Threads: The Island

Loved it

Amazing Story, Loved that it was an actual Story (book Junkie) and still erotic enough to be good but not so over the Top just fuckfest that's to long. Really Wish you had more and were still writing.

Wow

Absolutely incredible. I'm a journalist as well as a certified English teachers and your writing is amazing. All the little quirks and jokes hade laughing non stop and feeling emotionally connected with all of the characters

It's too good!

I started reading this story at 7 o'clock last night and finished it at 3:30 this morning. It's so good to find a story which really manages to integrate the sex and the plot, it is really well put together and well edited.

My only complaint is that there is no more!

YOU CAN`T STOP NOW

I expected SEX SEX SEX etc but I got The Real Deal. It was beyond all my expectations. Hope there is more to this story. Please make it continue. Keep up the good work. THANKS AGAIN

Ed is a beast

Ed his joke with describing a wild sexual display, to follow up not knowing why he said it, made me laugh so hard I couldn't read further for another 10 minutes :P
Loved it

Page turner!!!

More a novel than an erotic tale. A great read! Thanks!

more

Movie? :-)

awesome

f***ing awesome really enjoyed it wished it didn't have to end

I want another chapter of Kara Katie and Kyle having sex

Maybe with Patricia too

Fun Story

This story was great and the character development for Ed was awesome. What a piece of work he is. Surely I looked like a retard laughing my ass off, tears down the face, with Ed's verbal antics while reading a story from the Internet!!

Totally rocked!!

Loved every minute of this . Mmmmmmmm had all the elements . Excellent job !!!!

A list of requests.

- Make more stories to follow this one.
- The tape labelled "Kara", add a story behind that.
- Reveal that Katie lost her Virginity to Kyle. Why? Because it would increase enotions and add a special twist.
- Though a large sexual theme is present, the story is great, a bit sloppy with minor mistakes, but great.
- Patricia. Add more story, perhaps her past, and maybe getting engaged to Kyle.
I could add more, but I think that covers a few little peeves.

OK, it took me a while......

but I'm glad I persevered. Well constructed story, could have done with a little proof reading but otherwise a good read.

Would love to find out where the characters go next

Thank you

please finish. best story on here.

Encore, so many possibilities for further development.

Perfection

This was the first story I read on here and this made me fall in love with literotica. Looking for more authors as talented as you :). This story was composed and written well. Add another 60 pages, convert it to regular book-paper, it'd wind up at like 250 pages. Hire a professional editor, publish it and



BAM. Bigger hit than 50 Shades of Grey



I think it'd honestly be a wonderful book, and it would approach the uneasiness the world seems to have with incest. Overall great story. I wish you came back to us :)

5 stars

With love,
King of Spades

Dissenting Opinion

I am posting this anonymously to save myself the condemnation I've seen heaped on reviewers with an opinion not supported by the majority.

I strongly disagree with the general consensus about *Threads.* It is a good story with great moments, but it is not generally a great story. I read it due to it being the highest rated story in the Incest/Taboo category and likely this is the case of many readers. This is labelled the "50 Shades of Grey phenomenon" with popularity breeding more popularity irregardless of quality. Most likely not a coincidence that *Threads* published in December 2011 features a good-looking angst-ridden billionaire protagonist as does *50 Shades* published May 2011. Billionaire erotica/romance is now an established fiction genre -- skeptics check out the Kindle store on Amazon.

For me, the great moments are the two early sexual interactions between Kyle and his two sisters. JJ's writing was masterful allowing me to picture the scenes and experience Kyle's feelings. An edited version of just Kyle's Miami trip deserves five stars.

*Threads* is in dire need of editing for grammar, spelling and word choice (such as use of European slang by American characters). Due to its length and the sex to story ratio, should be in the Novels and Novellas category.

More

Hey if you ever write more for this story PLEASE send it to me. I loved this story and wished it didn't end. So please just don't stop it there. There has to be a part two......hopefully. Email me if you want to AT millercody1997@gmail.com

Well Done!!

Great story! Can't wait to see the movie!!
Not much of a typist, just letting you know how I enjoyed your writing! Please let me know when you write Chapter 43.
Will be looking for more of your work.

Ray (ragar@tampabay.rr.com)

Agree to disagree

I agree with "dissenting opinion" specifically about the strong need to edit for grammar, spelling, et. al. but must still point out to 'dissenting opinion' that there is no such word at irregardless. It is 'regardless". Irregardless is redundant.

great story

I really enjoyed the story, although the were a few errors it still has me captivated until the end. I really hope they're will be an addition to the tale.

When is Part 2 coming

Lots of work and well constructed... Lots of tangents to make an interesting part 2.... It's been 4yrs - what is taking you? I'd even pay to read this....

Couldnt put it down

This was a real page turner. Great characters and the plot was good also. I highly recommend this Story.

continue

this story should continue... so many read this and liked it.. 1000's..

I agree there were quite a few typos. One point you were writing about Patricia and Kyle having a conversation but accidentally wrote that Katie spoke instead of Patricia. Took me a sec to realise the mistake. I really enjoyed the depth this story went into, but also agree there wasn't really enough incest to classify it as incest only, should have been tagged as the other categories. I'd love you to continue you're work.

Great Work!!

