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Too slow!
I like the story but its nauseatingly slow! If its going to be a while between postings, can you at least make each post longer. Give us a little more.
Seriously...
The intensity is killing me! I want them to at least kiss, but I'm sure in due time they will get to that. Regardless, that was a great update. I wish it was longer but shows definite growth to the characters. Still my favorite interracial story right now, and I hope to see an update soon.
P.S: When I said "in due time" I meant hopefully the next chapter. But who am I to rush right?
Cass.............don't tease..........
Why are you killing us with the slowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwly increasing sexual tension???? Damn!!!! It's so thick you need a ginzu knife to cut it! They are aware of it....now may we have a consummation? It would make a great holiday gift...hahahaha.
more please
surprise
I think Scott and Star should surprise Manni and take a trip down there to visit her
Short chapters are killing me
Why are all of the chapters so short?
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