Threads: The Island

keep on

Perfect. Expecting more. A great read.

new stories

I'd like to know when you post a new book my email is larry.brewer6156@Hotmail.com

Best story

This is honestly the best story I've read, superbly written. Really liked the characters and the little incest relationship going on between the siblings. Hopefully there is still more to come.

Awesome story but apparently dead author

I would really like to see the story continued but since the author has been quiet even on his personal blog since 02/2012 we must assume the worst. Perhaps another talented writer would like to pick up where Jimmy Jammy left off.

Wow this was so well written and such a great read..

I to wish the author would make more.. hopefully the author is just taking a break.

Itz a fav story line and trilling

i wish to more of this this story line like limo fuck or love making with the actrss after few date ....or threesome with both Patricia and Shmi...i will be glad if you continue this story

Incredible

I gotta say. I couldn't put this down. Really well written, and Kara rules!

This story is so well written I couldn't put it down until I finished it! Loved it loved it loved it! There should be definitely a continuation of this story. I would love to know what happens between Ed and Caroline, or if Kara ends up seducing Katie or if the three siblings end up in a threesome, maybe with Patricia included. There are so many possibilities! Keep up the great work!

Awesome

Burned half my day reading it. Couldnt put it down. Awesome storyline and plot, well put together. A+.

Couldn't stop reading

Really great story. Never expected to find such a gem here. Just wonderful. A few things a good copy edit would fix, but so well put together it's publishable. I'd love to know more of their story.

must read

Suggested by a friend, couldn't put it down. Definate must read. Well written, interesting characters..

Well written

This is a wonderful story, actually makes you think you are a part of it all the way through. The best story I have read in here.

brilliant!

Absolutely fantastic! Bit sad you haven't written more though! You need to get back on it and tell us what happens!

You should get this published

Very well written. This should be published, it's a real good story and I don't mean it in a perverted way. 10/10.

Fantastic

I am truly surprised that this story hasn't been turned into a series or at least a mini-series.I know nothing about writing however I can honestly say I didn't want to stop reading.I hope you keep up the writing. these characters are interesting and I hope their story continues.

The other comments mirror mine: when is the next installment of this story, where do I find your books, absolutely amazing, I wish I could vote three times on it, it's that good. Thank you.

Impressive

Stayed up until 230am reading this, could put it down very nice work, re you going to be adding more to this story?

Thank you

Ending little abrupt

Second read until early AM again, could not put it down. I would have liked to see a little expansion of story to NewYork and LA, but great read!
Bayou State guy!

Couldn't put the iPad down

You are a talented writer! A sign of a good writer is when they can make the reader feel like they are really there as the story unfolds. That was the way this story felt to me. Please keep up the writing, I can't wait for a continuation of this story. Now I will have to read any other writings you have produced.

Loved it!

First, the critique: a couple of times you had the wrong character identified; then there were numerous grammatical and spelling issues.
But the story line was fucking awesome! I could see this story being made into a movie itself! You did an incredible job of making the character real. As one other commenter stated, I was drawn into the story often and felt like I was there. I was so hoping that when Kyle and Patricia were in the shower after she had revealed her very kinky side and he put her against the was then hiked her up on himself that, after they finished and he put her down, that he would have slapped her across the face, turned her around, grabbed her ponytail and fucked her again in the ass. That would have put her in her place and made her think just a little different about him and their future. But, hey! It's your story and you did a marvelous job! Thanks.
The worst part of the story for me was that it ended. I couldn't put it down. Now that it's finished, I'm depressed. :-( When is the sequel?
Slobberknocker069

AWESOME.

Bloody fantastic. Great material for a tele movie !!. I really enjoyed the story and I could ' feel ' the characters. Thankyou very much.

Good story, but...

First, good story with potential to be a great one. Couldn't stop reading it. As fap material it was only ok, but that hardly matters with a story like this one. That said, I have a few things to put in the negative column. For a story this long, and especially for one in this particular section, the incest content was woefully lacking and disappointingly tame. Also a few spelling and grammar errors, and some parts felt rushed. Furthermore there was far too much celeb name dropping. That's it for general criticism. Now I've got an issue regarding vernacular. As I understood it the characters for the most part were American. As an American some of the dialogue was a little hard to swallow. Simply put, we don't talk like that. We don't use words like 'dodgy' or 'cinema' or 'cheers.' We say 'shady' and 'movie theater' and 'thanks.' Also there are a few references to what I assumed was British pop culture coming from Americans. I know other people hate us for it but we Americans don't really care about other people's pop culture. We don't know anything about it and we don't want to. We already have so much of our own that it's spilling out into the rest of the world. Like Fawlty Towers. There are approximately 12 people in the US who care what that is and at least 10 of them are from other countries. As far as most Americans are concerned other countries don't have pop culture; they just borrow ours. I know it's messed up but that's just the way it is.

Need more

I read this story frequently because it is such a well written piece of fantasy. I constantly think of possible extensions because the story could go in so many different directions. It's fun to speculate. Are you still writing? DO you write under another name. I love your style and hope that you will do more.

Are you still writing?

I just read your blog and noted that the last entry was in 2012. Are you still writing?