Do continue (part2), I really like it.
But being in section incest/taboo, I feel it wasn't up to my expectations.
Anyways looking forward for part 2 (with more incest).

i agree

i agree a follow up part two is needed,, and i have to tell you I loved this story. every spare moment i had to be reading it.. thank you can cant wait to read more.

addicting read

This was a really great story, wish I could give more than five stars. I really hope they're will be a continuation of the adventurous trio. Looking forward to a chapter two

Fantastic

DITTO almost all comments well writtem
N and flowed well hope its not too long before part two arrives. Already looking forward to part three lol

I usually dont read much but this was a grand story

Thank you author for such a wonderful story. And thank you a lot for ruining my 2 days study routine :p

IN LOVE WITH THREADS

I am in love! yes it took almost two weeks to read it due to life itself but I have to say this was the best I've read on this site! I couldn't stop reading and just like season two of any tv show, I am sitting on the edge of my seat waiting to see what can top THE ISLAND. You have me wanting to read this again but I have a wide imagination. Thank you!

Really Loving Threads

I don't really know how you could extend Threads, and its probably better if you don't, but I'd like to read more of it. Kyle, Kara, and Katie. Patricia and Lacshmie. I don't suppose Kyle and Lakshmie ever....? I've had to read on this for two days. Some of it went slow because I eventually had to start trying to keep the characters straight in my mind. At some point there gets to be a lot of people doing different stuff. Which is why I think it probably best not to write a chapter 2. Too much busy-ness and too many characters and the story will just get confusing. I really like this as it is, but the ending IS a bit of a cliffhanger!

Congratullation

wooow that was the best of the best stories;
what about providing the next part of it???
i can't wait to read What Kyle Did in LA...

great story loved every part

The story line is verry interesting and I can't wait for the new chapter's of the story and what might happen to my favorite characters. You came to the top of the hall of fame you can't stop now

One of the best!

I've read this and Hunting the Storm. I gave both five stars. It's way overdue for a sequel to both. These stories are a must read. All the necessary components to keep you looking for the next page. You are a very talented writer. I personally rank you with the best sellers list of any topic I've ever had the pleasure to read. Please JJ...give us a sequal to both.

Reads like a Novel

Arguably the best I have read here! Excellent storyline. There's intrigue, suspense, love, sex. Well done! Easily, a favorite for me. Can't wait to see what happens next with Kyle & Patricia. Hope there is a sequel.

What a find!!

this one surprised me. I started reading thinking it was a 15 min undertaking. Was I ever wrong! Somewhere around the 7th page I stopped thinking of this as an erotic novel. The characters are very well developed. The writer has a future in literature. I read it non stop until I realized It was very late at night. I only wish the characters of the 2 sisters were fleshed out a little more. To me they were the most interesting characters (especially Kara) and yet they were left out of the majority of the story line as it focused more on Kyle. Hopefully we will get more in the next story!? If this was a novel I would buy it. Keep on writing sir!! We will keep reading.

Outstanding

Fabulous. Simply f'ing fabulous. Can't wait for more!!!

Great Story

The one thing that caught my attention as strange was that these Americans used a lot of British terminology, just a bit off.

surprisingly great

The best story on the site! I hope he writes another or adds to this one, would love to see it expanded. I really enjoyed it. Great job!

Amazing story really loved it. Hope they'll be a sequel sometime soon

Best of theot

I actually read this over a couple days and finally finished it. Loved it. Well written, kept me involved and hoping for more. Well done.

great story!

Waiting for the next chapters!

This Is Talent

This is pretty darn good writing. I came for a quick finish and read the whole thing over three days. Nice work! A bit of editing and this would be publishable! My only recommendation would have been to have the climax be a little more climactic. Kyle could have been a bit more instrumental in outsmarting Edwin, rather than just accidentally shooting him dead. And the "bathtime" thing got to be a bit overdone. But, all in all, I was engaged and intermittently aroused throughout. Keep it up!

FOUND A GEM

Story line too good for there not to be more. Kyle, Kara and Katie getting to know each other as siblings but three years of HOT memories still there (can you say threesome). Patricia important character and hope Kyle can get kinky enough to keep her interest. She should become his mistress. Womb bundling referred to a couple of time. Maybe a way to communicate in their sleep. (Twins do it, why not triplets?) Too many storylines for just a stand alone story. Need more.

Excellent Work!!

Kept me interested and engaged throughout. Hoping for more... Great work!

Captivating!

Wow again! This is the second time i would read this story and it captivates me every time. I dare say it is almost flawless, fit to be a bestseller in my opinion. Very well done. Please and Please lets have Threads: LA

I really wish there was a sequel

My favorite part of any story is the journey to the destination. In this case, the development between K and P was probably my favorite part in all of this as it wasn't just them meeting and all of a sudden then just decide to fuck. It was a lot more realistic in its approach when I compare it to other stories that very obviously use erotica as the main driving force of the story rather than an interesting story. This story uses a very captivating plot as the main force and uses erotica as the cherry on top which makes it wonderful to read. It wasn't overly and awkwardly detailed, it was just right.

I'm a little sad when I found out this story was made about 4 years ago which most likely means there won't be any more developments with this story, otherwise you would have already made it by now. What's also unfortunate now is that I have to compare any future stories that I read with something this good. Thank you for this!

Sequel

Such a good story! Sadly like other good writers, always quit without a sequel!

Drama ,

missed an important tag for this story.
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shame about the name "Threads" tried several web searches for other stories imtimated at by the Author in his closing comment.
sadly was unable to find anything associated to this tale published / posted anywhere
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5 stars for a most engaging , intriguing & interesting tale
well written , thoroughly enjoyable , thankyou for sharing it