to see the story was going to be 42 pages long. I thought Oh my. I was so captivated with story the pages went by to fast. I did break it up into 4 to 5 reading sessions. I had something to look forward to. I really dont know what direction I would like to see the characters go. I guess I would like to see the triplets become lovers with Patricia being in the Harem too. I did appreciate the length of it myself. I chose to break it up as I saw fit and at no time did I feel like I needed to rush to read it all at one time. I would love to see another long chapter soon please. I gave it 5 stars for how in depth you went.

Wonderful

absolutely wonderful. please keep it up.