It's long but it makes it all the more sweet

I can't believe so many people actually criticized the length of it.
I mean 42 pages is nothing when you're used to reading series of 10+ books with each having like 300 pages or more ...

also some stories have like 3 pages but 30 chapters which does between 60 to 90 pages total (depending of length of last page)

the only thing I regret in literotica website is that the word-count or page count should be shown first hand. before opening up a story.

I would really have loved to have a following of this story, it is awesome and not just because there's a blonde getting butt-sex xD
you're an awesome writer, managing some suspense. I wish there was a bit more sexual tension between the triplets though.
Thanks a lot for writing this one. really hope you come back & write more.
And whatever happens, don't let the douchebags get to you.

Amazing

I've read plenty of books but this short story was simply captivating. I was hooked and read it for 16 hours straight with short pauses in between. I would recommend this to anyone. 9/10. Good job. :D

Great job!

Probably the best story I've read on this site.

Loved It!

I enjoyed it a lot and i'm going to read it again. I agree that it would be fun to see what happens in San Antonio, L.A., and New York and what Kara and Katie decide to do about Kyle. Write More!!!

nothing but the best!

Best incest story without a doubt... The plot is rich, the characters are perfect and not half baked unlike some stories here. Even if this story is long it really is a must read, thanks for sharing this story.

Absolutely amazing

Such a wonderful story, if you have more then don't hold back because a sequel to this would be great. Hoping to read more soon.

Absolutly fabullous

You definetly have to continue this superb writing

personal best

This has got to be in the top ten best stories on Literotica. What had me wrapped up in it is not really all about the sex, though that is hot. Its their lives and stories that are the thing here. You give them each their own personalities and backgrounds. Their own reasons for doing what it is they do. Patricia alludes to an interrest in bdsm, but does not try to foist her taste on Kyle, but merely to be with him and be happy with it. Kara, Katie, Ed, etc. each have a history and a personality that are very individual. This ranges from an incest story, to mystery, reluctance, and romance. Its a very complete account of a few weeks in the lives of these triplets in extraordinary circumstances. Thank you for this. I'm tired and horney now.

when

when will it ever be finished?

Author mentioned more.

I thought read he would put on amazon, but cant find it.

Well worth a book length story.

LIKE A SEXUAL THRILLER -- ONLY HOTTER

CONGRATULATIONS! You certainly know your way around a sentence. Except for a little editing, this story is a masterpiece. I have a hang-up against using stomach to mean the muscles and tendons which comprise the lower abdomen. Belly is almost always the desired word. Your pacing is impeccable and, of course, your sex scenes are inspirational. I can't wait for another installment. Will it be an incestuous three-way? Will Kara find real love? What steady-state will they each attain? GREAT READ. THANKS FOR SHARING

Please do more

inspiring

Was such an amazing read couldnt stop was hoping it was a bit longer wanted to find out wat happend after the two weeks apart but thats possibly the next one for all i know

wow

Outstanding! A real novel, easily the best story I've read on this site. I have no idea if this sort of story could be published, but you should look into it.
Your editor is excellent. I only noticed 1 typo in 42 pages.

Superb

Can't add anything different to the comments. I would like to read more. Thank you.

Gee,

What a great author you are, keep up the good work.

Great story

Great story, has all the elements of a "Best Seller"... Hope you decide to write more...Cheers..

An outstanding read. This is hands down one of, if not, my most favourite read on Literotica.

wow

excellent story. I hope you publish more stories

Wow

this story kept me losing track of time, totally engaging and addictive
hoping to see more from you soon

Excellent

I have read many novels that were not as good as this one. I really don't see it as eroctic lit just a well written storyand very readable.

Bittersweet

This is by far the best thing I read on here. And while it does't have the best scenes, that's not what makes it good. It's everything else. My only real problem with this is that this is the only thing in the series. He has not posted anything in almost 4 years, and sadly, I don't think that will change. I wish he would continue this story, because if this was a full length book, it would easily be one of my favorite. And I would openly read it because it's not erotica, it would just be a book with some love scenes. And that's coming from a guy, so I am not a fan of trashy romance novels (not that there is anything wrong with then)

Holy fuck

I've always been intimidated by the length of this story, but after finally plucking up the courage to give it a go. All I have to say is that was 7 hours very well spent, the way that this story is written is a perfect blend of romance and tension. Thank you for writing this tale.

Plus the celeb references are a fantastic touch and got me wondering how close you got Charlize Theron and Johnny Depp haha.

What?!

Do more! MORE!! i fucking loved this story. Mr Author Person you have a bloody good talent in writing erotic tales. But one thing is for sure. You need to write more!

fucking amazing!!

Most story's I've read are short boring and the plot is short sited but this story took me a whole week to read between work and a social life I even read it while on the job when I needed to pass time amazing story great plot characters unforgettable and just downright twisted and had me at the edge of my seat every time I read it. I can only hope for a follow up and a series to read if this was a book I would totally buy it thank you for your talent and dedication it was brilliant!!!!

What Happened to You?

Excellent story. Why haven't you written anything else? New chapters of their adventures would be nice. Hope you write something soon.