by Alfamann
Wonderful series so glad you finally got around to finishing it. Perhaps you can now publish the long awaited sequel to "The Boys and Girls are Watching"
leaves it wide open for more exciting chapters of Jen, thankyou for a fantastic story, as I thoroughly enjoyed it
That was very very good I for one would love to see more of Jen
That was awesome!
I've read all of these since the beginning and what a story!
I'm glad my first ever comment is going to commend such a great story beginning to end.
Awesome.
You have to keep this story going, there is so much more that can happen
got a lot of milage left in this story i'm not sure about humiliation but thats me and life is full of alsorts of people so thank you please keep writing.
I love the ending - I was hoping for a gang bang, but thats a great start!
So let me get this straight, Jimmy has all kinds of humiliating pussy shots and he doesn't blackmail Jen to give a blowjob to the entire basketball team or have her be in a gangbang and get covered in cum from everyone including her brother, father and uncle. How about auntie going down on Jen or vice versatile? I plodded through all these benign "humiliation" stories and never got to the sex! What a waste of plot development!
You totally could have had another chapter or 2 in this series. Maybe you will reconsider, you know now that it is 5 yrs old or so;-)
This story does scream for another chapter or two. Does Jen continue cheerleading and fuck everybody or what???????????
Fantasy ok but to abusive for erotica. Went way to far, her Aunt should have stopped it. Uncle Jimmy is a pedifile.