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felt like a fucking movie. strike that. make a movie out of it.

know who he is

this writer is also know as mentalcase i have found out who writes the series mike his sisters and the voice in his head

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The best I've read. Would like to see this continued as book two. Excellent writing

Oh. My. God!

This was amazing!! Stayed up all night to finish it! The interactions between the characters are flawless! I love how sassy the girls are and how Kyle is such a down to earth typical guy. And the comic relief of Ed was just the perfect amount of light hearted douche bagginess! It sure beats the hell out of 50 Shades!

excellently written would enjoy more to this story. you left it kind of hanging in the end

Book 2

THERE NEEDS TO BE A BOOK 2!!!

I'm afraid the guy is dead. So sorry.

Amasing

was absolutely drawn into this , was an excellent read..
thank you

Amazing

Thank-you :)

This was an amazing read. I loved how in many places the sex was used to advance plot. I love the style and would be exceptionally happy for a seconds threads installment. This piece oozes with effort and it was amazing to read. I expected more sex between kara, kyle and katie and less between kyle and Patricia but... whatever :P I would LOVE to see another installment with the familiar aspect further explored, but i realize this was a labor of interest and not a job so i won't hold my breath. However, I would love to read more of you :D

Wow

Fucking brilliant story. Keep them cumming.

hard on fatigue. ...

I am not a usual reader, but after starting on the Island it kept me engrossed for 3 days. Now to find some make up time for my family I have neglected.

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I saw this story when I was younger and ignored it because it was 42 pages long. Now I know what I missed out on.

need more

great story second reading .as in a charles dickens book.....more please

A Fine Fic

I rather enjoyed the story. It could use some editing, there were several typos, and a lot of the slang was nothing I recognize though I come from America as the main character was supposed to.

The tone of all characters seemed to come from the same person as well. Everyone used the same slang, from kids who grew up on the streets to business execs. Possibly something to watch out for in the future.

Otherwise, this was a very good read. Thank you for taking the time to write it, and please keep growing as an author.

great story want more

Is there another part of this story anywhere. Love to know what happens when they leave the island keep going

anonymois

A really fab read, would give it 6 stars.

Great Sory

I enjoyed reading this story from beginning to end. It covered a lot of interesting points that I thoroughly enjoyed as well as it was presented. I have never commented on anyone's story before and was impressed enough to at least give it my personal thank you for an enjoyable reading break from the usual short stories and into something that is more thought demanding other than just sex only. It added more to the story than just the sexual themes. Keep up the good stories and again, thank you. 10 Stars if it was allowed.

Thanks very much...

...for sharing such an intricate, intimate, and lengthy piece of fiction! At such length, it is difficult to know what to say so I'll try simply for one positive criticism and one negative, and hopefully both will be constructive.

Positive: you conveyed intimacy, arousal, concern, and need between Kyle and the various women in his life quite well. Generally both plausible in storytelling sense, and exciting-which is saying something over forty two pages!

Negative: the resolution between Patricia and Kyle felt forced and artificial. They both seem to be rational, communicative people, so it seems unlikely to say the least that with such a profound personal and sexual connection, it's one conversation and that's it. Kyle would not even be willing to try and broaden his sexual horizons? Just try? Patricia would not even be willing to consider a more 'vanilla' relationship? And how long is Patricia to be his assistant, anyway? That's really not a job ambitious, intelligent, hard working people like her have as an end of the line goal for life. Since it's all but inconceivable that she would not eventually resign from that position naturally, why is their attempting a relationship such a non starter?

Anyway, if anything marred your lovely story for me, it was that-and at page 42, it obviously wasn't fatal! And I'm not suggesting a happy ending is required-I enjoy ambiguous endings! I just thought this could have benefitted from one.

Amazing

This definitely needs a part 2. I would love how this can progress after they leave the island

More Please

I absolutely want more. It was an awesome read with extremely hot sex, intrigue, mystery....everything. More please.

dachhundland uber alles

JammyJimmy, ".......couple of nights ago I'm driving these three German businessmen around, and I pick them up from the restaurant and they're all blitzed, right?......."

