Threads: The Island

To satisty your curiostiy, Anon

Honestly, I've no idea why I put the asterisks in c*nt/cunt & f*ck/fuck.
I remember I was pretty harassed at the time, so it was probably my self-control trying to reign in my temper and not type anything too stupid.
As for why they haven't been corrected, I don't think you can edit comments once they're posted. I'm sure the people in question got the gist of it though.

JJ

Best ever!

Great story. Is this one becoming a novel?

well done

awesome piece of literature. took all day to read it lol. i hate all the stories on this site that start off so good, and then are over in a couple short pages. i hope you continue this series, and thanks for the good read.

Keep writing

You need to continue this.

Great

Would have paid money for this. Took entire day to read... This could so easily be a movie plot! Why don't you publish this on Kindle and earn moolah on it as well! Would be a definite best seller

awesome

dude i was reading this using wifi only and was pissed whenevr my connection gave out,you got mad talent in writing chill i give you that and i would pay for the book should this become a novel,once again great job. and i hope you continue this story. cheerS!
JMa.

More please

I would open about 10 pages so I could read at work on my laptop away from the cockblocking company computers.
Good stuff I want to read more, you've done great so far please don't leave us hanging.
I was really suprised to see 42 pages though.

TY

I think the best compliment you can give a story is when you have finished it and feel sad that you have read it all. Nice, original, and entertaining romp. Would not mind visiting Kyle and his hot sisters again. Thank you.
John Wcd13

Best Story Ever!

I loved the length and depth behind each character. The plot was just mindblowing. Keep on writing dude you have a fantastic gift!!

Your a boss. Nuff said.

Talk about epic. As Barney Stinson says, Legendary. Can't wait to see what you have up your sleeves.

fantastic story

absolutely awesome story, totally enthralling,have read it twice and still amazes me the depth you show in each character and the intricasies betwwen them. would have liked to see the next part when they returned to the island and the developement with patricia. thanks for a great story.

The absolute best story I have read on Literotica since I found the site. You are a very talented author. You understand mystery, and foreshadowing, and intrigue, and all the other things great authors understand. I would have paid for this if I had known how good it was. I seriously reccomend you look into publishing it as a short story, or expanding it further to let the reader know if anything -did- happen with Kyle, Katie, and Kara when they got back. Rather naughty of you to give us a nibble, and then take away the cake.

When is the next thread coming out...??

WoW...!!!
The best story in the site for me...
Awesome story line...
and by the way...
When is the next thread coming out..??
Waiting for it....!!
i believe some are waiting for it over the past 2 months....
ALL THE BEST....!!!

Extremely Marketable

I will add my vote to the plethora of positive comments about this story. Extremely well written, plot and outline impeccable, characters wonderful, sexy and fun. No reason this couldn't be a best seller on the open market.

Best read Ihave ever had on this, or any Adult oriented site , go pro ,I would pay money for this!More!!!

Blown away!!!!!!!!!!!!

Had the anticipation of a short story. I found myself behind the screen for 3 days whenever time for it, not being able to let my eyes of of it.
Wish I had a similar talent. please continue the endever.

I dont have words to describe how wonderful this story is.

I thought some other stories were great ,but i could not stop reading till the end.
AW-SOME
I wish you would write some stories about 3 to 6 months later.

Amazing story

Truly you are a gifted writer. I couldn't stop reading this. I don't think it helped that you created damn near my perfect woman in Patricia. With the exception of the choking and spitting, and if she had been a redhead, she seems to share every damn one of my kinks. Wonderful read and for more then just the smutty parts.

anymore on the way?

Agreeing with some other comments, you are a truly gifted writer. My question is more like a request, please keep writing along these character lines. I'd very much like to know what happens with Kyle, Katie, and Kara with freaky little Patricia in the
middle? I must admit your attention to detail is rather astonishing. Almost current life events concerning celebrities, and references to certain US special forces groups.
Keep it up, look forward to seeing what's next.

EPIC

Thanks for an excelent read though i do feel some what down hearted with your ending or has it ended does the doy get the girl ,i do like the romantic ones .
Thanks again please keep writing.

Awesome

Truly awesome.I can't take my eyes off this story.we really need continuation for this story.Looking forward for more on this. Really want to know more about what happens next in their lives!!

A wonderful work of art.

I really enjoyed this story. I couldn't stop reading it. It as you said was a story, not just sex. And i loved it. There was some grammatical errors and the omission of the word "of" a lot, but other then that i found this story captivating. Please continue the story as i would love to see what happens next in their lives.

Excellent Stuff

I couldn't stop reading. The storyline was excellent and captivating, and the sex was appropriate.

Well done!!

Is there a sequel?

The story was great, Detailed, thorough and exciting. I think a sequel would be cool, expanding the relationships between the characters, The triplets, Sarah, Patricia, Casey and Margerita, there's so much potiential. I really hope you consider a sequel, or several even.
thanks.

Patricia Prequel, if you Please

Great story applying any measure. You must write a prequel, or a flashback in a follow on episode, painting in the genesis of the amazing sexual proclivities of Patricia, clearly the most complex character in your stable, incredible kink quotient while seemingly lacking any weakness, so confident in her own skin.

old fart

Great story. Good job on content. Lot of excitment, please write more, but break it in chapters. To old to stay up so late reading!

