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Please, you have to write more of this story...begging...just do it...

MORE!!!

I've never taken the time to comment before on any of the stories i've read but this one was just too good not to. Incredible work. Please, please, please keep it up

OMFG

Mate you need to continue this story, im half drunk, red eyed and got a serious buzz. Unbelievable read it twice already. Bloody good work sunshine keep it up and i BEG of you add some more to this already AMAZING story.

Keep em comin!

Please dear god continue that story sometime in the future! I have read quite of few of your works, that was the greatest by a margin! You have quite the talent for writing my friend.

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please please please- this is work of art. So give us more of this. i am thinking how things are going on in LA and NY.

wow!!!!!

Simply mindblowing!!!!......

A good start for a Novella

Character development better than most, a suprising entry for Literotica- an actual story with sex in it rather than a sex story. You seemed to be off target or off pace in only a few spots . As an editor l would have remover on 5-600 words, in a 42 page entry thats not too bad. Good work !

WOW

Keep em coming please this was just to damn good for u to stop it would be messes up if u didnt because this was just to damn good

Amazing

Super hot, an intense read, and very vivid. More please....

super awsum story!

less sex but interesting story!

Great Story!

Yes, there were a few spelling and grammatical errors but it was still a great srory.
In fact it could even be published as a book rather than 'just' a Literotica story!!

truly one of the great stories on this site. i do hope for more that continue this line and maybe even breaks off from it a little. just keep writing and allowing us to enjoy your work

More please!

I would love to see a sequel to this story please!

I agree with TopAce

It would be a shame not to see more of this story continued. Absolutely, MORE PLEASE!

How dare you!

You are an evil person. I don't know you personally but I can tell. I was just browsing along looking for some fun stuff to read in my private time. And I stumble upon this this awesome awesome story(no sarcasm btw). And now after I've read it I don't want to read those short stories full of meaningless sex anymore. Now I'm searching for stories with a nice character development, real depth. Thanks for ruining Literotica for me.

On a different note I hope you release a sequel. Can't wait.

P.S.
For the slow ones out there I didn’t mean to offend. I loved the story. And in all seriousness the reason why I come to Literotica changed because of this great story. I actually skipped most sex scenes in The Island.

PART 2, maybe??

I think this is a very good read, could be film material. Ricky

I was looking for something to read before going to bed...

...and you made me stay up reading till 5 AM, now I was exhausted all day but damn that was such a good read! Hope you release Part 2 soon, while you can find a lot of good short chapter stories in lit, it's pretty brave to release a 42 page episode for people to read.

Kudos to you, will be watching for the next release!

Top quality

This is worth publishing. Absolutely the best. More please.

a great story

what a great story ,all my fantasies and kinks ---well nearly all.
thoroughly enjoyable. more please

wow

omg please do more with the store line i loved it

I spent all night reading this

and i didn't even read it for the erotic parts, except for when he fucked Katie and Kara which was so hot. If you wrote a book on this then published it I would definitely buy it, 5 stars!

addicting!

I have spent every free minute in the last 2 days reading this on my phone! So good & not just for the sex scenes! Although those were amazing and definitely turn ya on ;p looking forward to reading more! Great work!!

awesome

very good story, a typo here and there but nothing major. Overall great story keep writing!

keep it going

I think u should continue with it after theyre trips n stuff what happen with them when they get back n stuff read the whole story twice already

And finally...

It seemed like a running joke in my author group that I was the only one who hadn't read this piece. I have done so now, in one sitting. Just awesome and beyond brilliant. The only thing I can say is I would have preferred it broken into smaller chapters and posted separately. But hey, thats a tiny critique compared to the stellar piece you have here. Don't stop.

pretty awesome

since i'v started with my graduation, i can seldom do anything but sit on the laptop and browse through lecture notes and follow up matter and stuff. miss reading good stories. one fine day, in search of some "fun" landed upon your story and it completely gripped me. took me three days to complete (my personal worst) owing to my exams but totally worth every moment i read it. couldn't wait to finish studying and catch up on this. good job. nay, great job.

Fuckin' Awesome!

Hope to read more about Kyle if you haven't gotten bored of him yet. Maybe you should consider putting this and any other novels on amazon, do the self-publishing route and sell 'em for $0.99-$2.99 to drum up interest. I know it's longer, better written, and more engaging than most of the stuff I find on there.

Amazing!!!!

So I haven't even gotten past page 8 and I think it's awesome. Your an amazing writer and when I saw that it was 42 pages long I was like holy cow its a book and I love reading books =D so i'd love to hear more of your stories ... well read them.

