Threads: The Island

Just wanted to say thanks!

I'm honestly blown away by the amount of comments, PM's, feedback and votes this story has got over the last week, and I wanted to say thanks to all of you.
Thanks for taking the time to read it, the time to comment and the time to vote. For the last few days this story has been sitting in the top five all-time highest rated stories for its category, and I'm very... ummm... speechless! :D

I'm working on the next part of the story, based on one of the ones I've already written with quite a few added twists, some new characters, some old, but it'll mostly focus on Kyle's time in LA, and the aftermath of events from 'The Island'. Expect a few twists, some drama, some sex, some romance and a few surprises, and that's all of a spoiler you're going to get.

Again, if you want to be notified when the next threads story goes online, drop me an email through the contact page of my profile and I'll let you know when it's online.
All the best for the New Year!

JJ :-)

Awesome

Amazing. You are a very talented writer. I'm sad that I reached the end. Please don't stop writing!

rhino76

Great story! I really enjoy the characters and the plot. I'm looking forward to reading the next 'thread!

Best Yet

Well Jammy Jimmy, that was the best story I've read on this site in all the 7 years I have been reading here. Well written, really good plot and compulsive reading. I look forward to more of your stories. Well done on a fantastic piece of work.

Fuck my life - I'll take it

Amazing story there JJ, once I started reading this, I was hooked! Great character development, times you had me speaking or laughing out loud. You could sell this puppy as a porn movie, however they would probably rip the plot to pieces.

Again Job well done!! Can't wait for a sequel.

the end :(

i can't believe i finallly reached the end. i hope you write more soon, i can't wait to read the next story. keep writing!

fantastic story the best I've ever read on this site. keep writing i cant wait to see how the story continues.

Fan-fucking-tastic!! I really enjoyed this story

One Great Writer!!!

Wow! What else can I say? Forty-two pages and I just couldn't stop 'til I finished it.. Now you've got me hooked. I feel like I've actually gotten to know these people and I can't wait to read the next installment of their lives. Please, please continue this.

How did this happen?

I've never been as personally immersed in a story as I have this one and, as I get to the 42nd page, I'm craving more. Tour de Force, kind sir. Thank you for your absorbing work.

awsome

awsome story, please write more

Best story I have read

Wow I cannot beleive what a blast it was reading your amazing story I thought that 42 pages was going to be a bit much but I got so absorbed by the characters that it absolutely flew by. I would really love it if there was a follow on as to what happens in New York and LA and then when they all meet up at the island again.thanks for an awesome read

Five Stars....

You sir have set the bar to a whole new level!

Great Story

Wow, I really got absorbed in this one. Thanks for the read and hope you continue writing thwm like this!

One of the best stories ever posted--realize it takes time to write perfection so will wait with baited breath so see a continuation of the story--Thank You

You are very quickly becoming one of my favorite authors, and you've only got two stories! That's a real shame, as if there were more I'd be reading them right now! Incredible stuff, and you have a real grasp on the small things that keep the story flowing but also feel like you are watching a slice of life. Even without the porn, I'd still be reading!

Keep writing, and I'll keep reading!

Hmmm

I NEVER thought that I would enjoy reading a thread but your story changed it all! This was absolutely great! My sincere compliments!

more

I would like to see this continued

Fantastic

Very well written, creative concept, excellent characters. Thank You

fuck you!

I spent the whole night on my laptop reading this..have literally not had a minute sleep because I wanted to see how it ended.
now I'm sat at the computer and I really should be working, but all my eyes see are pillows and mattresses.. and no trace of a hot girl on either.

anyhoo..sleepdeprived silliness aside, very good job. good tale ( at times somewhat reminishent of a Largo Winch comic..which I guess is inevitable when you've got adopted kids inheriting their father's business empire)..
minor nitpicks with spelling and maybe a point or two that were not really flowing 100%, or a few plot devices that had me rise an eyebrow.. (for instance, personally, I believe the bad guy never really posed much of a challenge, but then, this wasn't a crime story, per se.. so that's ok too)
anyway, it's all largely compensated by some really hilarious moments and good twists..and an overal very nice pace and writing style.
a lot less pussy than I was expecting to find on this website..but maybe that has contributed to making it even more entertaining.
I'm in two minds as to wanting or not a sequel to this.. because I picture that either they get up to some really kinky stuff and delve further into incest/non incest and kinky sexcretary Vs vanilla play.. which would make this veer strongly towards the more erotic side of this tale (which is about much more than just the sex)..turning it into pure wank material, or I don't know what else there could be to keep things interesting, once the relationships are estabilished...
I was however a little miffed when I got to the end...would have liked a few more pages of interesting material...so..as I said, in two minds about the opportunity of a sequel.

all in all however, kudos, and keep up the good job. I'm adding it to my favourites.

A.

Brilliant

Fucking fantastic tale, the characters and plot made this seem like a real book rather than wank material. Apart from spelling mistakes this was excellent, should be published IMO.

