All Comments on 'Laurie'
by E.Z.Riter
- 12 Comments
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoThis is a story that can be reread and reread over the years. Have I read this one before? I don't know; however, it is good enough that I may have read it before without realising it.
dwjeanesover 11 years agoNice short story! All the elements blended well, and the story's pacing was good.
Well done.
subman571about 11 years agothe best literotica combines raw sex with real emotion which you did so well. I would love so much more. Bill
QuixoticEroticabout 10 years agoI love older man/younger woman stories.This has always been a fantasy of mine.I can relate to the joy and sexual bliss of finding the older man of my dreams.A very sensual story indeed.
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoYou write very well. A truly charming tale of actual love, not just lust. As an older man with a much younger partner, I have personal experience in such a relationship and we are living proof that it really does work.
Anonymousover 8 years agoAs an older man, I can see this kind of thing happening, especially to a middle aged divorcee.
Anonymousover 6 years agoIn a short one page story, it's impossible to build the characters enough to have a 5 star story. But with "Laurie" it happened.
Paul in Oklahoma
JS_Photoalmost 5 years agoCould have been longer, with more description of events and a slower build-up (where is his daughter and what does she think of the relationship?), but a very good story.
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