That was a plot twist I never saw coming. I'm impressed by the very original story line. I want to read more about this interesting family...............
Very good story. A very inventive plot with a plot twist that would grab O'Henry's notice!
just excellent!! i love this tale!! so much fun to read!! more, like this, please!!!!!!
Devious Mind working! This is going to be Great if it continues. Thanks.
wow so didn't expect the twist at the end, very well done thank you for sharing
That was quite the ending. Julia was pretty nasty, and not in a naughty way. 5*
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A winner
That was a plot twist I never saw coming. I'm impressed by the very original story line. I want to read more about this interesting family...............
Quite the Loving Family!
Very good story. A very inventive plot with a plot twist that would grab O'Henry's notice!
excellent!!
just excellent!! i love this tale!! so much fun to read!! more, like this, please!!!!!!
Penetrating
Devious Mind working! This is going to be Great if it continues. Thanks.
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wow so didn't expect the twist at the end, very well done
thank you for sharing
Oh boy
That was quite the ending. Julia was pretty nasty, and not in a naughty way. 5*
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