Sincerely,
Just a Reader

This goes with the amazing comment

I just commented but I forgot a little something. My name is Kara so I thought it was funny how you made her the stripper. Made me proud of my name ;D So thank you! I'll have to let you know what I think of the rest when I finish.
Sincerely,
Just a Reader.. a.k.a Kara

AWESOME.... but

I love your story. It is definitely a good read, but I was really, I mean REALLY disappointed with the situation Patricia and Kyle are in. I thought their relationship's gonna go some where :'(
oh well maybe Im just being a romantic.

The best story Ive read on here

It take a lot for me not to drift away from a story over 10 pages, but this one I just could not leave and had to read until the end.
I do hope you develop these characters into further books. A most desergved 5 out of 5,

Loved It,

Though I've never set up an account, I've been visiting this site fairly regularly for years, and I'm very happy to say that this is easily one of the top five stories I've discovered thus far. Your development of the characters came across very naturally, and I love how you managed to keep a lot of realism in an unbelievably surreal world - if most writer's on here had decided their characters had come into huge wads of cash, the rest of their stories would revolve on how they spent it, but you've focussed on the responsibilities that a Billionaire owes, which is something I've never even thought about before. I've also visited your blog, and I'm very happy to see how you're keeping the fans updated, and that a sequel is on the way. The only thing I'd like to change would be to see more of the sisters, their characters haven't come across all that much so far, but I daresay they will indeed become more apparent in the sequels. I'm aware that this is getting a little long, so I'll just say that I was happy with the length of it - I have no problem committing to a piece this long, as I'm a bit of a bibliomaniac, and I'm glad you haven't felt the need to break it up.

Finally, I'd just like to say: Thank You.

Loved it

Best thing I've read on here
Everything kept me glued to the story.
The characters sounded so hot, the 3 main girls esp lol
Would love to read what happens when they come back from their business trips and whilst on them.
I'd love for Kyle n Patricia to get more serious.

Sequel Please!

This was an amazing story with great sex, plot, everything, and I literally can't wait for the next one!

Please continue the story - Very well done

I very much liked how all the sub-stories played together.

As good a book as I have ever read

I have never commented on Literotica before but fet compelled to do so with this one. An excellent story line with suspense, good and varied sex. Not just crude explicit sex but real erotic reading. As an author you are an exception and like somebody else I read on here you should consider placing this on to Kindle

Thank you

Keep them coming

Awesome read... I really enjoyed it and would have to be the best story I have read on this site and also the first time I have considered leaving a comment. Well done and I would love to read more from you.

Wow, Great!

This was a great story, once I started I could not stop. Please continue the story/series. I want more from the same characters. I don't comment on anything, but I must tell you all this was some great reading I cant wait to see the movie.

Class of the field

Absolutely stellar. Exceptional plot depth, and character development. It was truly sensual the way you used sex to enhance the story line. Rather than it being the main plot theme. Once started I couldn't put it down till finished. I'm looking forward to more of your works. Soon I hope! !!

Fantastic

Thank you very very much for writing that. I completely enjoyed that story. I was unable to put it down. Completely unlike me as I am not normally much of a reader.

Thanks for the Great story.

thanks alot for writing that. it was an awesome read. really sounded like it happened. i'm still curious which of the girls from the "dating list" he finally decided to go out with. and major props for the bath scene, pretty much a new fav fantasy now. keep writing your doing great.

More!

PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE give us more, this is an incredible story that can and should be continued!

Waiting for more-------PLEASE

JUST FINISHED, YOUR GREAT AND WHAT A STORY

I think I'm obsessesed!

Everytime I come online now... no matter how shitty my day, I have to reread this story.... I was reading this kick ass book when I first got caught up and since then....
I need more!

Like a fish needs water... I need more!!!

It's not just the character arc, the sex is titillating but the story is the driving force, I appreciate that more with each rereading.... If you ever decide to write books, which this would certainly qualify for at least half a novel, I'd spend my money on you, look for every book you've ever wrote and get them all. I did it with Alice Rice, George R R Martin and now I think you that your THAT good!

What is next?

Great story, I couldn't stop reading it. When or where is the continuation? Please continue would love to read more!

SO MANY QUESTIONS!!!

God, I hope you make a continuation of this story. Honestly one of the most touching stories I have read in a long time. I hope you get more into the incest thing if you do make a continuation. :D

PLEASE!

PLEASE MAKE ANOTHER ONE!!!!

Need more

One of the best stories I have ever read needs a continuation thou

Awesome

I have loved reading this story, definatly needs a continuation

A+

Loved it A+