Fucking best German joke ever! Jack The Lad would be envious.

dachhundland uber alles

JammyJimmy, ".......couple of nights ago I'm driving these three German businessmen around, and I pick them up from the restaurant and they're all blitzed, right?......."

Fucking best German joke ever! Jack de Lad would be envious.

Permitting the Triplets to travel together, no matter how safe the aircraft or ship, is an elementary security breach. If the helicopter went down or the jetboat exploded with the three of them aboard. Such a catastrophic event would play havoc with conglomerate proprietary control structure.

It could take decades of litigation to sort out. As who are the legal heirs of the Triplets, especially as I doubt if any of them have legal wills.

Thanks. It was great. Better than most published novels. Congratulations. It moved from touching to erotic.

good 4 tv

make a series out of this! b a hit

Great story

Must say it was a great read. Very impressed. Just loved the whole story line!

Must read

Fantastic story, kept me gripped every spare moment I had, can't wait for the next instalment!

Moar!

That was some well-written hotness! Sure hope to see what happens in the future.

Part 2

Are u ever going to continue this story on further?

really great!

Loved this. Your characterization is fantastic...so good in fact I found myself skipping ahead through sex scenes to get back to the plot. Which is rare for me!

Awsome!

Not a lot of sex but a super story. Looking forward to future entries.

Don1

this could be a movie yoo.... its so fucking turnt up!

Come on.

I read this story months ago and have been waiting for more of Kyle's story. Surely if you can write a story this good you can write a sequel. Please....

This should be published as a book, great piece of writing

uggg

You soooo need to wright more dont leave us hanginggg

Fantastic

Please write a sequel, I am very interested in seeing more of Kyle's story.

;)

Loved it! Was a very fun story to read...some pages were read repeatedly. Heh!

well done

that was an great read. i have not enjoyed a read that much in 20 years. it was funny, erotic, suspenseful. please me me know when the book is coming out.

I could not put this down!

One of the best stories I've read in a very long time. Exceptional. I've already read a bit about the author and I'm sad to see that he hasn't been online for quite some time. I intend to message him and share the love. xx

could not put it down

wow!!!
Bugger waiting for the book to come out, - when's the movie being released!

Great story but...

I agree that you did a lot of work here and produced a good story.

My only suggestion is that you switch the English to American form if you are going after the American market or switch the characters and locations to British form if you want it to be a British book. It was clear from page 1 that you were a Brit trying to write about Americans. A good editor can clean that up for you.

I'll echo that a sequel would be cool!

More please...more?

Not a lot needs to be added as pretty much every thing already been covered by previous readers, but for me personally this is the best story I've read from this site...by far
Thank you

Absolutely Great!

I haven't read a book in years because of my severe ADD & didn't get through this in a day but I HAD TO finish it!
Absolutely riveting story. Intrigue, sex, murder.... just unbelievable!
Yes please let me know when another comes down the pike, whether a continuation of this one [and I am invested in it!!!], or a new one. It easily could become a series, sorta like the Janet Evanovich ones.
Thank you for this!

WOW

I could not stop reading this. I have read plenty of stories but this is the best work I have read on this site yet. Good well rounded story. The build up and the tease all wrapped in an excellent story.

Death

JimmyJammy fucking died!

hmm

Best fuckin story ever

NOW THAT WAS AWESOME ! ! ! !

WOW I sure hope there is a sequal to this I HAVE to read that one for sure

WOW.................BETTER THAN MOST

This story got me hooked. Nice story line, nothing to heavy, enough action to keep the readers attention and most of all, not run of the mill ' slam, bang, thank you ma;am"
Kudos and waiting impatiently for more.
Thank you for a good read....and enough erotic spice to make my day.

If JJ is dead

22nd April 2014, just read the story, found great, hoping for a sequel but reading his blog about how he is dead and the sheer length of time that has gone by makes it looks doubtful, hope he's ok, but jus like to let anyone who finds this know that it's 2014, and his story is still being enjoyed, still top of the list, and one of the best stories I've read. Maybe it sucks that there isn't gonna be another one, but people like me are still enjoying it, and they will do in the future, thank you JJ for everything, hope your ok, and I hope some one else picks up the story if you don't yourself :')

where has jammy gone

great story wishing there was a part 2 but seems the author has vanished so sad