All Comments on 'Aunt Laura Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great

Dick Hardening story thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Awesome!!!!

I loved the twist where Aunt Laura tells her story. Great stuff!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great Stories

Just wanted to say I love your stories, the "Wife Tammy" made me cum couple of times, and so did this one. Go on writing, I'm sure I'm not the only one looking forward to it. Best!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

to bad there is no tenderness to this story, it would be so good then. He needs to eat her cum filled pussy after he fucks her then hold her as they sleep,

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
You write an exciting tale with super imagination and new approaches

With respect to your imagination, you truly need an editor to eliminate redundant words, run on sentences, and somewhat clumsy descriptions. You are a superior talent and we hope you contribute a lot to the world of erotic literature.

I, for one, truly look forward to reading long involved sagas from you....... I would have loved for this story to be at least another 3-4 chapters....

taco1085taco1085over 8 years ago
wow

Thank you what a great read, I like how you left it. My mind says he got divorced and they moved in together. Just for convenience sake, his impending divorce and her big apartment alone and ready to help a family member. Now this young lady will be happy for a long time.

PassionateCelinePassionateCelinealmost 7 years ago
Aunt Laura

Fantastic story, hoping there will be quite a few more chapters added ? I found this story quite captivating, to say the least!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
lost the plot

first 3 stories quite good reading but then for some strange reason you wrote number 4. itys as if you got bored with the story and just gave up. so paul got married, how did laura feel abouit that, how long ago, why? chapter 4 ruined a good read for me so only one star

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Amazing.

I love your writing. I hope this isn't the end of Laura's story.

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