by psyche_b_mused
I love their relationship and the casual day to day insight. I love the way you write.
wonderful story.. AGAIN! fantastic story written by the most fantastic writer.
It's clear they love each other. Now I'm just waiting for the preggers announcement.
Welcome back. Thanks for the new chapter.
You do such a good job of weaving the story around the characters. The shifting moods feel like water flowing through tide pools, around rocks and up against the beach. The extra dimension of smell reveals emotions in a way that doesn't exist outside fantasy writing.
With resolution to the threats of Stan and Cavello nearing, will there finally be peace and security for a cat and his frail? We still have to find out if Kelly has more powers, too. Plenty to keep us riveted for future episodes.
I appreciate the care you take and am in awe of the skill you show with small details of plot and character development, never belaboring a point just carefully weaving them through the story.
In this chapter, for instance, there in a small thread that adds to Creeds character. It starts with Victor watching Kelly donning a pair of her homemade pink and purple socks and him noting that they are her favorite. It ends with Victor giving Kelly a laptop with a pink and purple lid and him blowing it off as "the closest they had" to what he really wanted.
Little, almost throwaway things like this are peppered throughout your story and add so much richness. Wonderful read.
but thank you for another chapter, this is a wonderful story in so many levels.
All the best wishes to you and many thanks for the enjoyment-
Cheers
Great writing as usual. Glad to see a new chapter. It looks like the beginning of the end for Stan! I hope you will write again soon!
By the way, this is the best story I've read in this site. Ever. I'd just like to know how many chapters do you plan for it to take until the end? Thanks!
Something major is gonna happen soon. Maybe it's just me but the word starts with p and ends with y. And it involves peeing on a stick.