Almost

Almost perfect. I am not going to say how good this story is, as the ratings speaks for itself.
Just a few things I observed in the visualization front only. I think you ended up too much time creating the core ideas of the story, there by missing a lot of things. This being the story of how 3 ppl find that they are adopted children, where is the natural urge of the three children to know more about their mother? The children would like to see a photo of their mother, or a trip to her grave or something like that. The urge of an adopted child to know everything about their natural parents is as high as the new-born child's urge for mother's milk. You only thought about how Kyle receives the news, clearly omitting the 2 sisters. Kara is heavily underutilized, and had turned lifeless a lot. A strip dancer also has to face a lot of emotional turmoil. Plus, a emotionally challenging childhood may lead to trust issues, but almost always such children develop other nascent talents which are not perceived by others. A simple twist like, converting writing as a cover story to writing as a hobby/profession would have done it. Again, a wealthy patron like Danny Tripp who is silently keeping track of his children, should have known that one of his daughters is having a very bad time. If I were in place of Danny Tripp, I would have not only bought the strip club, but also provided some means for Kara to come out of her profession.
The damn story is already 42 pages. If you had added a few more pages, then nobody would have minded it.
You simply didn't note the side tracks while thinking about the story.
The effort on your part is excellent, it's just the small details that you missed.

Sequel Please

This story is absolutely amazing. Best ever. You wrote it so nicely that there has to be follow up stories. Shell Shocked!

didn't read

42 PAGES ARE YOU CRAZY! 90% of the readers here will never read this due to it being 42 pages in one shot. you say you are writing for yourself not the readers thats fine just don't post it. if you are writing for the readers and care about them you will write stories no longer than 4 pages per chapter. if you have any brains and care at all about the readers enjoyment then you will delete this and break it up into 10-11 chapters and use a good editor. SHOW SOME PRIDE IN YOUR WORK AND A WHOLE LOT OF RESPECT FOR THE READERS AND EITHER DO IT RIGHT OR NOT AT ALL. SOME OF US ARE ON PUBLIC COMPUTERS AND CAN NOT BOOKMARK STORIES OR JOIN SITES LIKE THIS AND YOU RUIN THE SITE FOR US THINK BEFORE POSTING AGAIN.

one of the best ever !!

this is definetly the best story i read on this site
be sure to keep it up like this ...I LOVED it

5 star everytime.

Great job. Get through the first few pages and had me hooked. Only the 2nd time I've every rated an story or author 5 star in here and I've read hundreds, but well worth it. Looking forward to the next instalment.
Would be bit easier to read without the few typos and lack of chapters or page breaks etc but didn't really detract from an otherwise great piece of writing. Was dissapointed when I reached last page, wanted it to continue. Could happily read anouther 42 pages. :)

more.

you've got to carry on with the story.i ended up reading the story over night. i look forward to 50 or more segments.

MORE

I would have payed for this!!!

This represents a lot of work, for which I commend the author, and the writing is quite good. My main issue is with plotting and characters, which I find unrealistic to the point of making the story unenjoyable. I don't expect realism from an erotic story, but plausibility is a requirement for a successful sex story; it has to be believable in itself. "Threads" is just very unrealistic, and it hurts the story. The triplets given up for adoption, the depictions of the ultra-rich... none of it rings at all true.

need more

great story......need next installment right away

Epic!!!

Absolutely awesome! Really looking forward to the next installment!! Good effort!

FANTABULOUS & MIND BLOWING

The amount of effort u have put in to this story is just mindblowing... It looks more worthy of a literature award........

Excellent

thoroughly enjoyed the whole story; could almost picture it as a film score. Could read more stories like this all the time!

:-)

Couldn't stop reading this love it! Can't wait for the continuation!

I am so wrapped up in ths story

I haven't looked to see hen this was last added to but I have too! I"m excited and reminded at the same time that these stories just end .never having a real ending and a happy ending is always what I prefer myself. But WOW, An hr nap here or there until I finished, I couldn't stopped reading. thanks

MORE!

This story was spectacularly well executed. The only flaw I could identify (other than a bit more description being welcome in the sex scenes) was that you mistakenly used the word taught in place of taut several times. But that was all, really. PLEASE continue this story, I am eager for more.

Love

I fuccing love this story. I couldnt stop reading it. If only you could just go on with it. Like a part 2 or something. Amazing. Get it published,or something lol u have a skill for writing and to keep people wanting more and keeping them attached. Ur imagination can make u alot of $$$$$

Great story

Why don't you do a part 2? Continue from here through when the 3 finally reunite back at the island for a secret 3 way in the bunker.
Probably the best story I have read online like this. A few grammatical errors and some misspellings but nothing a good proof reader wouldn't fix. Personally I can see this as a published book. Maybe even a movie.

Amazin'

That's the only thing that came to my mind when i was finally done. This was beautifully written & i wish there was a part two because i'm so compelled by the story.

Way Good Story

Other than a few grammatical errors, very well written. It was hard to not keep reading it from beginning to end. Hopeful for a continuation of this story. Great character building and story lines.

Amazing

Please continue with a part 2 or something. You have a wonderful writing style, and I absolutely love this story. It is clear that you thought ahead in the story and you made everything sound so logical and possible. Again, please write more! ;)

Great Story!

I loved it! Realy do hope there is a part 2. Keep up the good work please!

when is the next part coming up?????

....

That has got to be that best adult story I've ever read. The idea of trish kept me wanting to read more and more. Lol The lack of sleep and hours mazzing was amazing. PART TWO!!!! COME ON!!!!