Great work

I really enjoyed this. Such a shame it's propably going to take a while to get part 2 but please do continue this series!

WOW

Took me awhile to finish, but it was worth it. One of the best stories here. Very well thought of with great plot and character development. I agree with what others have said about how you quickly changed Kyle and Patricia's relationship. It seems like a poor excuse that they can't be together because of their sexual taste. That was the only negative that I could think of. Well, now waiting for the next chapter, please don't make us wait too long.

AWESOME

I do hope you submit more. You found just the right blend of sex and story. This is one of the best of the best on here!

I will be looking forward to many more of your continuing adventures of the 3.

Wow, got to congratulate you on this masterpiece. Well written with great character development, great plot, and a great storyline. Only thing that I didn't like was Patricia getting cold feet on her relationship with Kyle. One moment she's nervous on how well Kyle's friends will take her and the next she tells Kyle that they won't work out. What gives? I do hope that they stay since it seems like both are head over heels for each other. Keep up the good writing.

Just to address a few of the comments...

There's been a few people have mentioned how they were disappointed that Patricia pulled back from a relationship with Kyle and just wanted to keep it as 'fuck-buddies'.
I believe that every character has to have their own journey, and not all of it can happen in one novel. Patricia's gone from a very submissive women who has participated in sex enthusiastically, but hasn't allowed herself any emotional engagement with any partners. A lot of this is because she worships her job, and worshipped Danny Tripps. Then she meets this guy, is really smitten with him, and it scares her, so she tries to get it back onto a sex-only footing. It's fear and confusion, yet a desire to still have him that generated the whole conversation. She still wants him though. You can see that in the tentative steps of holding hands with him in front of the others, affectionate touches, etc. There's MUCH more to come in her journey in the next novel, but it wouldn't have fit into the space of seven days on The Island.

The other thing is the comments on the spelling errors. There's a few. There's bound to be in a novel of 150,000 words (yes, that's what you read!) Many of the spelling errors though are from the difference between UK English and US English. Words like favourite/favorite or colour/color. Getting Taught/Taut wrong, and a couple of others, was completely my own dumbassery!
Please bear that in mind when you're reading work on this site :)

JJ

Amazed

I can look past whatever errors you had because I loved the story so much! I cannot wait to read what goes on from here!

Utterly stunned!

I thought the story was amazing and hope it continues to follow the three siblings. I'm glad Patricia took a step back otherwise Kyle is tied to someone he can not be tied to publicly. And he can bang the FHM top 100 and his sisters. ;) All the spelling errors don't take anything away from the story but I notice stuff like that no biggie.

I love all Ed's sex names etc. I think his limo driver and Ed should grab Patricia one night she is upset about Kyle banging celebrities. They can collar her and go to a sex club to get there group sex on on. Or Kyle could build a huge sex gym in one of his main housed with a dungeon attached. And big friends and celleb sex parties will ensue lol (just a thought;))
Thank you for all your hard work I can not wait to see what all else you do

Fucking Amazing

Among the best one I have ever read,took some time to finish but worth it, keep on writing..........

Incredible

I love your story. The way you developped the characters is just amzing, a great work of Art. Also the dramatic ending was something nice added to the story.
Now to the unthankful and prick part of my comment:
You mentioned at the start that you have 3 other stories fully completed? Like ready to post, or ready for editing? If the former, when are you going to post it, if the latter, I would like to volunteer for spell-checking.

Dear Anon...

Thanks for your "unthankful and prick" comments.
The stories written are being held until I'm ready to post them. When they are everyone on my mailing list will be notified.
Also, while I appreciate the offer of your spell-checking services, (a) I have no way to validate the quality of your spell-checking ability, and (b) how the hell would I send it to you if you leave an ANONYMOUS comment?
Just comes across like you're trying to be a prick.... again, not something that would ever encourage me to send you anything.
Just saying....

JJ

Amazing

One of the best stories ever posted here! I was hooked from beginning to end, can't wait for the second installment of threads. Keep up the great work!!!

Excellent!

Was hooked up and went to bed at 4AM, only after reading all 42 pages..

I was hooked!

Brilliant story, read like a book. Can't wait for the continuation.

great story

loved every minute of it there was incest but im not sure if it was enough to put it in the incest category but thats not a negative this was an awesome story i enjoyed it alot

Awesome.

This is by far the best writing I have seen on this site in all categories. Your characters are real and alive. Just plain fun to read about and very sexy. Can't wait to read more.

Are you fucking kidding me?

Sorry for that, but how am I supposed to comment THIS at once???
Leaves no other option than going the easy way:
It's fucking awesome!
It's got everything. But you could have splitted this up for sure. Would have been much more easy to pick of after leaving for the night. And nobody could read this at once.
Plus it would have been good for dozens of 5 star ratings, too.

