All Comments on 'Invisible Man'

PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!! continue. This has the beginnings of a really great story!

Write more!! got my pussy so hot and wet

Just imagine the fun you could have in that situation, the women you could pleasure. Imagine being invisible in the nurses change room at the hospital and how much fun you could have. Half dressed women, naked women, fully clothed women. Looking up their dresses, running myour hand up their legs, eating their pussies, you could have an endless line of women to pleasure. Jump in the shower with them, get them all soapy, clean them top to bottom then pleasure them to your hearts content, and when they tire out, move onto the next unsuspecting lucky woman, hmmmm the change rooms at Victoria's Secret, looks like a good place to start...mmmmmmmm

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thanks for the comments. it encouraged me to write a second chapter which i have submitted. hope you enjoy

This story is great I hope yoy make a sequel to it

This was great but unfinished