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The Family Fuck-Up

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by Anonymous12/25/11

Loved it

I don't usually like drawn out stories but like a good book, I couldn't stop reading every word. Great job.

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by Anonymous12/26/11

That was great.

Extremely well written. I enjoyed it and hope there will possibly be a sequel.

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by digdaddyrich12/26/11

A fantastic storyline

I think there should be another chapter so we can find out what finally comes of the four of them swapping.
Sandra and Frank must have found out that they switched partners and really enjoyed it.

A very good story and hope to see more of the four of them.

Thanks for the good read

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by Anonymous12/27/11

Jessica, Bill, Tom and Samantha:

Another chapter should be written about what happened with Tom and Jessica and Samantha and Bill. Did they continue fucking each other also ?

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by Gizmor02/12/12

Family

Great story. Hope this continue's a few more chapters. Thanks.

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by billyjim5503/17/12

MORE CHAPTERS PLS/ GR8 STORY TY

add a little bit to this / think about it pls

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by sassysasha8901/23/14

How about he explores and investigate what happened between Frank and Sandra while continuing his affair with Marjorie?

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by Ib_Says08/10/16

What ruined this for me was that Tom apparently succeeded in fucking Jessica, that's one time he should have 'fucked up'.
I really couldn't enjoy the story after that, especially since there wasn't a word about any kind of payback or any real consequences for him after having turned them all into cheaters.

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