I'd take some more stuff about these guys pretty please... ;-D

Thanks a lot!

greatest story ever

I didnt stop reading till I finished the whole story and it is by far the best story on this site that I have ever read

Absolutely superb. Someone should make a movie out of this!

I really loved this story

I gotta say this is a wonderful work, that is both well written and entertaining. This story would be awesome as a stand alone, but has so much potential for so much more. What I mean by this is there is a conclusion here that could be an ending but there is also so much that isn't concluded and can be worked further. I loved the characters in this you really feel like you are getting to know someone, and you did a wonderful job with giving your readers enough information about the scenery, where you can actually picture it. Excellent imagery, and I can only hope you continue their story in LA and NY, and perhaps even beyond. Keep up the good work.

Holy crap

Holy crap. I don't know what else to say. This was the most amazing piece of writing I have ever seen on this site. I spent all morning finishing this up and wow. I really hope to learn more about Kyle & Pat. I

awesome story

Keep on writing!
reminds me of John billionaire but that's not bad,I like much!!

The Best on Lit E

Fantastic! I read this straight through, stayed up way to late but it was worth it. I'm looking forward to the next installment.

Wow!

Thank you. This was the best thing ever posted on this site. I wasn't able to read it straight through, but found myself thinking about it and trying to arrange some free time to get back to it. I look forward, with great anticipation, to any future writing that you chose to share.

Nice work (and a suggestion)

Very nicely done so far. Premise is reasonably believable, unlike most stories here. Your pacing is good and free of extraneous fluff.

I will say this, however: you need an editor. There are a few typo's misspellings, etc, but also a few other small issues; e.g., paracetamol would not be used by someone growing up in San Antonio, or anywhere else in the US. We all know the drug as acetaminophen. There are few more examples such as this, but the story is still rock-solid.

Thanks for the effort.

FUCKING AWESOME.......

I'd just like to say thanks for posting and sharing this story..... Even if it did remind me of the whole 'Jonothan Billionaire' series of stories by Bluedragonauthor. I hope you continue to develop and explore the characters you have created here. I'd really like to see you explore the relationship between the siblings, but that's just a whole "triplets" thing that I find kinda kinky and sexy..... Although there is some support and evidence to suggest that the attraction and feelings that the three of them share is a reaction to what's termed as GSA.... Or Genetic sexual attraction. It's not unknown for siblings that have been adopted out to find each other and commence a sexual relationship. There are some case studies and even an example made famous in Germany......Just sayin'. It's not like it's unusual for the three of them, considering that they are triplets and haven't known each other all their lives, to find each other attractive. It's also not unusual for them to continue having a sexually based relationship into the future, despite each finding and continuing to have other relationships outside of the bond forming between the three of them. I'd really like to suggest to you, JammyJimmy, to explore and develop this.....It's fascinating and exhilarating to find a 'triplet's' story on this site... Far too rare.


Thanks for posting it!

The BEST Short Story I have ever read

This is by far the best short story I have ever read, on literotica and in life! The plot to the story is both believable and compelling, and I found myself reading this straight through wanting to find out more! Your opening to the story was not overly powerful to start (it didn't jump straight in) yet not boring and long winded either, but rather instilled a hint of curiosity and excitement in the reader for what was to come. The pace of the story is perfect, with the conversations and sequences being lengthy and spaced (respectively) far enough enough to feel as if time were moving at a normal/comfortable rate. However, in my opinion, by far the greatest asset to your story is the emotional level at which the reader bonds with the characters. I can see you have obviously spent a lot of time creating the personalities of each of your characters and have carefully thought about the relationships they would have with one another, and I must say you delivered both brilliantly and credibly. Another attraction which I found of your story which I love are the intimate moments that some of your characters have with each other, most notably Kyle and Patricia. Rather than just create a quick and base sex scene, you have painted a beautiful and passionate build up to the moment of coitus where the readers too can feel the emotional and sexual tension between the characters, whilst the sex itself is beautiful, hot and extremely passionate all at the same time. The greater focus on the storyline itself rather than the passionate love making makes the reader excited all the more and thus gains a greater satisfaction from it. The lack of overuse of sexual scenes makes this a proper short story, and like I said before allows the reader to truly immerse themselves into the story really allowing them to connect with it on an emotional level as if they were the characters themselves.

You truly are a magnificient writer and whilst I would say this story is perfect on its own, and to not write another for fear of tainting the entire series, I am confident that your skills as a gifted writer will not let you down. I hope you will recreate the valued elements of your first story in your next! My only advice is that you create the sequel/continuation of the story with a strong and credible storyline, for a story like this will be hard to top!

Best of Luck (Now push onwards and upwards!)

Michael

The length of the story too is perfect! It is long enough for the reader to truly become immersed and leaving them wanting more :p

P.S. - I'm also loving the humourous/flirtatious relationship between Patricia and Kyle! Yet another trait that should be continued ;)

Fantastic story, looking forward to more.

Fantastic Story

By far the best story on the site. It has everything. Fantastic.