All Comments on 'Into the Garden Ch. 01-03'

but please, after you have gained our interest, do finish this story!!!

So much promise here: Clearly defined characters,Intelligent people, the hint of conflict to come, dialogue that seems real and insight into family dynamics.

Too many authors this year began what seemed to be interesting tales and then just dropped from sight. This story earned the five this writer voted it.

thank you

Nice start. Can't wait to read more!!!

Hi, since this is my first submission, the warm feedback is very welcome! To the poster above, I know what you mean about stories getting dropped--I've had a few stories that I've gotten into also that never got finished. So, I wrote quite a bit before I started posting any of it. Chapters 4 to 6 are up today, two more installments are in the queue and I have more written and ready to post. Thanks for the motivation to finish up the story!

--Carlie

Romance doesn't float my boat but this is well written and interesting. Great writers have your sort of talent.