Ahh, our hero is getting some morality and having feelings for people, which is making for a much better story than the simple narrative of the first two chapters.
Sometime a cynic man remeets the main root of his cynism he could turn to a good man, but a beautiful damsel of distress can sppeed up the changeing. I thought it will be a true DGHear story and I do not diapoint. Will the next chapter be in the Romance cat?
Nice work. This is the best chapter posted, of the first three.
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Anonymous12/29/11
Thats more like it.
I left a not so nice comment on the last chapter. I should have had a little more faith in you DG. Next time I'll read the whole story before commenting.
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Now it is moving!
The people are suddenly taking on weight. The author is here....
HAH!
I hope Jenny cheats on him, and he has to watch while holding her hand and jerking off. THAT will teach him to get soft! LOL!!!!
Better
Ahh, our hero is getting some morality and having feelings for people, which is making for a much better story than the simple narrative of the first two chapters.
Nice
I like the spin of the story. Jerrod turns ito a nice guy and I hope to see the happy ending here.
love to see a happy ending also
nice work.
5 stars
Sometime a cynic man remeets the main root of his cynism he could turn to a good man, but a beautiful damsel of distress can sppeed up the changeing. I thought it will be a true DGHear story and I do not diapoint. Will the next chapter be in the Romance cat?
best chapter in the series, yet
Nice work. This is the best chapter posted, of the first three.
Thats more like it.
I left a not so nice comment on the last chapter. I should have had a little more faith in you DG. Next time I'll read the whole story before commenting.
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